Date: 12/05/14 10:17 am Title: Epilogue
This has been an incredible story and I absolutely love your writing. I'm going to miss the regular updates. Thank you so much for posting it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comment, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 12/05/14 09:51 am Title: Epilogue
Awesome dark and delicious fic! I didn't want it to be over!!
Author's Response: aw thank you.... who knows, maybe there'll be some one shots in the future.... not quite ready to let go of Evil Bill yet!
Date: 12/05/14 06:34 am Title: Epilogue
You had me on the boarder the entire time. But in the end Bill really was just the bad guy. Poor But he didn't know what hit him.
Author's Response: Bill really was the bad guy in this, though there aren't really any heros either. I hope you enjoyed it nonetheless!
Date: 12/05/14 03:20 am Title: Twenty
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Author's Response: :*
Date: 12/04/14 05:38 pm Title: Twenty
Oooohh God!!!!!!! Tom in action, I loved that!!! He is so fucking smart in this chapter.... And Bill said he loves him *.* but after that he made Tom promise to do anything for him, so Bill is still Bill and I don' t really trust him. I really liked the description of the roof and its surroundings,I felt the atmosphere, it was realistic and it reminded me of a desolated but poetic place.
In my reviews I always complain about Tom's submission and you always answer me that he is happy like that , I saw that in this chapter when Tom describes how was his life and how it is now, so now I understand better this perspective. The problem is, in real life I really can't stand submissive and dependent people, so probably I will complain anyhow, sorry!!!
Author's Response: haha that's okay! I'm glad you're liking the story anyway. :)
Date: 12/04/14 09:36 am Title: Prolouge
Bill should've known it wasn't safe to send tom to a depot oO infact he didn't send georg... Was his idea all along to send kuno and play the reward game later? Mhhhhhhh
Anyway this chap. The first part was absolutely beautiful. I like their moments on the roof and i hope they are a new and exclusive thing for Bill to do with someone. The love making scene was so intense and i can feel bill is falling someone but i never fully trust him so UGH. My head is a mess.
The second part...I NEVER EXPECTED IT O.O the next chap will be soooooo fucking tenseee!!! I wonder if this was tom's idea only!
Date: 12/03/14 08:59 pm Title: Twenty
Wow. Tom got Bushido!
I did not review the previous chapter, so I'll do it here. I thought it was weird that Bill tried to send Tom to a depot. He is smart to know it'd be dangerous. Was it an honest mistake? Bill did not want to risk sending Georg there, he sent Kuno. I guess I cannot figure out if Tom is expendable for Bill or not. I know in this chapter Bill said that he loved Tom, but what are Bill's words worth? He is a manipulative lier after all.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting! :) Bill is manipulative but impulsive too. I don't think he thought anything of sending Tom to the depot, he just wanted the job done really. :)
Date: 12/03/14 08:06 pm Title: Twenty
Oh god, this can't be good. Something very bad is going to happen in the next chapter. I just hope I'm wrong but there aren't many options really... well, that's what I think. However, I know you're capable of surprise people.
I really want to believe that Bill loves Tom and that he'd do anything for him as he said, but somehow I can't. :'(
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting... hope all your questions are answered now! ;)
Date: 12/03/14 06:19 pm Title: Nineteen
Wow. This is one of the hottest scenes I've read. And Tom's jealousy played a big part in it. I loved the way he tried to avoid Bill kissing Kuno.
Bill is amazingly intelligent. He's clever and I love and hate at the same time the way he's controlling Tom. Loved the chapter.
Author's Response: I love a jealous Tom ;)
Date: 12/03/14 04:36 pm Title: Twenty
Shittttt. He's he going to Bill????? Good puppy :)
Author's Response: ;) very good puppy.
Date: 12/03/14 05:41 am Title: Nineteen
Oh I forgot, the tattoos!!!!! Bill is marking them, and Tom doesn't even realise that!!!! Bill is a bitch....
Author's Response: Mawha! Yes he is ;)
Date: 12/03/14 05:36 am Title: Nineteen
Ok, most intense chapter so far....And definitely my favourite! I love it because it reveals Bill and mostly Tom psychologies not through speech or internal monologues but hot, disturbing sex... Really this chapter opened my eyes.
To Bill, because he likes winning and he likes possessing, he loves having all the power in every situation, sex included. He loves Tom most because at the moment he is the one who gives him the most satisfaction, but in reality the treatment Tom and Kuno and all the others recive from him is the same: good puppy gets a reward, bad puppy a punishment. He is really the whore here, he uses his body,beauty and charisma to subjugate.
