Date: 02/25/15 05:26 am Title: Hidden like Stained Glass in Black and White
That was a lovely lovely fic. :-) A bit rushed here and there for sure, but I felt that was meant to be. :-) Because to the twins in the posoition they are in, everything happening would feel rushed, wouldn't it? Anyway, I adored this. Amazing little fic showing there is hope no matter how dark your situation is. Random note: Gustav as a bartender had me grin. He is my favorite, so I'm always tickled to see what writers do with him. :-) Thanks for a lovely read! I'll red this at my community TokioHotelSlash.Livejournal.Com!
Author's Response: Thank you very much, again. Yeah, I thought it was meant to feel that way, so I am glad it did. It was a rushed situation, in my opinion. I am really glad to hear you liked it! It makes me so happy when someone likes my writing:) I am glad you found moral in it. I love Bartender Gustav too-He's my favourite member as well most of the time, and I love seeing how he is portrayed. I was thinking of giving him a twin too;) rnrnThank you! You are too sweet!
Date: 01/16/15 08:43 pm Title: Hidden like Stained Glass in Black and White
I simply loved this ending.
Believe me when I say it's nice to see happily ever after. There's a reason people like fairytales. It's the one place where things are perfect yet you know it's not like that in real life. It's like you can imagine yourself in that place.
Tom has kids and named one after Sam that's precious. So cute. I'm like so happy that he's happy. I'm happy both twins are happy and safe. I could imagine it'd take a while to come to terms with the new living conditions. I'm glad Georg was there to help. Good big brother.
I'm also really glad that Bill finally felt comfortable coming out to them although Georg knew it doesn't matter. That showed me that he finally was comfortable with his new family. That form of comfort takes a while. I told my parents I'm Pansexual and they were accepting but it took a while before I felt safe. My mom has expressed her uncomfortable feelings for LGBT members before and she was like whatever as long as your happy.
This was a excellent ending. You got to see that everyone had a nice life and that they're living it. To me epilogues are necessary because you wanna know what happened to all the characters in a story.
You're so welcome for being a support. It's nice to leave reviews on stories that show such amazing excursions of talent.
PS: My bro Joey responded to an email for me so if you see it, it's all him. He reads my emails and likes to respond when he's mentioned.
Teehee
Karila
:)
Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad you do! rnrnHonestly, I don't like fairy tales. I don't like fully happy endings, or unrealistic beginnings, but this story needed one. I don't believe in happy endings, sorry to be a downer. rnrnWe all knew he would, one way or another (I am so sorryxD). I thought Sam deserve to be remembered. I am glad you liked it, and kinda saw it how I intended it to be seen. Sometimes people read my stories in a way I would never have guessed, and while it's amazing to see your idea interpreted it's also a little discouraging since you didn't get what you wanted across. rnrnYeah, that's what I meant by the laugh, not that he was being mean. I am glad I made him do it, because I really did think about giving it a very sad end. I am glad I didn't. I am bi, and while my mom knows she says it's a faze and the worst part is I don't know if it is, since I am the one in it. I can't look out of the bubble I am in, since I am in it. It's my world. I am glad you mom was so sweet, honestly. It's amazing. My mom has a lot of les friends, haha. rnrnThank you. I don't normally do them, but this time it needed some kind of assurance. rnrnThank you again, anyway. You just made my day, againxD I have whole weeks saved up from your words, haha. rnrnYeah, I got it. It's very sweet of him, and he sounds amazing. I always wanted an older brother, but really, I don't like my emails being read, lol. Guess I am glad I don't have one. rnrnLove you,rnJamie:)
Date: 01/16/15 05:27 pm Title: Hidden like Stained Glass in Black and White
Ohh thats cool! I cant sing or play an instrument. Well bkt I play very limited guitar eg I have had lessons since I was 12 and I still suck. And when I was (much) younger I tried. I repeat TRIED to learn the violin. Except my teacher was more intrested about bragging about his son abd daughter!
Loved the chapter. Seriously Im happy that that they had such a nice ending. They deserve it. In a different story I would have diffent opionion but in this I liked it.!
Thankyou (again :)) for the shout out! I take it you want to be famous? My sister does to. But me? Nope! I think I want to be a pilot atm. Except I have to take physics and maths at alevel. And I first have to get AA in science abd A ib maths #nothappebing. Good luck though Im sure you'll do great!
