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Reviewer: Starling011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/05/16 02:25 pm Title: The Two

This was incredibly hot and the sweet bit at the end made it perfect. Thank you for posting this.



Author's Response: Yaaaay! I'm super glad you enjoyed this as well! :D Some had said that the fluff in the end was kind of unnecessary, but I just can't write without any fluffiness :P You're very welcome and thank YOU for leaving a review!! :DD

Reviewer: Ema21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/15 05:59 am Title: The Two

Oh boy, PWP here, or what? Haha!! I have to say that I was very pleasantly surprised to find out this was DP!! Agh... this fandom needs more twincest DP, I swear. It's like a dream waiting to happen. This was written well. Not perfect, but good. Made me ache for a bit more plot... lol. Would have loved to know what the twins' relationship was like before adding Andy. I know, I know, totally beyond the scope of the story, forgive me. Lol. Anyway, well done, it's hard writing threesomes, and you did well. :)

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked this! I totally agree with you on the DP department ;) And this pairing as it is doesn't have nearly enough stories, so I decided to write one :P Yes, I assumed this wouldn't turn out perfect either, 'cause I'm pretty new with this whole writing in English thing and unfortunately I don't have a beta reader, but hopefully I'm getting there. Oh yes, unfortunately my one shots are usually almost only PWP and no plot to speak of, but I'm glad you still enjoyed this! Ah, it's not wrong to wonder about the twin's relationship before Andreas, so you are forgiven :D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing :D Keep your eyes open for my future stories, perhaps I'll decide to write another threesome one day :P

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