Date: 07/11/15 08:12 pm Title: Ineffable
Oh, hehe, there's actually supposed to be two "had"s in the phrase private moment he had with Bill. So it should be "had had". Denoting time in the English language is weird like that. xP
Aww, Bill is so sad! I wish he still had some fight in him! I'd like to see him still being defiant.
Author's Response: Yup, I fixed it already XD I reread your beta and after a while it made sense to me.rnrnOh, about your beta on the next chapter, I laughed so hard at your reaction to Bill being thirty XD I just thought that if he's younger it would be weird if he's the mob bossrnHe would be inexperienced, I think...but yea, kinda weird when you think of the twins being really old XDDDrnrnI'm posting the next chapter right now btw
Date: 07/11/15 05:38 pm Title: Ineffable
Great chapter :) I hope Tom is going to find Bill (or someone else who brings Bill to Tom)
Author's Response: I want them to meet and never part again! But we shall see XDrnThanks for the review XD
Date: 07/11/15 01:29 pm Title: Ineffable
Oh man, I know I've been a sucky reviewer lately, but I have so much going on and I barely have time over for THF anymore. I have been reading though, just haven't had the time or energy to leave you reviews, and I'm really sorry about that. As a writer myself I know how important reviews are.
Anyway, man, this is all so messed up. I feel so, so bad for them. And shit, now Tom's secret is out as well.. Georg knows, god. I just hope that when all of this is over, he won't actually put him in jail. (I will stay positive that both Bill and Tom will get out of this alive, even though it seems pretty unlikely right now.)
Poor, poor Bill. Yes Tom, find him! Find him and save him and find a painful way for Andi to die.
I really hope we'll get another update soon, I'm biting my nails like a maniac here, I need to know what will happen!
Author's Response: Ah it's okay, we have lives out of this site (although I don't mind living here) XDrnGlad to see a review from you though, I've been missing it. I want Georg to be good but I also want him to be bad...we'll see ;D the next chapter is up, whoohooo I'm fast XD
Date: 07/11/15 07:35 am Title: Ineffable
omg more
Author's Response: the next chapter is up XD
Date: 07/11/15 02:45 am Title: Ineffable
Yes, Tom, find him!
I can't wait for more. It's amazing!
Author's Response: I will hate Tom if he fails lolol thanks for the review XD
Date: 06/21/15 09:08 am Title: Ambush
aaaaahhh I missed to read this fanfic!!!! and I missed like 4 chapters I think...I read it all straight and omg this last one was....asfnkfsfjjs I imagined everything like a movie! spectacular! ...shit, they got Bill! Dx can't wait the next chapter, really, it's getting pretty interesting!
Author's Response: lol glad that you caught up! Wow, nobody ever said spectacular to me before, lol, love your review, especially the part where you gotta write gibberish and curse XDDDD the next chapter is up btw XD
Date: 06/19/15 12:09 pm Title: Ambush
Your story is just amazing! I can totally see the action like im watching a movie! Keep up your amazing work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Heyya the next chapter is up! Thanks for the review! XD
Date: 06/18/15 03:57 pm Title: Ambush
Wow! Didn't expect this to happen. I guess I assumed things would proceed normally in the BKA headquarters, and they would maybe make up afterward. Shows how bad I am at predicting things, hehe.
Wow, can't believe Andreas is so invested in this. Usually he and Tom just get hired to kill a person and leave, but he's right in the thick of this kidnapping mission!
Adored all the action, and it was my honor to help phrase it in a more fluid way.
PS: I wonder how Jorg is going to react D:
Author's Response: I like it when I surprise people XD and when I was reviewing the beta'd chapter, I laughed so hard at the part where Tom was holding the bandana. I admit that I had written a sentence that made no sense whatsoever, whoops XD
Date: 06/17/15 09:44 pm Title: Ambush
Oh my God!!!
I just don't know what to tell about this chapter, I just don't know, only AMAZING!!!!! @.@
I've been reading your story for some time now, but I couldn't be quiet this time!
Author's Response: lol I have now found one of the lurkers XD thank you for the review!
Date: 06/17/15 06:05 am Title: Ambush
but omg don't end like that D: Want more!!
Author's Response: the next chapter is in progress XD
Date: 06/17/15 03:59 am Title: Ambush
Tom has to save him!!!
But I'm glad that Georg stopped him from jumping...
Author's Response: I'm so stressed out over the fact that Bill couldn't defend himself lol
Date: 06/17/15 02:23 am Title: Ambush
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! That's unacceptable!!! They cant get Bill!!! *flails* Nooooooooooo. Damnit... They cant have him!! Dx I'm going crazy now!!! God...i love this freaking story... Lol
Oh, congrats on getting your Bachelors degree.
Author's Response: Whoa, whoa, chill XD and thank you for congratulating me *jumps happily*
Date: 06/17/15 02:10 am Title: Ambush
More, more, more... please
Author's Response: next chapter is in progress! XD
Date: 06/17/15 01:56 am Title: Ambush
Omg this is amazing can't wait for the next chapter you are a awesome writer :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! It made my day! XD
Date: 06/05/15 09:59 am Title: Ordinary
Woah woah woah, dont forget to add the OOC warning because this Bill is a scary one.
Author's Response: Hi I just read your reviews and thank you for the compliments! Thank you also for reading this XD looking forward for more reviews *winks* lol
Date: 06/05/15 09:44 am Title: A Frenchman's Haiku
Ooh yes, that Tom/Andi interaction for example was definitely what i needed to hear for now :D I like them a lot, how they are both powerful and have power roles with each other as well. Hmm i wonder who this Count is and if Tom's going to accept such a deal.
Date: 06/05/15 09:32 am Title: Two Parties
Oooh yes already some Andreas and Tom :D I don't know why it interests me so much but i think it's cos like, because of their jobs you think they should be heartless people, but then having a relationship proves the opposite. I mean i know they are "friends with bens" or whatever, but it's still something. Hope to see some more of it. :D
Date: 06/05/15 09:18 am Title: The Art of War
I just started reading this and ooh i am really intrigued! I like it so far. The paragraphs are nicely paced and easy to read with just the right amount of suspense and subtlety. I love reading Tom's in a position of masculinity, so i already like him, even though i know he's a bad guy. I'm also really intrigued by the Tom/Andreas character pairing and how that works into the story. :)
Date: 06/04/15 10:48 pm Title: ...Before The Storm
Ugh, I couldn't breathed properly while I was reading... I's so glad that Bill didn't shot Tom!
I get that Bill feel bertrayed but I hope Tom will get a chance to show him that Bill really can trust him!
Author's Response: Dude, I couldn't breathe while I was writing this chapter! I was so glad when Georg interrupts (well, David, really, but still) XD
Date: 06/04/15 07:01 pm Title: ...Before The Storm
Ah, forgot to say this in the email: Good luck on your presentation! :D *crosses fingers for you*
So intense... =O And lol, British accent Tom. Except his German one is already sexy ;)