Date: 01/14/15 01:31 am Title: My Perfect Nowhere
Haha thanks ;) this chapter was so cute :)
Author's Response: Welcome. I am glad you liked it:)
Date: 01/14/15 12:53 am Title: My Perfect Nowhere
Thanks for le shoutout!
Perfect ending for the perfect story. I'm glad Tom and Bill get their perfect ending. I'm the queen of cliffhangers and rarely do happy endings. I don't know maybe it's because I've not experienced something with a happy end.
Tom x Andreas, first time I've read anything with that pairing written in it. I'm honestly interested in seeing if anyone else has done this. Treehouses, kisses, beer, and love sounds like a great day.
Oh I know what games they play (No, get your head out of the gutter, Karila). They're simply wrestling--they're screwing. I couldn't hold it back le sigh. I fail. Meep.
Natalie x Bill...the reader in me is happy he's found someone but the fangirl in me is telling me to rip her ear off. To tear it off and shove it where the sun doesn't shine. $&@!
Okay, that cute little baby moment is just awwwwww! They'll love their baby sister to death and that's good.
Tom told Bill what happened and I'm so glad. I didn't want Tomi to hold it in and get depressed and hurt himself. Billa and Tomi can do anything they're legen-dary and ah-mazing
It's sad to see it end but I'm okay with that ending. It's really ambiguous and leaves the guess work to the reader. Those are the best endings to me. It will end however I think it should which makes the reader enjoy the ride even more. They can be messed up like me and imagine everyone dead or be nice and imagine everyone happy living in sugarplums and gumdrops.
Loved it
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: You're welcome! You really saved this story, and I am so glad I wrote it. rnrnAw, you are too sweet. I still feel like something is missing, but I can't guess what. Like, I forgot a piece in the puzzle I made.Maybe Grace and James should have come in again? Yeah, I used to do a lot of really short, really sad, cliffhanger stories when I was sad. I would just spit out bloody nonsense, but it would have people crying...I guess we're a little bit alike in that way. I hope you learn ahppy endings. rnrnTomxAndreas is actually not that rare. I still don't know who Andreas is...so I kinda made it up as I go along. From what I can tell he has blond hair...all I know, really. My favorite story, Teen Angst is TxA, if you're interested. It's pretty sad, though. rnrnKarila! That is not what gentlemen do behind corn! /face crumples/ yeah, totally what they are doing...dirty mind, stop it! Bad head! Perverts unite?rnrnNataliexBill...again, I have no idea who Natalie is. Do you? I just chose a random pairing. Why would you do that?! xD rnrnI hope they do...it would be terrible id they didn't. I think it will be great, and she will be such a strange little child, and it'll be perfect. rnrnYeah, that's why it happened. It would ruin the story if secrets were kept. rnrnI am glad you don't dislike the ending too much. I like endings that spell things out most of the time, so that you know everyone is okay and well, but I often write the kind that is more about looking through a mirror at a blurry picture and deciding what you want to see. I hope you didn't really imagine everyone dead! That would ruin it, haha. rnrnThanks, and I hope we keep up!rnXOXOXrnJamie:)
Date: 01/12/15 10:34 pm Title: Welcome Home
Too many emotions! I should have waited a little bit to read this now I'm crying all over again. Damn emotions! Gosh, I'm literal mess right now.
Okay, this was really good and it's nice to see the twins together and being twins. Tom is obviously hiding something he got happy too quick. It's like human instinct to make others believe you're okay when you're not. We cry in the shadows and smile in the light.
Bill stay concerned. There's something up and it's good you've realized it. I'm happy they've got their farm and I know Bill will gel yummy treats for us all to eat. Now I'm hungry, veggie bacon time.
These characters are just so real. My gosh, each chapter gets more and more realistic that I just don't know what to do. I'm crying because of how good it is. It's crazy but that's the honest truth. You made this little sociopath cry and that's not an easy task.
I'm sad to see it end but it's a genuinely great story. I am enjoying this ride and can't wait for the next update.
