Date: 08/16/15 04:19 am Title: You really wanna hear one of my songs?
The sweetest chapter so far. Little by little, we discover the guys' true self and it's clear Tom is the most vulnerable one, who hid behind a bold attitude to protect himself from life. I like how he discloses part of his past and dreams to Georg, a calm, caring person he came to trust. A rainy night with candles is the perfect scenario for a new, strong bond blossoming between the two co-stars, exactly as the gentle kiss and Georg's smile are. Also, the lyrics of the song explain Tom's feelings toward the other male, although the latter is probably too infatuated to get their full meaning. Speaking of the song, is it by you? Last but not least, thanks so much for your kind words, honey :)
Author's Response: Yay, you're back! *hugs* I'm glad you can see the guys' relationship developing. This story would not work if you could not see them as anything other than casual lovers. Although, it is difficult for me as a writer to portray that bond growing in a believable way. It's much easier when I write twc to show such a bond but harder when you have two people that are not related and have not known each other for that long. And yes, those lyrics are mine! :) Thank you for your lovely review. I'm so happy to have you back again <3
Date: 08/15/15 05:35 pm Title: What is she doing here?
Oooh noooo 😑 bills here...
Author's Response: Yes, she is but she's not so bad! Unless she finds out about their affair, that is... Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/15/15 04:35 pm Title: What is she doing here?
I've been waiting for Billinda to show up, and she didn't disappoint, but poor Georg. I bet he really does feel as if he's nothing to Tom now. I can't imagine how this will all work out in the end; someone's going to end up heartbroken...and I'm hoping it won't be Georg. But then Bill seems nice too and it's not fair she's being cheated on. I guess Tom's the bad guy, but somehow I don't blame him. I know, I know...I have to be patient and wait and see. But...poor Georg...
Author's Response: Yes, it's a very complicated situation and it not as simple as picking a side. We don't want any of them to get hurt but unfortunately somebody probably will by the end, or even more than one person. Thank you for reading and empathising with all my characters :)
Date: 08/07/15 06:24 pm Title: Since when do you wax?
Love it d84;
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/04/15 02:05 pm Title: Since when do you wax?
Really enjoying this story, just don't have a lot of time to review lately. I want to read that scene...Tom watching Georg fuck himself with the dildo. How will he be able to watch something so erotic and not want to stick his dick in Georg? Waiting for the next chapter after they've finished filming for the day. Love, Helen x
Author's Response: Hey, Helen! Lovely to hear from you again :) So glad you're enjoying this story. Oh yes, if Tom saw that sexy scene, he would not be able to resist, that's for sure ;) Hope you like the next chapter, even though it may not be what you're hoping for... Thanks so much for commenting!
Date: 08/04/15 10:29 am Title: Since when do you wax?
personally, i've always thought spitting was gross, not swallowing. swallowing's just so much less messy.
anyhoozles, woo hoo for bathroom shenanigans! love that gustav "caught" them.
now pleeeeaaasssee let them fuck!
Author's Response: Haha, they will, just not for a little while yet! There's gotta be more drama first ;) Thanks for reading.
Date: 07/27/15 11:38 am Title: You really wanna hear one of my songs?
Hey, whataya know, I ran through a storm just the other night. But I was trying to find my dog. Hahaha.
I love this story. I get excited everytime I see a new chapter.
Youre awesome, I can't wait for more
Author's Response: Oh, I hope you found your dog safe and well! Storms can be scary. Thanks so much for your review :)
Date: 07/27/15 07:04 am Title: You really wanna hear one of my songs?
Awww, this chapter's so, so cute!!!~ X33 I love this fanfic so much, I think it's the best TORG ff I've ever read. Love it, love it, love it, can't wait for the next chapter, you're doing a very great job. ^_^
Author's Response: Hey, thank you very much for the lovely compliments! I'm so happy you like it. I'm hoping Torg is gonna be the next big thing after twincest, since Georg and Tom know what it is and joke about it on TH TV and instagram LOL Love those guys :D
Date: 07/26/15 08:54 pm Title: You really wanna hear one of my songs?
okay i think my favorite part was tom calling geo a hot water bottle. but i loved all of it. sweet non-sexy times are just as important as the sexy ones.
Author's Response: Right you are, elvisfan. Gotta be a good balance of the two to keep things interesting! Thanks for your comments :)
Date: 07/13/15 03:54 am Title: You want me now?
