Date: 06/04/15 07:01 pm Title: ...Before The Storm
omg awesome chapter
Date: 06/04/15 06:05 pm Title: ...Before The Storm
Bill should've listened to Tom, then he would know that Tom has really fallen for him, and that he really meant the fact that Bill WAS his target :( But I'm glad that Bill didn't really shot Tom. But great chapter again :)
Date: 05/31/15 05:35 pm Title: It's Always Calm...
Great chapter :) Can't wait to read what will happen next :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And the next chapter is up XD
Date: 05/31/15 05:36 am Title: It's Always Calm...
Beautiful chapter! I was smiling while I read that. But that end...I'm afraid of their conversation. I hope Tom can explain to Bill everything and tell him that he doesn't want to kill him anymore. And maybe...that he loves him (it really could help :) )
Author's Response: I was smiling when I wrote it lol though it got kind of intense when Tom, well, you know ;)
Date: 05/31/15 04:15 am Title: It's Always Calm...
but omg don't end like that D: It was so good i need more!
Author's Response: and I comply to your requests XD the next chapter is up!
Date: 05/30/15 08:48 pm Title: It's Always Calm...
Oh my gosh, I want a cottage too ^^ I've always wanted to live in a tiny house, hehe
Awwww, the plot could've been wrapped up so neatly if only Tom knew that Eric is dead. But that's what suspense is for!
Author's Response: Tom is waaayyyy too caught up with Bill to even realize about Eric lol don't worry, Eric is going to be in the picture soon, along with somebody that was long forgotten: dun, dun, dun, Gustav
Date: 05/30/15 07:51 pm Title: It's Always Calm...
I've read it, I love it, and I'm gonna leave a much better review later on. Just wanted to let you know that this is still one of the best stories I've ever read and I don't mind slow updates because it's totally worth the wait :)
Author's Response: Aaw I'm so happy to hear that! I jolted awake around thirty minutes ago out of shock because for some reason my brain thought that it was a good idea to show a dream where Bill posted a photo of him and Tom kissing on Instagram XD and the next update is fast! Lol
Date: 05/28/15 08:11 am Title: One Rainy Day
New reader here! I'm loving this to pieces! Hope you update soon :3
Author's Response: Hello there! I just updated, go check it out!
Date: 05/26/15 11:07 am Title: One Rainy Day
Okay I'm gonna write you a proper review now! (I SHOULD be studying, but I'm doing everything to postpone it lol. Such a great student.)
Andreas... I dislike that guy more and more for every damn time he's mentioned in this story. He's so... I don't even know the word for it, but I don't like him. At all.
Hah, I disagree with Tom there. If Bill has that messy hairstyle I don't think he looks very deadly at all. With long hair, yeah, with the ugly backslick, sure, but the messy? Naaah. That's more of a cute puppy look imo. Still hate that you cut it tbh, him in long hair was so perfect for his image in this story. But of course it's your story and up to you what you do with your characters.
I'm really glad Tom is alright though! And I'm so curious about who sent Andreas... A part of me wants to say David? I mean, he's already seen how Bill is being less careful now. Or that chef dude maybe (I don't remember his name) but I'm still sort of thinking David.
It could of course be one of the bodyguards or someone we yet haven't met, but somehow it wouldn't fit with the story, I think?
It could as well be Gustav, I guess, but then it means he's working for Bill and that would just be weird, so yeah.. I'll just wait and see.
Love this, and I can't wait for next chapter. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: lol it's okay to postpone your studies (what a great advice, no? XD)rnrnAndreas is like a lunatic, even I don't like him anymore after this chapter. He scares me in a way. Is this what they say when a 'character have a life of their own'? Creepy. And the hair, aww, don't worry, hair grows lol or maybe I'll get Bill to have extensions lolol it really sounds like something he would do XD and as for who sent Andi, well, we have to wait mouahahaharnrnI just updated by the way XD
Date: 05/23/15 05:47 pm Title: One Rainy Day
Plz write soon this story is really good
Author's Response: Hey, I just updated, go check it out XD
Date: 05/19/15 04:52 pm Title: One Rainy Day
PS: Oh crap, I just realized that I accidentally lost the italics in the document while I was editing. Sorry! @.@ But I guess you can just look at the original. Also, the only thing I added italics to was "any" when Andreas said 'any doubts'.
Author's Response: Lol did you email the beta'd one to me? Cause I can't find it in my inbox...wait or maybe my email is acting up again
Date: 05/19/15 04:15 am Title: One Rainy Day
this is so good! loving it so much :D can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! XD
Date: 05/19/15 02:54 am Title: One Rainy Day
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Aw yeah! Thank you for the review!
Date: 05/18/15 08:46 pm Title: One Rainy Day
hehe, I actually like the new banner! And yeah, I thought Andreas was maybe going to kidnap Bill and hold him hostage to get to Tom. Glad we still have some more time for Bill and Tom's relationship to grow further ^^
Date: 05/18/15 05:13 pm Title: Cigarette, Bond, and No Chad
This is the best thing ever😻
Date: 05/17/15 05:51 pm Title: One Rainy Day
Wow, Andreas is scaring the creep out of me O_o Great chapter :)
Author's Response: My intention exactly! He's like a psychopath!
Date: 05/17/15 10:50 am Title: One Rainy Day
I missed it xD
I. Really doubting Tom's ability cause Andreas is being too awesome! Ok I know that Tom isn't in action but xD
Author's Response: What did you miss? lol don't worry we'll see more of Tom in action soon XD
Date: 05/17/15 10:13 am Title: One Rainy Day
Omg! I love the new banner!! *-*and don't worry :)) I just had the first 3 exams of my a-levels and it was sooo stressfull.. I feel you :) and the new chapter is awesome :D I love Bill with short hair 😍😍
Author's Response: Aww thank you! whoa I remember my a-levels, it was such a pain in the ass XD and thanks for the review!
Date: 05/17/15 08:45 am Title: One Rainy Day
omg a update
Author's Response: lol your comment made me laugh out loud XD