Date: 01/17/15 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
YES, TOM, COME ON OVER! o/ I AM EXCITE!
Author's Response: why, pray tell, are you excited? ;)
Date: 01/17/15 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
Still on team Tom...
Author's Response: lol pretty sure you're not the only one
Date: 01/17/15 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 11
I really enjoyed this chapter. It was nice seeing Georg treating Bill so special, but man, I still don't trust him.
It's got to be hard for Tom to hang on, but bless him for not budging.
Author's Response: thank god for stubborn persistent dj/waiters!
Date: 01/16/15 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 10
Cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: it'll be up soon!
Date: 01/15/15 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
Hello ^.^
Okay, so I'm gonna head straight into this. I understand why Bill's giving Georg another chance to prove himself - he obviously still has feelings for him despite their past together, etc. But I literally just want to knock some sense into him for that because wow, Bill, you little fuck; he cheated on you? There's a saying, "a leopard can't change it's spots', which in this context literally translates to, he's more prone to cheat on Bill again if they were to get back together a second time around, more so since it's quite clear Bill would more than likely be willing to hear him out and give him another chance, it's literally opening that door for more hurt because he thinks he can get away with it with minor consequences. To be honest, I didn't really notice until quite recently in this, but I think Bill is quite a naive character and he's easily swayed by the people around him?
I think Tom is such a cutie, I literally can't cope with him. Georg can suck my dick though. I hope to read more Bill x Tom scenes within this, it's truly a beautiful and quite frustrating story to be following < 3 Amazing chapter!
Author's Response: you, my friend, are preaching to the choir. i would never dream of giving a cheater a second chance, for just that reason! but bill, for some reason, seems to feel differently. but fear not, there will be more bill/tom in this story.
Date: 01/15/15 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
OK, so maybe I came off a little harsh on my last review so sorry :( I know I hate it when I get a bitchy-ass review :/ That said, i still don't like Georg or the situation lol You know me - hard-core twincest shipper haha And you really did make Bill binge watch netflix instead of writing awww :) lol I have my eye on Georg, waiting for him to mess up again...
Author's Response: GOD DAMMIT! i was going to give you a little shout out for the netflix thing! thank you for that one tiny little detail, but i needed to make him do something other than staring blankly at his laptop yet again. so thanks! and i wasn't upset or anything by your review. i like when people have a strong reaction to one of my stories. and i'm a total twincest shipper...but sometimes geo wants to come out and play too. *glares at geo with you*
Date: 01/15/15 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 10
Have I mentioned yet that I love Andreas? I do!! :D :D :D And I agree with what someone said in one of the earlier views. Andi should totally set Georg up with someone and expose his true dickish colors. >:(
Author's Response: i think you might have to get in line behind zarlina. she's already claimed andi for herself. perhaps you could share?
Date: 01/15/15 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 10
I agree!!! Why on earth would you get together with someone who cheated on you?!? Obviously they had good memories together (even though reading them made me want to throw up since I am 100% on Tom's side) and he just threw it all away and was a total asshole!!! My Internet started acting up yesterday before I could get to this so I was in agony the whole night. Now I'm in a different kind of agony but its all good. ;)
Author's Response: but things with geo were still 99% good, and i think that's what bill's clinging to...the dumbass!
Date: 01/15/15 11:12 am Title: Chapter 10
Tom is literally the cutest guy ever, he's so sweet waiting for Bill to know what to do and awe, I don't know how Bill can even consider Georg when he's met someone like Tom. But then again, I'm just one step away from wearing a "Team Tom" shirt and run around screaming "Georg is a dick" so I don't think I have the right to say anything, I'm not really giving Georg a fair chance here lol!
However, Georg was a bit cute in the end of this chapter.. I guess.. a tiny bit.. maybe. And he makes Bill smile.. but dammit, I want Tom *glares at Bill* don't do anything stupid dude!
But yeah, I love this!
*goes back to her "I hate Georg" corner to wait for more*
Author's Response: oh please! you're just saying geo was cute cuz you helped make him cute! *puts on team tom shirt and joins you in the corner*
Date: 01/15/15 01:52 am Title: Chapter 10
No. Stick with Tom
Author's Response: lol i'll make a note of that
Date: 01/14/15 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
I'm with you on the internal screaming. I'd want less smooching and more explaining wtf with the cheating! (If I was Bill, which of course I'm not, because I'm much too short to be Bill.)
Author's Response: i'm probably even shorter. maybe i could be bill as a...5 year old?
Date: 01/14/15 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 10
Now I'm just wondering if Bill has a bit of remorse while he's doing that with both: Geo&Tom.
I know maybe he's confused, but that's not reason to play with both! e_e' He has to realize that, if he ever loved Georg in the past, never would have eyes to someone else :S
I'm in the same mood like Tom. I just wanna Bill for him XD
And Georg is such a idiot. Have sex with someone else?! WTF? Bill isn't enough for you, Georg? What? o_o'
He lost his opportunity. It's too cruel, but it's cruel for Tom, as well ;_; Biiiiiill, you look better with Tom ;_; XD
Now wait to the next chapter :B See you! :D
And sorry for my last confusion about your last end noteXD :)
-Nathaly Quiroz.
Author's Response: i know! how anyone could ever cheat on bill is just beyond me! and bill's not just thinking "oh well, i'll just go out with both of them. no big deal." he truly is conflicted, and he does have genuine feelings for both guys. but eventually...he'll choose.
