Date: 01/24/15 12:33 pm Title: Burn in Fire, Burn in Air
No, I liked it. It was just a little surprising :)
Author's Response: Oh, I am glad then:)
Date: 01/21/15 02:57 pm Title: Burn in Fire, Burn in Air
Sad Aww. And a little surprised aw. I didn't expect Bills family to be dead :(
Author's Response: Oh, I am sorry then. I don't always do happy endings, lovely. I am sorry you didn't like it:)
Date: 01/20/15 08:46 pm Title: I'm Okay
I liked it!
Author's Response: I'm glad!
Date: 01/20/15 07:06 pm Title: I'm Okay
That ending though
To be honest I was not expecting that. I was expecting something effed up but that's...wow. But that's a good thing you've gotten me speechless. Lord that was an amazing story. You are just so good.
Its been a while since I've read a story that had a bittersweet ending or an ending that good. I literally spit out my almond milk and kept reading. My mom is going to kick my ass but I've got it all cleaned up hopefully she doesn't notice.
I'm addicted to your stories now. They're drugs for me. I'm always excited when you post. It's like yayayayayayayayayayayay she's posted.
Until the sun decides to allow your graceful posts to be placed upon the site, I bid you adieu.
Kari~
Author's Response: Haha, I think that's good. rnrnI am glad, I wasn't either...I wouldn't want to be that easy to read. I am so glad you liked it so much. I honestly write for readers, because I like to see how people react to different endings,and I am so glad this was a pass. I haven't done a sad story in a while, but it was really nice to do it again. Thank you so much! rnrnI haven't found many with bittersweet endings, honestly. I assume because it's easier to make it sad or happy. You like almond milk /wanders off topic/? She'd kick your ass for spitting out milk? That's a little intense. rnrnWow, thanks:) I love seeing your reviews, and sometimes I just write for you (okay, a little creepy). That's how I get every time I see an update from you, even if I can't/don't read it, because it's so cool to see someone you like doing what they like and seeing what people think. rnrnAw, I hope to see you when the moon shines next time /hint about setting/ rnAlso, have you any ideas you want me to write? I have time to add another story to my writing list, haha. You don't have to, but if you do, just email me:)rnrnBye bye,rnIsa:)
Date: 01/20/15 05:32 pm Title: I'm Okay
Aww :'(
Author's Response: Good aw, or bad aw?
Date: 01/19/15 09:32 pm Title: You found me
Wow...I need to know more :)
Author's Response: I am sorry I didn't get around to updating today. I'll get to it asap, and thank you!
Date: 01/19/15 02:04 am Title: You found me
:-)
Author's Response: :)rn
Date: 01/18/15 11:07 pm Title: You found me
I loved this chapter.
Andy is so mysterious and I'll agree with you in the whole that shit was creepy. There goes my whole no swearing pact. Oh well there's other times to censor. I can't wait to see how this pans out.
Georg was so worried about Bill and it's very cute. He's like a doting parent or like an older brother. I feel like if Georg could he'd tie Bill up and keep him away from all dangerous people.
That moment where Bill wanted to give Andy some of his medicine because he was worried he was hallucinating. I wonder, how did Andy know that boy was there. Did he have a vision or something? Hmm?
Now you've got me thinking. I'm excited for the next one. Can't wait to read more.
:)
Kari~
Author's Response: Thank you. I liked writing it, though it was pretty hard. rnrnHaha, I am glad it turned out as creepy as I had hoped it would. I love horror, though it's more hate when in fanfic form...just the idea of using a real face on creepy fantasies I guess, very hypocritical of me. I can't wait to see either. It's all WIP, if you hadn't noticed, haha. rnrnI got go, sorry for the short reply. rnrnLove you,rnJamie:)
Date: 01/18/15 08:05 pm Title: In the Same Boat
I think this may be one of the stories I ship Andy and Bill in. Besides the three I've written.
