Date: 09/27/15 05:42 pm Title: Why the hell did I ask Tom Trumper on a date?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/26/15 08:25 am Title: Why the hell did I ask Tom Trumper on a date?
augh! i loved this! glad tom isn't any worse off than he is, and yay they both have the feels for each other. got a little happy when tom basically offered himself up as dessert, but yeah. not the right time.
*braces self for gustav's wrath*
Author's Response: Tom as dessert - yum yum! ;) Glad you enjoyed that chapter. Btw, I have a new one up now. Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 09/19/15 03:20 pm Title: Who said we’re on a date?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for being such a loyal reviewer! Means a lot :)
Date: 09/19/15 12:12 pm Title: Who said we’re on a date?
holy shit! *grabs alcohol and bandages* georg to the rescue! i hope tom appreciates him, considering this was all tom's fault anyway.
oh yeah. boyfriend?
and please don't let them get in trouble!
Author's Response: Tom is a trouble maker, isn't he? And Georg puts up with a lot from him! Don't worry, they won't go to jail XD Thank you for being one of my most faithful reviewers. I truly appreciate it :)
Date: 09/12/15 04:43 pm Title: What if Bill and I broke up?
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 09/12/15 10:38 am Title: What if Bill and I broke up?
i reeeeaaallllyyyy liked this chapter! stoned tom is adorable...and perhaps a little horny. then geo's all noble, not wanting to take advantage. and omg, something tells me the oh-so-casual "what if i broke up with bill?" question wasn't all that casual!
but 7-11 hot dogs? really tom?
Author's Response: Haha, I wouldn't trust those hot dogs at all but when you've got the munchies, you don't care! Yeah, Tom's playing with the idea of breaking up with Bill, but whether he actually does it is another thing altogether. Thanks for reading!
Date: 09/08/15 02:44 am Title: Which celebrity do you have a crush on at the moment?
All caught up now...man, I jus love this so much!
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry if the chapters have been too long but sometimes I just can't shorten them >.<
Date: 09/06/15 02:49 pm Title: Which celebrity do you have a crush on at the moment?
hhhhoooollllyyyyy crap!
*hugs tom tight*
Author's Response: Yeah, the poor kid has been through some shit in his life, hasn't he? Thanks so much for reading, and caring about my characters :)
Date: 08/30/15 02:35 am Title: Have you honestly never been dumped before?
Totally in love it! You are doing a very good job, this fic is amazing. The way you write it and the way you structured it and generally the idea of this fic are perfect! Keep going cause you're amazing. 😊
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! Glad you like it. And I'm posting a new chapter now :)
Date: 08/29/15 01:32 pm Title: Have you honestly never been dumped before?
ha! friends? wonder how long this will last!
Author's Response: Not that long, probably ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/29/15 12:14 pm Title: Have you honestly never been dumped before?
Awh :'(
Author's Response: Yeah, it's a bit emotional. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/29/15 11:59 am Title: Have you honestly never been dumped before?
I've already started the countdown...just how long will it take before one of them cracks? Or both? Just as long as it takes you to update? Or will you manage to keep their relationship platonic for a few more chapters? Can't wait to find out. Love Helen x
Author's Response: Well, you will have to wait and see! But hopefully, you enjoy it either way :) Thanks for your comments!
Date: 08/23/15 12:04 pm Title: Is Georg punishing Tom for Billinda showing up?
hmmmmm...cue the angry make up sex?
Author's Response: Hmmm, maybe not? I don't wanna be too predictable, now ;)
Date: 08/23/15 10:59 am Title: Is Georg punishing Tom for Billinda showing up?
Oh, my god, so dramatic! :D Loved it!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks Blue_Dragon! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 08/23/15 07:24 am Title: Is Georg punishing Tom for Billinda showing up?
Mad as he is, Georg forgets a very important thing. It's true that Tom enjoys sex with him a lot but sex starts from the mind and, in this case, the younger boy's mind is all on Billinda, not on him.... Then, no matter how great sex can be, it's even greater with the person you're strongly connected to. As it's been pointed out in previous chapters, Tom and Billinda ARE so connected they're like one being.
It's good that, eventually, Georg realizes Billinda is not standing between him and Tom; she was already there.
It's so sad to see Georg suffers so much and I think his decision to end the relationship with Tom is the wisest one... if it lasts. Due to his young age and confusion, Tom is acting like a major jerk. First, nobody can “make” him cheat on his girlfriend; Georg offered him a chance that he hasn't turned down. Then it seems he's already eager to go back to his relationship with his co-star and he's mad when the latter doesn't show up... but, hell, Billinda has just left!
