Date: 12/01/14 09:06 pm Title: Eighteen
Nobody leaves diamonds unguarded. Nobody! And especially along with expensive watches and cash. Smells like some sort of set up. Too easy.
Author's Response: eeep! Bushdio has been the top dog for a while now, maybe he was complacent? Or Kayone was right about it being a bad idea that he leaves the plant unguarded.... Or maybe Bill is just good? ;)rnThank you for commenting!
Date: 12/01/14 08:31 pm Title: Eighteen
Horny Bill is hot. I mean, really. :)
And, I still have the feeling there's something fishy... but I don't know anymore if it's because of Bushido or Bill.
Thank you so much for updating so soon, Em.
Author's Response: You are very welcome! Thank you for leaving a comment :)
Date: 12/01/14 07:20 pm Title: Eighteen
Beautiful chapter!!!! WOAH. WAS THAT REALLY THAT EASY??
Author's Response: Thank you! Not too easy I hope...!
Date: 12/01/14 05:14 pm Title: Eighteen
I love, love, love how you write action!!!! And I love that you update daily, too...it's really süss!
Now I have the proof that Bill is a psycho, he had an hard on bacause of the raid...In my opinion it went all too smooth...should we expect drama?!? Today it was already perfect cause I bought the Tour ticket and you made it even more perfect updating *.* now I'm like the happiest girl on earth*.*
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad I can add to the excitement of tour tickets! Bill is definitely getting off on the excitement of the raid. He likes to win after all... Thank you for leaving a comment :)
Date: 12/01/14 04:46 pm Title: Eighteen
:-):-):-)
Author's Response: :D
Date: 12/01/14 03:31 pm Title: Seventeen
I' m really starting to feel the angst....fuck if they attack Bergen it will be obvious that Tom is a spy! It seems impossible that Bu didn' t recognise Bill, he' ll put the two things together and Tom will be in danger....and really Tom should stop to idolatrise Bill and think that everything he says is true, but he won't cause Bill is his new Satin. Bill is really a mystery, I can never predict his actions, which is good cause every chapter is a surprise!!
Author's Response: You're right, Tom probably should question his surroundings more, but maybe he likes things the way they are? His dreams have come true after all! Hopefully all your questions about Bill are answered in the next few chapters. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 12/01/14 02:47 pm Title: Eighteen
I'll be in my bunk.
JFC.
Author's Response: I aim to please ;)
Date: 12/01/14 02:39 am Title: Seventeen
Wow Bill is still so fascinating. I seriously can't figure him out. Just when I think I have I clue, something happens to throw me off. Either Bill lied about the Bushido thing or Bushido has an awesome poker face. Bill seems like the sexy bad guy right now, and Bushido I'm not sure about either. I want Bill to have been telling the truth to Tom after "opening up" to him...I guess I'll find out eventually. What a sneaky little devil. But I obviously love that. This story is so dark and I'm in love.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. I'm glad you like the 'darker' elements in the story, that's what I enjoyed while writing it. Hopefully all your questions are answered in the next few chapters.
Date: 11/30/14 10:15 pm Title: Seventeen
Awww Tom is so in love with Bill that there's just no way he won't get hurt in the end.
I think Bill will only realize that Tom truly loves him after Tom's trust in him fade away. :(
Ohh, something big is coming, I can't wait to read what's nexT. *-*
Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Poor Tom. I hope he doesn't just fade away.
Date: 11/30/14 09:24 pm Title: Seventeen
It looks like I was right in my suspicion that Bill lied to Tom about Bushido having Bill for a sex slave.
I wonder if anything Bill told Tom is true. I am afraid now that the only reason Bill is fighting Bushido is to remove the competition and Bill's actions have nothing to do with fixing justice or helping people.
It's also weird to read about Kayone and Bushido treat Tom well, while Tom is a mole.
Bill not just calls Tom puppy, he kind of treats him like a dog, or maybe it's Tom who behaves likes a dog. It's all equally a bit disturbing. I wonder if for Bill Tom is exchangeable or not. Bill does seem to treat Tom with affection, but lately int comes out only in the "you-earned-a-reward" type of situation.
