Date: 02/01/15 03:28 pm Title: Why don’t you just talk to him?
augh! tension! i can't stand it! although the idea of tom standing there in a hoodie that geo just bust a nut on...kinda yum.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, kind of a nice thought indeed ;) Thanks!
Date: 01/31/15 08:55 pm Title: Why don’t you just talk to him?
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 01/20/15 11:17 pm Title: You’ve really never done anything with a guy before?
Loved it!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you; hope you like the next part (it's up now)!
Date: 01/18/15 08:28 pm Title: You’ve really never done anything with a guy before?
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 01/18/15 04:20 pm Title: You’ve really never done anything with a guy before?
:)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 01/18/15 03:59 pm Title: You’ve really never done anything with a guy before?
Making a grimace of both sardonic humour and exasperation, Georg remarks, “Well, that’s great. I guess neither of us has any idea what we’re doing here. I was just improvising and hoping you couldn’t tell.”
“I couldn’t tell,” Tom reveals, suitably impressed. “Not at all. You seemed to know exactly what you were doing, especially when you started undoing my belt. Damn. Ever heard of asking first?”
best part of the chapter! i loved those lines, and i love all the sexual tension which i'm sure will just build and build until they both explode and fuck each other senseless!
right?
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, the sexual tension will keep building, that's for sure ;)
Date: 01/15/15 04:52 am Title: Did that bother you?
I like the Bill/Tom pairing but I must say it's very nice for me to read a FF with a different main pairing.
I like how the characters are introduced; dialogues, glances, postures and mutual interaction speak for them and provide us with a clear picture of their nature. Gustav is serious yet patient (I love this professional guy who has to cope with stray Georg XD); Tom seems a complex character; a boy with a cocky attitude who thinks he's more self-conscious than he really is; I don't say more because I hate spoilers. Speaking of Tom, I appreciate he's not stereotypically sporting his dreads, which would clash with the role he's playing in the movie. Attention to detail is very important, in my opinion.
I'm so, so happy to find your trademarks here too which are an amazing writing style (the novel starts as a script and it continues as a FF) and funny moments. Georg's embarrassing memories of his teenage acting, his disbelief in the club and the Elven prince, OMG! The Elven prince is priceless hahaha Not to mention Billinda (pure genius); I can't wait to meet her.
I'm sorry my review is so impersonal; my mind is quite a mess, you know.
P.S. Interesting, yeah. An Asian guy met in a club. You... you... you devil! LOL
Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much for your awesome first review of my new story! I'm so happy you appreciate the little details and that you like the total and complete change in plot/pairing from my last fic. It's nice to work on something different! I hope you will like Billinda, when you get to meet her, even though it may not be for a little while yet. Don't apologise; your reviews are always so lovely and I enjoy getting them! PS. ...I actually didn't think about that when I wrote it. Another one of those subconscious things you picked up on that I didn't notice. That's why I love you ;)
Date: 01/02/15 05:08 pm Title: Did that bother you?
Fantastic! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you - I can't wait to give you more!
Date: 01/02/15 06:01 am Title: Did that bother you?
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 01/01/15 06:17 am Title: Did that bother you?
I love it already. And so far ist not complicated at all.
Author's Response: That's good to know - thank you!
Date: 12/31/14 01:56 pm Title: Did that bother you?
billinda! *snickers*
you're back! and with torg! *feels faint*
i love the whole "story within a story" you have going on here. can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Yes, I'm back. With torg, just for something completely different! Glad you're liking the story so far and thanks for reading :)
Date: 12/31/14 11:36 am Title: Did that bother you?
This is going to be one interesting story lol. I'm already hooked and awaiting for more. Awesome, awesome, awesome chapter
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the next part too :)