Date: 12/22/14 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
I’m more nervous than Bill for their next encounter. They’ll have more time to talk, to get to know each other, hell who am I kidding, they are adults, they can go to bed immediately. Or maybe not. I prefer to trust in your writing skills. I’ll be anxiously waiting for the next chapter.
Author's Response: maybe not immediately, but they will end up in bed at some point. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/21/14 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Tom... Hot!!!!!! And yeah right. It would be helpful for Natalie's sake? Psh!
Author's Response: ikr??? who does tom think he's fooling?
Date: 12/21/14 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
I was scared to read this after I read Lessons Learned but damn!!!! I don't care anymore if it breaks my heart in the end, I love it!!!
Author's Response: i applaud your bravery! and i can't promise no heartbreak...but please stick with it til the end.
Date: 12/20/14 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Guys aren't subtle and neither is Natalie. I love how Tom's so smooth but he'd obviously told everyone to look out for Bill.
Author's Response: i'm rather fond of natalie in this story, lack of subtlety included lol thanks for reading!
Date: 12/20/14 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
I like that itīs going slowly... I love Natalie already and I would like to know more about Tom!
I canīt wait for next chapter!!! :)
Author's Response: more tom to come! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/20/14 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wooo! They talked!!!
Author's Response: and perhaps they'll do more soon! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/20/14 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was hot...all of it.
Author's Response: THAT was hot? wow. you're easy to please. lol thanks for reading!
Date: 12/20/14 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
nice :) i guess it's going somewhere between them :)
Author's Response: perhaps...and for how long? thanks for reading!
Date: 12/20/14 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
I know I've told you this before but I will keep telling you anyway, I LOVE THIS! I love it so much! Natalie is the sweetest and Tom is just so damn hot. DJ Tom, I like that a lot!
And of course, Andi, I love him so much, best friend ever! "“What do you need us for?” Andi scoffed. “Chaperones? Go flirt with your DJ on your own.”" yep, I need a friend like that haha!
LOVE THIS! And I will impatiently wait for next chapter!
*sits in corner*
Author's Response: *brings you more snacks* i love that people love andi!
Date: 12/18/14 08:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Food coma....aaahhh..... So Bill is going to tease Tom the DJ? Good! The club scene was nicely realistic, all sweaty and loud. Waiting for the next chapt!
Author's Response: bill? a tease? never!
Date: 12/18/14 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just loved the way you introduced the new lyrics into the chapter. Tom is a sexy DJ and Bill has got his inspiration back, that’s great. I would love to see if Bill wants to go and have lunch to the same restaurant again. Kisses and thank you for the new chapter.
Author's Response: actually, he won't be going back to the restaurant. he will, however, go back to the club. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/18/14 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
Fantastic!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 12/18/14 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
:-):-):-)
Author's Response: ;-)
Date: 12/18/14 11:47 am Title: Chapter 2
I knew it! I knew that DJ will be a Tom! :D
I hope that Bill is going to go there more often! :)
Author's Response: he'll show up a few times, yes. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/18/14 09:27 am Title: Chapter 2
I love this chapter even more this time, man it's so good! We've barely even met Tom and I already love him, I was sitting here clapping my hands in excitement when Andi caught him at the restaurant, and when they saw him at the club, and when we first met... okay, I'm not really gonna go any further because I know more about your characters than your other readers, BUT I LOVE THEM ALL ALREADY.
Oh and I LOVE the way Tom changes music to communicate with Bill. LOVE, LOVE, LOVE it! You, my friend, are a genius!
*sits in corner, waiting for next chapter*
Author's Response: *brings you snacks while you wait* and yeah, try not to spoil everything for everyone else! ;)
Date: 12/18/14 12:35 am Title: Chapter 2
Love love love...especially the song choices with the actions!!
Author's Response: gonna be a little more of that too. thanks for reading!
Date: 12/17/14 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
nice :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 12/17/14 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
AWESOME CHAPTER :) I love the surprise of meeting Tom at the restaurant and then a the club - not to mention the clear influence of Kings of Suburbia! I love it! You picked some of my favorite lyrics ^^ So, I can't wait to see how Tom and Bill meet up again. There's bound to be some hot and heavy behavior ;) I can't wait!!!
Author's Response: not too hot and heavy just yet...but yeah, eventually. in fact, bill will get quite worked up. but i've said too much! thanks for reading!
Date: 12/17/14 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
ughhhhhhh *fans self* Tom is so, so, so, so fucking hot. Like his character is so on point with the rl Tom right now that I can't even. I mean he recommended his own club and then the KoS lyrics.... Girl, I cry :') I like this story already and I'm reading the update even though I have a killer headache. But I just enjoy your writing so please keep it up because TOM IS HOT xDDDD
Author's Response: yeah, tom with his hair mostly down but pulled back a little is just...damn. just damn! and thanks for powering through the chapter despite your headache! *hands you advil* thanks for reading!