And to Tom, he despises Kuno, because he is jealous but also because kuno is totaly submitted to Bill and he longs for an attention he will never have. Tom thinks this is pathetic, but he can't see that he is exactly the same....
I really hoped that seeing Kuno or later when Bill made Tom fuck him, Tom would have snapped and realised his condition. But he is too intoxicated to see it. I really hate seeing submitted people who can't stand up for themselves, and the fact that Tom is like that is really tourmenting me. It's been like this from the start but I realised it only reading this chapter.
Okkk, now I' ll stop blabbering. This chapter has really opened a Pandore Box in my head, and I wanted to share my reflections with you but I don't know if I managed it! I' m sorry if this results incompehensible but English is not my mother tongue....
Anyway I LOVED THIS CHAPTER
See you the next review
Author's Response: Thank you for such an awesome and long review! Your English is great :)rnrnThe scene was supposed to reveal more about Bill, Tom and even Kuno and the dynamic that Bill has set up and controls. So I'm glad it did! As for whether or not Tom should be standing up for himself... Maybe he doesn't want to? ;)
Date: 12/03/14 01:42 am Title: Prolouge
I definitely enjoy your story. And I'm loving the fast updates...I have to say I have a love hate kind of relationship going on with Bill's character...I hope we get to learn more about him, and maybe how he got to this point in future chapters...I also hope he's not just playing Tom! Wonderful story though. Definitely deserves the feature, you're a very talented writer!
Date: 12/02/14 08:18 pm Title: Nineteen
Bill is a manipulative shit. Gosh the things Tom will do for him.
Author's Response: Eep he sure is! ;) thanks for commenting.
Date: 12/02/14 07:05 pm Title: Nineteen
I never tought I would like such a sex scene so much, I'm normally more narrow minded LOL xD Probably because Bill kept most of his attention with Tom and it was Tom who was turning him on and because Tom ws enjoying the control of it, not Kuno himself....he actually even shows disgust and anger all throught the scene, his pleasure was about dominating the boy and pleasing Bill/keeping his attention.
Love that Kuno enjoyed it so much lol, I sure get him!
But I actually liked it, mostly because I feel now more assured that Bill's starting to like Tom more and more (at least compared to Kuno), even if he doesn't seem to realize it yet.
I still don't get a little detail but I dont know if you can answer me: Tom talks about sleeping in his own room when Bill takes other people to his bed (and therefore I made a review about being surprised by how lightly Tom refers to it) but I presumed one of those people would be Kuno. Now Tom "says" that he thinks Kuno didnt sleep with Bill after coming to live in the hotel, sooooo, according to Tom's pov, who slept with Bill on those nights?
Author's Response: Tom only knows what he sees and he has his own room because he doesn't presume Bill will invite him into his room every night. Sometimes he goes to his own room because Bill is preoccupied with someone else, sometimes it's because Bill isn't around or because Bill hasnt invited Tom to his room. rnrnRemember that Tom is relatively new to the hotel and to his relationship with Bill. Bill certainly still leads the way with him. Tom suspects that Bill has slept with Kuno (he doesn't know how often or not this has happened) and this night is confirmation of that.rnrnWhether or not Bill sleeps with anyone else... Tom can only wonder!
Date: 12/02/14 05:28 pm Title: Nineteen
Ek. Seriously though a jealous Tom...:-)
Author's Response: Mawhaha! ;)
Date: 12/02/14 09:04 am Title: Nineteen
wow....that was hot. i like jealous Tom xdd
Author's Response: Haha me too! ;) thanks for commenting
Date: 12/02/14 08:17 am Title: Nineteen
Thought about it and changed my mind ILIKEDIT but i still hate that pale bitch!!!! I'm more than content he didn't get any kiss or action from Bill! Ah ah!! There you go hopeful bitch!
I hope this threesome doesn't become routine tho?
And it's just pure Bill to treat everyone his own way, with his own nickname (baby ugh!) and like he always is the master!
But tom IS number one and i can finally see that, i see it!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you don't mind so much about it now! ;) Bill always gets his own way in the end...
Date: 12/02/14 07:02 am Title: Nineteen
Mhhhhh... I don't know how i feel about this..
Date: 12/01/14 09:24 pm Title: Eighteen
Nobody leaves diamonds unguarded. Nobody! And especially along with expensive watches and cash. Smells like some sort of set up. Too easy.