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: Oh, I am sorry...I keep making you cry. I am sorry! I hope you feel better, and just email me if you want to talk about anything. rnrnI am glad it was good. I feel like I have a lot to live up to now, and so each chapter is a new way to fail, haha. Yeah, I think you are right. I don't know what though, so I'll have to think on that. I hope to have a new chapter up today. That's beautiful, by the way.rnrnHaha, have yo ever had veggie bacon? It's disgusting, haha. Before I was vegan I had cheese bacon, but even that was gross...it's just not right. rnrnI am glad, since my characters are my pride and joy. I am so happy that I could write something that meant something to someone other than myself, but I am sorry for making you cry. To be fair, it seems like I am not the only thing factoring into your tears right now. I hope you feel better and your drama ends soon. rnrnI am glad, and I have more planned, and new stories so don't go anywhere;)rnrnXOxoxrnJamie (the killer author...I have been accused of reader-murder)
Date: 01/12/15 01:43 am Title: Welcome Home
Awwwww! Poor Tom
Author's Response: Yeah...;;
Date: 01/10/15 02:05 pm Title: He Made Him do It
Jörg is dead! (Does happy dance and then stops because well it's rude, duh!)
Tom is finally going to be with Billa. They hurt my Tomi. I need a list of names and addresses because they all need to die by torture. I'll pull out their teeth and rip off their fingers. Then I'll leave them to bleed to death while I watch.
I knew that Tom was there by force. Like there's no way he'd just like remain there when he isn't happy. He had no choice but to stay. Those bastards tried to split up my babies. Bill is so distraught and confused.
Him calling Zach dad was so cute. Like I kind of squealed a little. All Bill needs now is to heal Tomi. Tom needs his family now more than ever. Is it wrong that I feel like Tom didn't really care that his dad died? He might've a little but not a whole lot.
Now that Jörg is dead, I can rest easy knowing that Tom will be with Billa and they can be brothers again. I know that this isn't over though and I have a feeling the real feels are about to attack. Lots of feels are going to attack. (Grabs tissues.) I'm prepared. I'm prepared for the feels.
XOXOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: Haha, you really get me. I was doing a bit of a happy dance as I wrote it too /scary authorrnrnYeah, they will. It's going to be quite complicated, I am sorry to say. I am so sorry, but the addresses are with the police right now, so I cannot hand them over. If we ever need a bounty hunter I will call on you, though;) rnrnIf you look at it from Tom's point of view, he may not have been looking at it as force. From what we know now, it might have mainly been his conscious. You'll have to wait and find out. I can promise that they will both be more or less fine:)rnrnAw, I made someone squeal! I don't think it's wrong, not at all. It might be a bit more of a relief than anything else. rnrnHaha, yeah. This is just the beginning. I have a lot of drama and feels planned, and some messy things to ensue. You are literally the best reviewer I have ever had. I love hearing you and your (slightly) scary opinions. Thank you so much for taking your time to review~!rnrnXOXOXrnJamie:)
Date: 01/10/15 12:29 pm Title: He Made Him do It
Awwww I had a tear in my eye...... ;)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you, I think:)
Date: 01/09/15 10:24 pm Title: Burnt Potatoes, and Pizza
This is a really interesting story. Don't quit it. I find it really engaging and I'd love to know what happened to Tom. I haven't reviewed because I can only do so from my phone and sometimes that doesn't work.
Bill is really cute in this story and I'm sorry that he has to go through that. Tom is hiding something from him and I'd really like to know what.
That phone part worries me and I'm hoping nothing bad happened. I'm glad they found a place and I'm glad some things are working out. I think that once Bill warms up to Zach he'll call him dad.
I want Tom to move in with them so badly. Like I'm worried for him. His dad might hurt him or something. I don't want Tom to be hurt and then shy away from his brother.
Please update because despite the lack of reviews it's truly amazing. I understand that nobody responding to the content can be discouraging or maybe it's something else that's changed your mind about this story but I'd love to read it until the end. I'll even review as often as I can.
XOXO
Karila
:)
Author's Response: Oh, my...now I am embarrassed. I will of course continue for you! I will try to never leave a reader hanging if they want to know what is going on. I am so sorry I scared you. It's not that you didn't review, I was just sad and busy, so I clicked the button. I will start again ASAP! rnrnThank you, haha, I am actually bassing him of myself, so it's a compliment to us both;) I will reveal what soon enough, I promise. rnrnI think you are right-Once Zach earns him, he will.rnrnI'll update, I promise. I hope you don't mind, but it might take a couple of days or even a week between updates, but I'll be as fast as I can. It was a lot of things that made me want to stop, but you encouraged me again, so I'll go on. Thank you:)rnrnXOXOXrnJamie:)