I have to agree with Bill, they do need each other. I feel like they only feel like they do because there's something deeper going on. But then again you've written that something is going down. I'm a little dense---okay a lot dense.
I'm glad Georg is so worried about him however. At least Bill had one real friend in his life despite the $#!%. (I'm working on not swearing and that's the reason for all censors. I'll do it in my writing but not anywhere else.) I'm excited to see where this goes.
This is getting so intense and it's got me on the edge of my seat. Like I'm really excited to see how Andy and Bill hook up, if they do. They really do need each other and judging by Bill's passion he'll go to the ends of the earth to keep him by his side.
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
PS: you can totally call me Kari. ;)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I really wouldn't ship them most of the time, but right now...it's suiting, in my mind. I'll have to check yours out. rnrnYeah, I agree too. There new update is almost ready, so if you're still up it'll be here for you in a minute. I mean, it will still be here, but you won't...never mind, I am not talking in a coherent manner. Nah, I am just not that great at foreshadowing. I am sure you'll get it in the next chapter:) rnrnYeah, I guess he really only has Georg sometimes. Now he has Andy, and some other friends in his head. I get it, haha. I swear like a sailor all the time, but yeah, I see why you would want to stop. I actually live in a country where swearing the second language, so, yeah.rnrnI am glad, it's about to get creepy. I hope you are ready:P rnrnXOXOXrnJamiernrnPS: Yay, I love that name, but i've never known someone with a name that would be nicknameable in that fashion:) Kari, Kari~
Date: 01/18/15 05:46 pm Title: Burn in Fire, Burn in Air
Meh Im ok, how are you? That must be so exciting I can imagine if it was Dianna Agron or Perrie Edwards saying hi to me Id go into ardoac arrest and yeah die.... :). And that is sooolkk cool having someone play your music :) anyway I seriously better go becase Im gonna be a zomvie fot school tomoro ;) and I have double history first thing. Dont get me wrong I live history but the subjectwe are covering is soooooooo boring....
Author's Response: Good. Yeah, haha. It's just so...surreal? It's not really anything in particular, I just think she is amazing and beautiful. Yeah, it is...like this is how I want to remeber starting as a musician-with my friends:) Good night!
Date: 01/18/15 04:41 pm Title: In the Same Boat
" no one understands unless they are on the same boat" that is so true.
Awww Bill is just too sweet! You gotta love him :)
My mums getting better thanks for asking :) shes still in hospital the earliest she will leave is 2moro but thats only if she is off oxygen which is unlikely but we saw her today (my sis and I) and it was the first time since we saw her in resus and she looked so small. It was sad cos you always think of your parents of being strong like your rock and seeing her so vunrable anyway ebough of me moaning ;)
How did your performong go? And I cant wait for more ! ;) :) :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I know it too well...I feel like I do anyway, I am probably just whining. rnrnYeah, sometimes though...he is just so annoying, but it's almost cute/almostrnrnOh, that's good! I was worried for her, and I hope she gets better quickly. I know what you mean-When my dad got depressed (well, he has always been depressed) and we started getting in really huge, monster fights and not talking for weeks I felt to bad for him...he just looks so young and stupid, which is a new look when you think of someone as the bug strong guy. rnrnIt went great! We made a lot of money, actually. We also got a permanent place to perform (my mom's friend's bar) and our music was actually played over loud speaker down there yesterday (sadly, we weren't there) . And right now my aunt is filming a music video with possibly my biggest crush, Miss Victory Violet...and she just said hi, and I might be dying a fangirls death! rnrnHow about you? I am writing it write (kk) now.
Date: 01/17/15 09:03 pm Title: In the Same Boat
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/17/15 10:17 am Title: Crazy means Creative
Andy? Like Andy Biersack, Andy? Here we go, I used to ship them but now, ehh. I'll still read don't worry. I don't ship it but I won't hate on it either.
This is a great second chapter. It's long enough to tell a decent story and it's very interesting. Bill has to be so dependent on these medications and now he's got another crazy person in that house with him.
