Date: 08/01/15 10:52 pm Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
I don't know where to begin first, I liked this chapter so much!! ...the conversation between Tom and Gordon, very revealing. oh, the fight between Tom and Andreas...geez, it wasn't him after all!! you evil, you want us to believe that xD ...Idk, Andreas is still a bit suspicious to me. Hope I'm wrong.
Andreja, shit, she's hot lol (if she's the Andreja I think she is) ...anyway, that bitch is hurting Bill D: ...come on, Tom, don't. be late!!
who's that person at the doorway? o.o ...aaahhh why you just have to leave it there, that's kinda cruel, as much suspense as the previous chapter ;-; ...
*-* that pic at the end!! omg I loved it!!! can't wait the next chapter!!
Author's Response: lol sorry for tricking you guys into thinking that it was Andreas, but I know you love me anyways XD and well, there's only one Andreja we all know XD
Date: 08/01/15 05:43 pm Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
Great chapter, now I want to know who's that man in the doorway? Lol xD
Author's Response: We'll get to that XD be patient, and I swear you'll be surprised XD
Date: 08/01/15 04:34 pm Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
Lol, I can't believe I missed this one: In I did snuck into the mansion it should be sneak.
Oh my gosh, you really got us with making us think it was Andreas! XD And I love the pic at the end!
Oh, and this one too: there was very different reactions > was should be were
Date: 08/01/15 09:59 am Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
Oh my God!!! what a chapter!
Now I got surprised that it wasn't Andreas, and I can even try to guess who the "employer" but I certainly know that it's someone that Bill knows too well!
Top don't take too long please xD
Author's Response: I'm sorry I took so long with the next chapter, but it's already up! Go on and have a read XD
Date: 08/01/15 08:06 am Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
So fucking amazing chapter!!!!! Cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Next chapter is ready! lol
Date: 08/01/15 07:51 am Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
This is so exciting! I totally love it! Poor Bill, though... But I believe that Tom will save him!
Author's Response: Tom should save him! Otherwise, I'm gonna smack Tom upside the head XD
Date: 08/01/15 06:50 am Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
ANDREJA heck yes!!!!!
Author's Response: I LOVE ANDREJA!
Date: 07/19/15 11:19 am Title: Schäfer and Trümper
You're not gonna turn this into a story where they're actually related, are you? D: because then I might cry. For real.
Anyway, wow! Just wow! I have no words right now (I'm also on my phone so the review will be short and crappy and probably with some mistakes thanks to stupid autocorrect)
This was.. intense. What the fuck is up with Gustav? And who wants Tom dead so badly... hmm hmm hmm. I have like a billion of thoughts going on in my mind, but I'm gonna keep them to myself for now.
But damn, I'm so curious about what will happen next! I need more!! Now!! Okay I can actually wait, I'm a patient person, but don't take too long, kai?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Nope. Don't worry lol everybody keeps on asking me this XDrnI'm not that cruelrnSorry for taking so long with the next chapter, life intervenes lol and this one is intense as well...damn what is wrong with me, everything I write comes out intense XD
Date: 07/16/15 06:49 pm Title: Schäfer and Trümper
This is so incredibly well written and full of action that I want to rip my own leg off! This fic is amazing!!
Author's Response: omg please don't rip your leg offrnthanks for the review and also thanks for reading XD
Date: 07/16/15 12:00 am Title: The Art of War
I know this is going to sound so stupid, (specially in this page) but DON'T TELL ME THEY ARE TWINS!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: noooo they're noooootttttt lolololrnthank you for reading XD
Date: 07/15/15 05:43 pm Title: Schäfer and Trümper
Okay I'm confused xD But great chapter :D
Author's Response: lol the next chapter should deal with your confusion XD thank you for sticking with this story so long XD
Date: 07/15/15 04:59 pm Title: Schäfer and Trümper
Lol, holy crap. Wait, now I'm thinking that Bill is adopted, and TOM is Gordon's real son!! Because if Gordon and Bill look nothing alike... (although I'm aware that doesn't always mean something. My sister looks nothing like our parents)
Also, worried about Gustav now :(
Author's Response: Lol Em XDrnI think if Bill is adopted Gordon would never give him the mob throne XD that could be another story altogether where Bill comes back for revenge O_O
Date: 07/15/15 04:49 pm Title: Schäfer and Trümper
What omg I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: it is up, I repeat, it is up XD
Date: 07/15/15 12:11 pm Title: Schäfer and Trümper
No no you can'leave us this way
Author's Response: I have returned with a new chapter that explains stuff lol
Date: 07/15/15 09:23 am Title: Schäfer and Trümper
Did I ever tell anyone that I hate cliffhanger???
I freaking hate it! X.x
"I remember when you were just a baby, Theo."
What the f@ck was that????
Oh my God!
What about Gustav? Oooooh man!
Hurry pleaseeeeeee!
Author's Response: Sorry that I took so long with the next chapter but I promise you that it's long XD enoy, it's already up!rnrnPS sorry about the cliffhanger, I just have to XD
Date: 07/15/15 09:14 am Title: Schäfer and Trümper
Okay, now I'm totally confused... You said they aren't twins...right?
Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Nope, nope, they're not twins lol don't worry XD
Date: 07/15/15 09:00 am Title: Schäfer and Trümper
WHAAAAAAAAAAT OHMYGOD WHAT WHAT WHAT ...ALL THE MYSTERY IS KILLING ME RIGHT NOW! you can't just leave it there ;-;
I'm so curious to know Tom's (actually. everyone's) reaction after this, really unexpected :)
can't wait the next chapter!!
Author's Response: ahaha I think you just won the best reaction in a review so far XD
Date: 07/15/15 07:36 am Title: Schäfer and Trümper
Ummm what the holy fuck of fuckness now?? I hope Gustav is safe!! D:
I cant wait to read the next chapter. Ah! I fell like I might go insane by waiting to read it!! Lol
Author's Response: Sorry that I took so long with the new chapter, I was swamped with work XD
Date: 07/15/15 06:45 am Title: Schäfer and Trümper
What? What? WHAT?????? Do not end like that omg Ö!!!
Author's Response: ...and the saga continues.rnThank you for reading XD the next chapter is up and we have more answers lol
Date: 07/11/15 08:21 pm Title: Ineffable
oh I missed this fic! I'm glad you're back and finally posting a chapter :) ....is Tom meeting Bill's father? o.o *swallows* good luck, Tom!
oh Bill :( poor man, I hope Ton can find him too!
amazing chapter, looking forward the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading XDrnTom really needs all the luck he can get lol