Date: 01/14/15 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Lol. Wellll, If I were Andi I'd try to get some hot young thang to flirt with Georg. He's an unfaithful man and that would be a hard habit to break, I'd think. Especially in his profession.
Author's Response: lol interesting idea, but no. georg will not be appearing on an episode of cheaters anytime in the near future.
Date: 01/14/15 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 10
I so don't like Georg that I'm waiting for the smallest mistake he would does so Bill can kick him out!
And I love Tom, he is amazing in this story! If Bill will be an idiot and he will choose Georg, can I have a Tom, please?
Author's Response: nope. sorry. tom's mine.
Date: 01/14/15 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 9
Well, I'd have to say I think Bill is settling for being a whore by wanting to date both guys, but I don't want to be rude when it's all complicated and shit lol He needs to figure out what he wants - I mean get rid of Georg lol I guess I'll have to wait and see how it all plays out :)
Author's Response: wow. damn. ummmm...okay, okay! it was tom that was all i still wanna go out with you, so really he's the one...making bill...a whore? lol new chapter up soon!
Date: 01/13/15 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hi! I've just caught up with this now and all I can say is; WOW, this is an incredible story so far and you're the one to have officially take my Georg x Bill virginity < 3
Having just admitted that you've taken my Georg x Bill virginity though, I'm quite sad to say that I don't like Georg in this at all, (I hate to admit that too because he's usually my favourite character in most stories!) To me personally, I don't think he comes across well to us readers. Whilst reading his scenes with Bill and how lovely he seems to be, all I can think of is that he's the master of manipulation and it makes me want to weep rivers. I really don't want Bill to fall into the G-Trap he's setting up (or what I think he's setting up!) To be honest though, I think I will always dislike Georg in stories whenever he's going to be battling it out with Tom for Bill's love. Bill belongs to Tom afterall, (I'm such a sucker for twc, what am I even doing here? Lol!) < / 3
Tom though. Tom seems like a really nice, genuine guy in this and I feel really sorry for him in this last Chapter. I really want to give Bill's head a good, hard shake for allowing Georg another chance to prove himself when he's got Tom in the sidelines like a little patient puppy. And then that makes me want to slap Tom too, because he's willingly going to wait around for Bill to make up his mind about who he wants to be with. And what the hell, these guys are such little shits for making me feel angry and sad, and kinda excited, because I know this will turn out amazing no matter what happens in the end. But gah, you're an amazing writer, as I'm sure you're aware and I'm really happy that you were the one to take my Georg x Bill virginity < 3
This is amazing, I can't wait for another update < 3
Author's Response: woo hoo! popped your biorg cherry!!! *dances around the room* i'm glad you dislike geo and both feel sorry for and want to slap the hell out of bill and tom for going through all this. writing a story that makes people react is what i live for. so thank you!
Date: 01/11/15 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
I say they all have a glorious threesome instead of Bill having to choose :D Great chapter, as ever!
Author's Response: interesting idea, but then tom and geo will still argue over who gets to fuck him and who gets to suck him and who he sucks first and it's just too complicated lol
Date: 01/10/15 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 9
Fuck my English, I'm so... confused about your review at the end of the chapter ._. What did you mean to say? I mean, Ria will appear, maybe? Jajajajajajajajaja XD
Yeah, yeeaaah! If I'm right xd That is what Bill needs to realize who he really wants! Jealousy! Alksdjf I love jealousy x)
Okey, back again...
It's amazing when I enter this web and watch every new chapter of this story Jijiji.
First of all, I not agree with Bill. I know, I have to be more understanding, but... I really don't like when someone has to decide between to guys, it hurts too much. (Maybe because it happened to me LOL xd ._.') I just hope Bill chooses Tom.
When I was reading Bill&Geo's date, the "I've missed you" Geo's part, I was like "And why did you broke with him?! 77" Pff, In that moment, I just wanted to hit him a lot e_e
Bill, you must choose Tom, Georg is an idiot, he didn't appreciate you.
Okey, too hard. In fact, I guess, I wanna guess Georg had a very good excuse to do what he did. For me, thats the only way I can forgive him...
And this is about Bill! And Tom is so sweet :3 Everybody can fall in love with him *Insert someone here cof cof* XD
Just kidding :) I'm so excited about the next chapter :B
-Nathaly Quiroz C:
Author's Response: oh god no! no ria! i was saying that andi's girlfriend, christie, was originally supposed to play a bigger part in this story, but really all i know about her is that she has red hair. but nice red hair. not clownish red hair like ria had. and i once had 2 guys to choose from, but for me it was easy. i just so clearly preferred one over the other. anyhoo, sorry for the confusion. thanks for reading!
Date: 01/10/15 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 9
I knew it… *smirks*
I'm loving this!! … as long as no one, and I mean NO ONE, gets physically hurt.
I know this won't end nice, but I find the doubts on Bill genuinely real… and I get him.
So I'm with you on making the decision, AFTER he sleeps with them both, lol!
Author's Response: "I find the doubts on Bill genuinely real… and I get him." i'm glad you said that, cuz that's what i'm going for. i don't want bill to come across as this jerk whose dating 2 guys and just having a grand ol' time doing it. he genuinely cares for both of them, and i'm glad i'm showing that. as for the story "not ending nice"...well, that depends on if you're team tom or team georg.