Date: 11/28/16 03:10 pm Title: Time Off
Omg finally!!! I have missed this
Date: 04/23/16 04:38 pm Title: Breathe
I can't believe I haven't reviewed this! So I'm fixing it... Anyway will you continue, please? This waiting for another chapter is killig me! :D
Date: 03/16/16 09:02 am Title: Breathe
Well this whole thing with Georg was confusing. But I guess it was also sort of good since then Tom won't go to jail... hmm, I'm not sure what I think about it, tbh ^^
Buuuuut thank god you didn't kill them! I never thought you would but you know, never trust writers. I don't even trust myself while writing so how can I ever trust someone else? Writers are cruel.
Hah! Poor Bill with Gordon embarrassing him, but isn't that what dads are for? :P
Great chapter once again! Can't wait for the next one!
Date: 03/16/16 08:37 am Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
Oh wow, what a chapter! I pretty much never have time to read anymore, which is why I'm so slow with reviewing, but trust me, I'm still around and when I have time I'll read and review every chapter you post, because in the end this story is way too good to not read.
Did I ever tell you how happy I am that you went back to this banner, btw? I might have, but I'll tell you again in that case. I'm really so glad to see it again, it's absolutely perfect for this story.
(Also I think you should add some Character Death to your warnings, because you know... lots of people are dying :P)
Okay to the chapter. Wow. This was intense, and so damn well written. I don't think I've ever seen a writer describe fight scenes this well, and thinking of how often I pretty much skip them because they're so lamely written it's safe to say that you've got something very special going on here. I couldn't skip a single word!
Amazing, as always! And with such a horrible cliffhanger! Luckily I have another chapter left to read, we'll see if I'll have time to read it now though, it depends when my little sister is coming home. She might be with the bus that comes in five minutes or the one in an hour, if it's the later one I'll be back soon!
Amazing chapter, thank you so much for writing this story!
Date: 02/22/16 02:00 am Title: Breathe
Yaayyy Bill survived! I was hoping he would, though the beginning scene scared me a little!
Date: 02/17/16 07:45 am Title: The Art of War
*does little happy dance*
I knew it !!
Author's Response: Hi! Glad you liked it! *now has more motivation to write the next chapter*
Date: 02/16/16 07:35 pm Title: Breathe
AHHHHHHHH they are fine o/ that's awesome
I really like your ideia :D
Author's Response: They have to be fine! Lol
Date: 02/16/16 01:53 pm Title: Breathe
Good they are in the hospital now :) and that they are friendly - I'm just curios if Bill get angry again, when he remebers that tom wanted to kill im - they are not over that topic - they didnt really talked about it :O
And: Tom is a cutie :D
Author's Response: Ah we have to see in the next chapter won't we? And I am so glad that I can make them act like the world is theirs - FINALLY they can be themselves XD
Date: 02/16/16 01:41 pm Title: Breathe
Good to get all that mystery cleared up! ^^ Well, Gustav already explained most of it, but good to get the *rest* cleared up, lol.
And I think seeing snippets of their lives further down the road would be great ^^
Oh, and oops! I must've missed something. Towards the end, where it says "that they neither would", it should actually say "that neither of them would". Haha, I must have been tired.
Author's Response: Lol I'll fix it up! And yes, now everything's clear, and we can move on with the juicy stuff lol
Date: 02/16/16 12:40 pm Title: Breathe
I have been waiting patiently for this update. It was amazing. I for one would be all over some extras/ Drabble on this story! 😀
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Sorry that it took so long for me to update, life has been crazy. And I will be doing the extras, oh, so many things I want to write!
Date: 02/16/16 10:37 am Title: Breathe
Amzing chapter! I have missed your story
Author's Response: I am baack! Sorry that it took such a long time to update lol
Date: 02/10/16 02:11 am Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
Oh shit! O.O this is bad. This is very bad. On the other hand, stomach wounds tend to take a bit to kill you and with the BKA already there, assumably there will be a helicopter en route to take them to the hospital... Right? Right?
This is really good, by the way! I read the entire thing in like... A day. Hopefully there will be more soon! :)
Author's Response: I have updated! I don't know if you've read the new chapter or not but I'm telling you about it anyways lolrnSo glad to know that you read it in a day! *gives you hugs and kisses*
Date: 02/08/16 02:49 pm Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
Cant wait for a new chapter :O
Date: 01/03/16 03:04 pm Title: The Art of War
PLEASE UPDATE :(
Author's Response: Updated! Sorry it too so so longggg
Date: 12/26/15 08:16 am Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
This is mean !! I love the story. It got all complicated within the course of events and thats why i love it so much. Bill must pull through we haven't even had him return the favor to Tom ;)
Date: 12/17/15 10:51 am Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
Hehe, love these action-filled chapters! But nahh, I just know that Bill will pull through!!
Date: 12/15/15 10:14 am Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
omg like don't stop like that!!!!!
Date: 12/14/15 09:34 pm Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
Because you want us to scream in frustration and have control over us as we wait in hidden anxiety until you post up another chapter..
Author's Response: And I've posted another chapter! Sorry that it took so long!
Date: 12/14/15 05:37 pm Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
Oh God, Bill can't die, please don't let him die :( but great chapter, it made my heart beat way too fast though xD
Author's Response: Ah a little adrenaline is good for the heart XD I've posted the next chapter!
Date: 12/14/15 05:21 pm Title: Trümper, Kaltz, and Schäfer (Part 2)
I love cliffhanger... x______x"
C'mon Bibi, you're way too strong man to die now to everything is over, at least here...
I thought you gave up on this story!