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, it's a lot of work, but I have been learning it all for about two years. I have 'performed' a lot in that time, for family and friends, and at jams and such but never like this. We made 35 dollars, haha. I tried violin too (my mom wanted me to)I hate it. rnrnI am glad you liked it, and that my ending didn't annoy you. rnrnYou're welcome, really. I shout out to anyone who means something to me, and lately you two have really given me a lot of support and good wishes. It means a lot. I don't want to be famous, per se, I just want to make music. If being famous is how I can live doing that, then I am willing to give my self to a public if that's what they want. It's complicated, because at the same time I don't like personal questions or people digging in my things. You should go for it, I wanted (and still can) learn how to fly a plane. It's amazing!
Date: 01/15/15 02:56 pm Title: Daddy does It
Yeah, it was some review I replied to. who knows. I think I typed it out when I was VERY VERY tired. (My dad woke my sister and I up at 2:30 AM. Cos my mum was re admitted to hospital and they thought she was gonna die. She's gonna be fine hopefully) Anyway yeah, half the stuff I've done recently makes noo sense LOL :)
Author's Response: Oh, okay. You should go to sleep then babe, just take a nap. I am sorry, really. I hope she is okay!
Date: 01/14/15 02:48 pm Title: Daddy does It
Meh, thank you though. My best friend like to read.... Alot so I tell her I 'read' just not that it's fanfiction.... Tbh she probably would know what it was ;)
Author's Response: Is this to me?
Date: 01/13/15 04:32 pm Title: Special Circumstances
Ohh sounds exciting! Does your sister like tokio hotel? Loved the chapter. Poor Bill and Tom. :( lets hope they get treated right with sam! I think they will......... :)
Author's Response: I am glad. Yeah, she loves them...more than I do, probably, because she crushes on the boys while I kinda just appreciate them, but I don't love them. I love P!Nk thoughxD I think they will, too.
Date: 01/12/15 11:47 pm Title: Special Circumstances
I really enjoyed this chapter. It's really showing what they've gotta deal with. The pacing actually benefits the story because it adds to the intensity of the chapter.
They were truly hurt and not just physically. The emotional abuse they had to live with is almost as bad. Poor bill is passing out and having panic attacks because of Jörg. I'm glad Tom stepped in as guardian for a moment. Bill needed that.
At least they won't be with strangers. It's great they'll be with someone that truly knows them and respects them. They'll truly be cared for. The main concern for me was who would they be with. I feel like this person is the best one. He cared when he was just a bus driver now he can really help them.
Those boys will get help and I'm glad. Bill and Tom you guys can stop worrying a little now. You've got someone who loves you and because I'm a cornball, Love Who Loves You Back, teehee
#LWLYB
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: I am glad you liked it! I think the next one will be a little more fluffy, since we need a break from tears. I am glad the quick speed didn't look sloppy! rnrn----rnrnYeah, you see it. I am glad, I was worried I wouldn't have over shadowed it enough. I think it's a good thing about having a twin (I have one); The fact that you can step in for each other. When I can't handle something, my sister will step up and be able to work it out when I take a break. rnrn-----rnrnYeah, I made them be with Sam because a) he was playing a good role in the beginning, and b) because there aren't enough people of colour or really any differences at all on here. There are barely any malti-cultural stories, and that makes me really sad. I grew up in Africa, and Europe though I am American and I wish that people would recognize that there are more people in the world than they see in their life everyday. rnrn-----rnrnHaha, I love your cornball-ness, so keep it up;) rnrnXOXOXrnJamie:)
Date: 01/11/15 02:45 pm Title: We'll be Fine
They got away! I'm so damn happy for them like tears are literally falling. I'm so happy they'll be safe...hopefully. I'm just glad they didn't get caught.
Bill is like Tom's guardian and that's precious. Tom's older and Bill is the one who makes the decisions. I think Bill shouldn't have to worry about them not liking him because he's gay. I mean he should and at the same time he shouldn't.
They need to be in a home that will nurse them back to health. They need to be trained to eat all over again. I'm glad they got food and shelter and I'm even happier that Jorg is going to trial. They better lock him up for hurting my babies.