Bill dreamed of him. I love how Bill didn't ask how a stranger knew his name or got freaked out when he asked had he dreamed of him. I'm the type to jump at mice so that is a tad bit too creepy had it been real life and it was me. I'd probably commit murder.
Waiting patiently for le update
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: yeah, like Andy Six Andy:0 Haha, I just started really listening to Black Vail Brides, so I figured why not /shrugs. Any way, why did you stop shipping them? It's odd to think Bill is the older one, haha. I always think Andy Biersack seems so much more mature than he does. rnrnI am glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun writing it, and I need a little fluff in my life after the stories I am writing lately, haha. Yeah, that's it. I don't think either of them are as crazy as they seem, and Bill wants to take care of the younger one because he reminds him of him self and he thinks how hard it would have been for him if he didn't have Georg. rnrnYeah, kinda. In a way it wasn't him, you'll see:) Sorry for being so secretive, I just have some plot twists up my sleeve if everything works out. I liked it too, but really, if you were tired, left your door open, and had drunk a bit, would you be so surprised? I don't think I would be. rnrnLove you, and hope to get it up today!rnXoXoXrnJamie:)
Date: 01/17/15 05:01 am Title: Crazy means Creative
Aww dies Bill have an eating disorder? (I think I got the twins nuddled up on the first chapter opps ;))
This chapter was kinda cute. Ir was sad that his parents died though. I liked the fluffinss. It made
it cute :). Will we being seeing Tom later?
Author's Response: No, not really. Some people just have trouble maintaining an average weight, and so they take meds to help them keep it up. I don't think you did:) You were wondering if Tom was coming in, and I said you'll have to wait and see, I think:) Thanks:) How's your mom?
Date: 01/17/15 01:18 am Title: Crazy means Creative
Great chapter :) I love it.
Author's Response: I am glad you like it, love:) I hope your babies are okay and had a nice holiday:)
Date: 01/16/15 08:54 pm Title: Burn in Fire, Burn in Air
Poor Bill.
I normally don't read stories with trigger warnings but I'll test myself. Just forgive me if it gets a little overwhelming and I stop reading.
This was an amazing first chapter. I like the characters so far and the description of them. Bill sounds like he's got a lot going on and I look forward to later chapters. Georg is a good friend for asking if he was okay. To be fair I'd most likely do the same minus the pills. I'd rush over and like coo and $4!%.
Who's the mystery stranger? Is it the guy from his dream? So many questions! I'm excited to see where this goes.
Gypsy mother? That must've made for one interesting childhood.
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: Yeah, I feel bad for writing him this wayoUornrnI normally write them, I am sorry, because they mean a lot to me. Someones 'trigger' is still someone else's reality, and I hate to leave that out. I myself have OCD, panic attacks, and used to eat in a disordered manner (nothing, basically), and now that I have better control over those things I kinda 'test' myself by writing them. It's okay if you stop, I understand. It's smart, I do sometimes. It's why I don't read sad stories. rnrnI am glad you liked it though! I will actually starting writing another chapter and another story today. The new story is based of the fact that Bill was harassed by both students and teachers when he was in school, so that one also might be a little rough. I am glad you liked them:)rnrnIf you email me I can tell you, but I don't want the answer sitting in the reviews...it doesn't really matter at this point, but I still like the secrecy. Yes, he is and he isn't. rnrnYeah, like mine, haha. rnrnXOXOXrnJamie:)rnrnPS: really, just email me and we can talk. I would be interested in being good friends, if you are.
Date: 01/16/15 01:10 am Title: Burn in Fire, Burn in Air
I'm definitely curious for more :)
Author's Response: I am glad!
Date: 01/15/15 04:22 pm Title: Burn in Fire, Burn in Air
Haha. Is Bill on the couch??? Thats a funny way to meet! Unless its like a burgerlar! And dw abou the other story :)
Author's Response: No, you'll see who it is:) Not a burglar! Thanks:)