Anyway great story! Cannot for wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! So glad you're enjoying it. Bill certainly does treat those around him in a certain way, he's top dog after all ;)
Date: 11/30/14 06:10 pm Title: Prolouge
Is that pairing TOM/OMC NEW???? What what whaaaat did i miss??
Author's Response: It's a warning for later chapters since someone pointed out I hadn't made any reference to Bill's many relationships ;) Hope it doesn't put you off!
Date: 11/30/14 06:08 pm Title: Seventeen
Im so happy for tom but so confused ;_;
You're making me confused wheter Bu and his crew are NOT SO BAD after all but damnn i have to remind myself all the shit they give people to control them g_g
Bu is straight, i was sure bill lied g_g but wait i don't remember, was bill talking sexually about being his slave? But even if he didn't, you cannot not recognize Bill...
And the last part of the chapter g.g bill wants to blow up bergen? What will happppppeeeeennnn
And it DOES seems like he cares for tom, but i don't know g.g
I'm all g.g for this chap!
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! I'm glad the chapters are making you question so much. I think Bill does love Tom in his own way, what would he need to do to prove it?
Date: 11/30/14 04:53 pm Title: Seventeen
:-)
Author's Response: :)
Date: 11/30/14 03:26 pm Title: Seventeen
Okay, now I start to have serious doubts about Bill's version bout Bushido, some reviewers said that before but I didn0t want to believe the moment Bill opened up was also a lie -_-'
Anywaym then I put things in the right perspective I realize Bushido and his crew don't even seem half as bad as Bill's. I start to wonder if Bushido is the good guy...compared to Bill, of course
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I think the truth about Bill and Bushido will be revealed in the next few chapters. Maybe Tom is right, maybe he's not?
Date: 11/29/14 07:10 pm Title: Sixteen
What the hell is going on? What were they thinking, I mean, they could've hurt Tom. How could they get mad at him? Bill surprised me, I never thought he'd be so mean to Tom.
I'm just glad Tom managed to please him at last. Though I feel like something bad's going to happen. I don't think Bushido actually trusts Tom. Well, I'll have to see later on...
By the way, I love when Bill gets all horny for Tom haha. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: haha! I love when Bill gets all horny for Tom too ;) thank you for commenting
Date: 11/29/14 07:04 pm Title: Sixteen
ONE OF THE BEST CHAP SO FAR!
I llllloved it!
Even if i still don't have an answer wether they didn't care if tom got shot or not mhh!
I loved how bill seemed to really lose it and like he didn't believe what he was hearing when tom referred to kayone as his boss xD possessive much Bill!
Totally adore the twist that got tom his promotion, but i'm scared this position is way too dangerous. But i also check daily for a major carachter death and ITS NOT THEREDONTADDIT!
And what can i say about the reward ;-; that was perfect! The scene was so hot and was so happy for tom to finally be recognized ;-;
Can i have the confirmation of my thoughts that bill is a little bit falling somehow for tom? It seems so really!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. As for Bill's feelings for Tom... he says he loves him... :)
Date: 11/29/14 04:32 pm Title: Sixteen
Sex between Tom and Bill is always so hot! You are great at writing such scenes.
I am kind of cannot help but feel sorry for Tom. I have a bad feeling about all of this. I hope that I am wrong.
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm so glad you like it. I aim to please ;)
Date: 11/29/14 03:38 pm Title: Sixteen
Oh no EvilBibi came back....I really feared for Tom in the first part of the chapter, but I' m starting to see that Bill cares about Tom, too....Bill must be conflicted cause he really likes Tom, but he is also using him for his purposes. And at the moment it seems that Bill is more for the realisation of his goals rather than Tom, but I ' ve got the feeling the balance will shift soon... Oh and I like Kay One(which is very strange because I always hate him and Bu in stories) he seems such a good guy.... About your age, I really don't know, maybe somewhere in between 25 and 27??
Author's Response: I'm glad you like Kayone. Never really read much fic that he is in so I don't have much of a comparison! :)
Date: 11/29/14 12:20 pm Title: Sixteen
I didn't think that Bill thought of Tom as someone who worked for him. Tom need to not get caught up lol he jumped from Satin to Bill which is worse?
Author's Response: I think Bill means more that he's the boss of Tom (he's the boss of everyone! ) :)
Date: 11/29/14 04:22 am Title: Fifteen
:-)
Author's Response: :)