This wasn't rushed at all. I could read it very well and I followed it very well. I know what rushing is (I commonly commit that felony in my stories) and this wasn't rushed.
Can't wait for that update
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: Aw, I am so glad you are happy! I think I made enough people cry, haha. Wait...now you're crying for happiness? Nooooo! I am glad to since I nearly thought I might make that happen. rnrnYeah, I think there are enough stories where Tom is in charge simply because he is older when really it always seems like Bill is the one pulling strings. Yeah, it's sad that that is a realistic fear. I hate it. rnrnYeah, I am working on creating the perfect (or nearly) home for them. I think it will be original, so I hope you don't think it seems strange. It will be up soon, I think. He will be locked up, that's one thing I can promise for sure. rnrnOkay, that's good to hear. I commit the same felony in most of my stories, so it's kinda a fear of mine. rnrnThank you!rnrnZXZXZXrnJamie:)
Date: 01/11/15 12:19 pm Title: We'll be Fine
Ahhh. Walking on the highway! Exciting bur very dangerous. :)
Date: 01/11/15 09:15 am Title: We'll be Fine
Ahhh. Walking on the highway! Exciting bur very dangerous. :)
Author's Response: haha, it is hilarious that that's what you find exciting:)
Date: 01/10/15 03:38 am Title: Daddy does It
Its sad that there into like drinkig and drugs bit then again all these girls in my year get high during schhol time! Bit I like the story :) Its nice when you read something you kniw like when there in their early teen cos most of the stories I read are like them in their 20's and Idk what thats like, cos Im not 20 ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, they have more or less stopped now. It must be easier some times to not be fully there, don't you think? I am sure they aren't high all the time, surely someone would notice. Yeah, haha. I am there age now, so it's easier for me to write in the past.
Date: 01/10/15 03:33 am Title: Daddy does It
Awww Poor Tom poor Bill! There scared its kinda sad! Loved it so far:)
Author's Response: Aw, I am glad you liked it, love. You are such a great reader;)
Date: 01/09/15 11:30 pm Title: Daddy does It
Is it wrong that I kept shaking my head no as they spiraled deeper into that abyss of darkness? My babies....my poor babies. I hate their dad and I want to choke him out. How dare he allow my babies to starve?! They need nourishment and now they're skin and bones. He needs a lethal injection of mercury. Like he needs to get minimata disease and die.
I'm glad they quit drinking. They were too little for that. It's sad to see teens that young doing those things. I honestly cried a little. I'm a very visual person like I could imagine it and it just brought me to tears. Their dad must be doing something to them. Like they feared being unclothed but if they're really skinny it's probably shown very badly on their stomachs and chest.
I love your ideas. There is nothing like this on this site. Your writing style is unique don't change it. It's not like normal Fanfiction, yours is more raw and real. It's not like I'm reading a fictional story it's more like I'm reading someone's actual retelling of true events. I've tried to write realistically but for some reason it comes out more awkward than realistic.
Can't wait for le update.
XOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: No, of course it's not wrong. I was nodding as I wrote, so it's only right you counteract it with shaking. I love writing about them when they are about my age (14), and I am so happy when people like reading about kids that age. Most books around are about kids, or older teens. I would rather you wait to choke him until I've finished, but then he is all yours. I can't wait until he is gone, though I am sorry to say it might take a bit. He is just an awful, and confused man. I commend you on your creativity in planning well deserved doom, haha. You actually scared me a little. rnrn I think sometimes drinking is a good way to get out of it if you have too, but only to an extent. Kids like us (yes, I am referring to both my characters and IxD) shouldn't drink, as we have more addictive personalities at this age. I am so sorry I made you cry...I think I should warn you that it might get worse in the future, but it will get better, I promise. You'll have to wait and see, but yes, something is going on. rnrnYou are seriously making my day. I was feeling really crumby because we ran out of easy vegan food other than straight veggies (I know, first world problems), but your review and honesty really made me cry and laugh. I will try to not change it, but I think it changes a lot depending on the story. I am a really blunt person though, so yeah, it might often come across that way. I'd be happy to write a one shot with you, if you ever want practice:) You seem really cool! /goes and clicks contact buttonrnrnI'll try to update soon! rnrnXOXOXrnJamie:)