Date: 05/01/23 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/05/21 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was really really good. Can't believe I haven't read it sooner!
Date: 01/02/15 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, I loved this. Your insights into Bill's mind are perfect, and I love the twist of Tom being an officer. I know this is tagged as finished but I'd love to see more.
Date: 01/01/15 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1
I was very surprised to learn that Tom was a cop!At the beggining, before I started to read, I thought it's gonna be Bill who's corrupted but it was Tom. Very good story!
Date: 12/29/14 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! Amazing! *_* This is such a good story, you HAVE to write a "to be continued" thing, really. :D I would really like that. ^_^
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it, thank you! I might, but we'll see :D
Date: 12/29/14 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow you must write some more fics like this definitily!!! :-) a secuela or something please!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Maybe, we'll see... ;)
Date: 12/28/14 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw no Tom, that's so fucked up man! At the start i was hoping Tom was gonna save him and get him out of there, but then he just went ahead and broke him :( Evil fucker! And then to bring in the other policeman just too late....
I really hope Bill is going to be okay now! This could easily have a sequel to it where Tom changes and Bill falls in love with him. Somehow.
The writing and the pace was really good!
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your review! I know, I'm not used to portraying Tom as such an ass, and I haven't decided yet if there's a sequel or continuation to this. But we'll see :-)
Date: 12/28/14 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Idk what to even say...this was fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving a review, I appreciate it! :)
Date: 12/28/14 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was really, really good. It's not easy to impress me, I'm such a picky reader, but this had me stuck from the first paragraph.
I really like the ending, how Bill was rescued from that place but how Tom wasn't some saint who would make him happy ever after, that made me love the story even more and I read it all once again before writing this review.
Bill's fear was extremely well written, hell I could feel it myself, and I felt so, so bad for him.
Great story! I loved it!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you liked it, and that it kept you interested :D Jag såg att du är svenska, själv är jag norsk. (Lol, couldn't help myself - I love your writing!) ;)