Probably it's me but I notice the last scene they shoot sort of mirrors the situation between the two actors. They share a secret friendship, the little sister (like Billinda) is unaware of what crosses Joe's mind and Joe worries about Miles hurting him. Ok, in the script it's hurting him with a gun but a person can be hurt in many ways.
It's true it's impossible to hate on Billinda. First she's not girlish (I can't stand that kind of girl) and, well, after all she's Bill XD
Author's Response: Very true what you said about sex starting in the mind. *nods sagely* And also true is Tom and Bill's connection. Even Georg can see how strong it is and that's why he's making the choice to end their affair. But yes, Tom is too eager to get back to how it was and can't understand that it's not as simple as that. Teenagers. They don't think things through properly. It's all me, me, me. (and I know because I once dated a nineteen year old guy. It didn't end well) :P And dang, I didn't realise the last scene mirrors Tom and Georg's relationship, with Bill as the innocent little girl. How could I miss that?? Damn you and your insight! LOL No, seriously, thank you for pointing that out. You're an awesome reviewer, have I ever told you that? :)
Date: 08/23/15 07:03 am Title: Is Georg punishing Tom for Billinda showing up?
Oh fuck :))))
Author's Response: Oh fuck, indeed ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/19/15 09:26 pm Title: You really wanna hear one of my songs?
Great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/16/15 11:04 am Title: What is she doing here?
A decent guy would have been a bit more discrete in his display of happiness when he saw his girlfriend, but not Tom. I hate how his insensitive actions hurt Georg, but it's fully consistent with how he is. Tom has been unable to manage his emotions from the start and making him act like a gentleman now would be out of character and ridiculous. Huge congratulations for the description of Georg's reaction. He's an actor, and I bet it helps him keep his composure, even if there's hell going on in his head. His pain is so real and so is his irrational fear of Billinda, induced by her stunning and unexpected looks. Billinda's character is wonderful. She's even better than I expected because she seems very self-confident but, at the same time, not girlish nor self-conceited at all.
I appreciate to no end how you managed to write a dramatic chapter mixed with lighthearted moments, like Tom's top (you really bought it for me? No. haha), Georg outdoing himself with the chocolate and the thoughts going through Georg's mind about girls going on a rampage.
My feeling that Tom considers Georg as a friend, good companion and occasional lover is still there.... Billinda is his true love, in the best meaning of the word. And now, whose side am I on? Both, I'd say, unless Billinda proves to be a drama queen, slipping in some terrible scene you can see in old, sappy movies.
Author's Response: Tom is a bit tactless and insensitive when it comes to Georg's feelings, that's true. But he's young and just doesn't realise what he's doing or how much his words and actions can hurt someone else. Perhaps by the end of all this, he will grow up and learn better. Yeah, Georg is an excellent actor and if he had any other kind of job, he wouldn't be able to handle things as well as he appears to. I'm so happy that you like Bill's character! :D Female characters are tough to get right but it really helps that she is Bill. If she was an OC, I highly doubt people would tolerate her :P Hm, I don't think there are any lighthearted moments in the next chapter as it's all dealing with the fallout from Bill's arrival and everything is tense. Billinda as a drama queen? Perhaps. Perhaps not. I refuse to say! Thanks so much for your thoughts. Your opinions really help me craft this story, just so you know :)
Date: 08/16/15 07:57 am Title: What is she doing here?
aaawww! i wanna hug sad geo! can i?
Author's Response: Yeah! Let's hug him together ^^
Date: 08/16/15 05:05 am Title: Since when do you wax?
I can't help giggling when the two have sex. They always throw in some awkward bits of conversation (it doesn't vibrate hahaha) which seems not to fit in what they're doing but instead, it's perfect for how they are. When it comes to sex, they're two big kids still amazed by what their bodies can do and feel.
I like it how their roles keep changing. When on set, Georg is ruthless and dominant; when in private it depends on the situation (sometimes he's still the most self-confident of the pair, sometimes he isn't).
What they sure have in common is the lingering sense of guilt towards Bill.
Every time Gustav appears, he's truly priceless LOL
Author's Response: Haha, well, men are basically just horny teens in a hairy adult body XD And real sex can definitely be awkward. You can say things that are decidedly unromantic as you're trying to have an enjoyable time without accidentally hurting the other person. Fanfic tends to portray perfect sex where everyone says and does the right thing but it's so not like that in real life. I wanted Tom and Georg to act realistically so I'm glad it's working. Ah yes, Bill inspires much guilt. If only she knew... And you know what? I'm having so much fun writing Gustav! I keep wanting to give him more lines :D