I've never thought that reading of a guy pleasuring himself all alone could be so funny and entertaining haha
Georg has been described as tidy and meticulous and he's like that even in this situation! OMG, this is priceless. He plans every detail, slips again into Miles just to not let his shame take over and ruin his accurate research on the matter. I'd pay gold to see this Georg in the shop. Considering his speculation on the battery-powered thing, he's lucky to know how Tom's dick really looks like, or else he could have easily wondered if it was bright blue LOL
Georg knows his co-star so well that when he imagines his voice, he also makes it speak as Tom would do. Only Tom could say something so romantic as “Ready for this, G?” XD I appreciate such details a lot; not only they're funny but they make the characters consistent, whether they're there or not
Author's Response: Haha, I'd pay to see Georg in a sex shop too, although that's something you'd expect of Tom, or Bill. Poor G is a bit clueless when it comes to such matters! And yeah, even imaginary Tom stays in character XD I'm glad you find it all entertaining and funny :) Thanks for your review and I hope you are enjoying your holidays!
Date: 07/08/15 06:14 am Title: Did you go back to her trailer?
Sure, smelling sheets is not professional hahaha
And... his grandkids? Again, I'm picturing Tom in a hospice: “Hey, kids. Find my denture and I'll tell you the story of the giant wasp chasing me down” LOL
I like you make him gesture as he talks, because that's what he does in real life :)
Now, this chapter confirms what I felt so far about this story. Tom is in love with Georg and vice-versa... but to me your powerful writing tells something different. All I perceive is a major crush on both sides, a friendship that becomes stronger by the day and makes Tom drop a bit of his badass attitude, in favor of the best part of himself but this is not love. It's consistent with his age and curiosity; he's kissed a guy in the past, he finds his co-star very attractive, he's at ease with him because they spend a lot of time together and he experiments something more but that's it. Probably Georg is not in love with Tom either, although all his mind can focus on now is him.
In my opinion Tom is truly in love with someone, but that's not Georg....
Possibly it's my imagination, but I love how your stories make my mind wander!
Author's Response: Haha, Tom in a hospice again XD He is very expressive with his hands though, isn't he? :P As for love...maybe the guys aren't in love now but this could change. Or it might be exactly what you say, a major crush on both sides. It's interesting what you think. When I published this story the first time with different characters, everyone who read it thought the guys were falling in love and should be together forever and nobody really cared about the girlfriend so it's nice to have a different perspective on things! It also makes me think more about how this is going to end and whether I'll rewrite the ending entirely differently... Thanks for your detailed thoughts, as always :)
Date: 06/27/15 11:13 pm Title: Did that bother you?
good! this was good too!
this is why i shouldn't review on my phone!
Author's Response: lol
Date: 06/27/15 11:12 pm Title: You want me now?
omg i was so sure geo would open his eyes and see the real tom standing at the foot of his bed!
but this was god too. lol
oh and the name "georg listing, petrified sex store novice" sent me into giggles.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for your review! Poor Georg would have had a heart attack if Tom was really there watching XD
Date: 06/18/15 01:44 am Title: Did you go back to her trailer?
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 06/17/15 08:25 pm Title: Did you go back to her trailer?
aaww, i love jealous possessive tom!
Author's Response: Me too! ^^
Date: 06/17/15 09:54 am Title: Did you go back to her trailer?
Love itd84;
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 06/17/15 05:18 am Title: Did you go back to her trailer?
Jelaous Tom was cute :D
Author's Response: I know, right? Thanks :)
Date: 06/10/15 03:00 am Title: Have you ever been involved with two people at once?
Hey, it's so mean... and wonderful to introduce Ria as the cleaning lady *evil grin* (and she must be that because nobody else would be surrounded by cleaning products hahaha)
Ok, she can smell Georg's cologne but no, Tom, not even guys from CSI can tell whose person is the semen they find on bedsheet just by looking at it. Omg LOL
Just be careful NOT to mess up your life even more by having an affair with the maid too. I think Billinda and Georg are enough for the time being (and for the sake of your life, Rina bwahahahaha)
Author's Response: I needed a female to play the role and Ria seemed to fit perfectly, haha! Tom's a bit paranoid about his sheets, isn't he? XD But yeah, Tom doesn't have time for boning the maid, no matter how attractive she may be. Thanks for the review!
Date: 06/10/15 02:35 am Title: Wonder what Gustav would say if we improvised THAT during a take?
Georg couldn't think of something smarter. Tom as Tom may flee from the trailer and make his co-star the most miserable guy on hearth. This way instead, he allows himself do what he longs for. In a way, it's not HIM involved in the situation; it's Joe, the submissive geek. On the other hand Georg is very self-confident because that's what Miles is. But eventually Tom's cocky attitude takes over again, and here we go starting a conversation about bites and canines and blurting out something like “Hey man, you scared me”. What's more romantic than that in the middle of a sex performance? Haha
That big baby is so adorable. I hope Georg won't have to regret the words that escaped him XD
Author's Response: Georg can't hold the character of Miles in real life for very long; it's just not his nature. But he does it long enough to yield results! And real sex can be rather awkward so I want to show that, instead of everything happening perfectly, like it does in movies. Plus, it makes for humorous reading lol. Thank you again for your comments - I appreciate every single one <3
Date: 06/06/15 04:21 pm Title: Have you ever been involved with two people at once?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks very much :)