Date: 03/22/15 03:27 pm Title: Twenty One
oH MY GOD.
Oh my god. Oh god. My hands are shaking so bad and my heart is beating a million bears a minute! That was INTENSE as fuck. Oh god. But god, when that Dogs Unleashed flyer fell out of Tom's pocket in front of Bushido all those weeks ago and there was no reaction from Bushido, that's when I started to suspect Bill wasn't being honest about his history with the man. But then, he could have been, and Bushido was lying just then?! God Tom, he has been too wrapped up in Bill for so long. Does Bill really love him? Is he going to get bored of him soon? Is Bill basically going to become what Bushido was. He says he wants Tom to have control but Tom doesn't really, does he... not when Bill controls him so totally.
Your writing is incredibly powerful. I can't even begin to praise it highly enough, and this is truly one of your best stories ever, in my opinion. It's almost too much. I have like, a thousand thoughts and feelings running through my mind right now!
Holy wow. Onto the epilogue.
Author's Response: Eeeep again, sorry for taking so long! I'm so happy you've been enjoying this story x
Date: 03/22/15 03:01 pm Title: Twenty
ohhhhhhhhhh shit what on earth is going to happen now?! I wonder if ANY of my theories are going to proven right. I doubt it haha.
I love this, I can't believe I only have one more chapter left and an epilogue! I really don't want it to end. It's just too good.
Date: 03/19/15 09:16 pm Title: Nineteen
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my god oh my god that was UNBELIEVABLY hot. Like, ridiculously so. That entire chapter, oh my god I swear, I'm actually short of breath!
I might re-read this before I move on, just to prolong the experience of reading this fic. Which I'm scarily close to finishing. I don't even know how to express how amazing I think this fic is?!?! It's just the best! I put off reading it for a couple of days but I'm weak so, here I am again.
My theories are growing more and more wild, too. With regards to Bill and his master plan. But honestly, I have no idea what to expect for the last few chapters.
Also Kuno, is he an original character or he is someone from the fandom I've forgotten, or another fandom? I don't hate him as much as Tom does hahah, I think he's a bit smug but he's cute lol. Or maybe I just like jealous Tom? lol
Author's Response: Hey, sorry for not replying to you. I didn't get an email notification like always! >.
Date: 03/16/15 09:31 am Title: Eighteen
Ohhhhh my god I really was holding my breath through this whole chapter!! Soooo tense, and exhilarating! Bill is so twisted but God I can't get enough of him.
Date: 03/15/15 10:09 pm Title: Seventeen
I have to sleep now but I feel like it's all going to REALLY kick off now. God do I want to read on...
I'll be back tomorrow for more of this INCREDIBLE piece of work. Seriously, I'm far too in love with this!
Date: 03/15/15 09:31 pm Title: Sixteen
Wow so now Tom is in with Bushido...
How is Tom going to get through the rest of this story!? I'm getting more and more concerned with his fate!
Never ever stop writing you are truly gifted!!
Date: 03/15/15 08:52 pm Title: Fifteen
Bloody hell! Wasn't expecting that end! I wonder who got shot...
I can't seem to put this story down! I have been delaying so many real life obligations but somehow, this feels more important.
Date: 03/15/15 08:22 pm Title: Fourteen
Oh Bill, he is a dangerous man indeed. I sort of suspected he might have given Andreas the Satin but still gasped when I read he actually had!
Also, his history with Bushido, is it entirely true? I suppose I should read on!! I'm basically second guessing everything Bill says and does.
Date: 03/15/15 12:55 pm Title: Thirteen
oh my god holy wow that was sexy as FUCK. I loooved this side of Bill. Tom certainly is becoming the man Bill wants him to be.
I'm concerned for Tom, but also turned on by him. Andreas, I mean, that was awful! Tom is indeed being led down a dark, dark path. But goooooooooooooood your writing is the best thing ever.
Date: 03/15/15 12:14 pm Title: Twelve
Oh my god... Bill.
That was brutal! Somehow, I'm not shocked though. Tom, oh Tom. I feel like I held my breath through most of this chapter! God you write so incredibly well - truly truly talented.
Date: 03/15/15 11:48 am Title: Eleven
Bill is soooo much control of Tom, gosh! And his "small fry" operations, I dunno man. Didn't seem so small to me! I really want to know his true motives for all this. And what he's REALLY up to. Like, is he trying to monopolize the market of Satin for himself, or is he trying to stop Satin distribution altogether and make for a better society? Or neither of those things. I like how a little bit of revealed as we go on, rather than all at once. Also his true feelings for Tom?? Bill is such a mystery! But like a moth to a flame, I'm totally drawn to him.
I LOVE THIS!!!
Date: 03/13/15 10:39 pm Title: Ten
Ohh so much is coming together! Some of my suspicions were definitely on the right track. I want to read on so bad but it's so late! I'm UTTERLY addicted to this story. It's one of the best things I've ever read!
Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! Thanks for taking the time to comment so much, it means a lot and it is really great to get your opinions as you read it. I just realised I read one of your fics today, great timing! :) I'm really glad you're enjoying mine.
Date: 03/13/15 10:04 pm Title: Nine
Oh it was amazing to read Bill opening up a little, I almost cried! I thought his past might have gone something like that. What a sad existence everyone in this world seems to have. I wonder if Bill is trying to change that.
You are so incredibly talented, this is too good.
Date: 03/13/15 09:09 pm Title: Eight
Oh my god that chapter was one hell of a ride! Oh wow. So Bill... I've been trying to piece his story together and I've picked up on a few things but I don't know if they're just me reading too far into it, or I'm starting to actually piece things together a bit more.
God the way you describe the withdrawal, oh my god. And gosh that ending, I wasn't expecting Bill's admission at all. This is a sensational fic!!
Date: 03/13/15 08:08 pm Title: Seven
Oh Bill really is turning out to be quite the dark character I thought him to be.
I'm just as pulled in by him as Tom seems to be, though! I can't even tell you how incredible this story is, it's SO damn good.
Date: 03/13/15 10:48 am Title: Six
Bill is certainly dangerous... I wonder what on earth Tom has gotten himself into.
This is AMAZING. I'm in love with your writing, always have been!
Date: 03/12/15 10:28 pm Title: Five
Oh poor Tom! God your writing is incredible! I'm as addicted to this story as Tom is to Bill.
Date: 03/12/15 10:04 pm Title: Four
ohhhhhhhh wow this is unbelievably sexy, this whole story is sexy.
I am building some theories as well, about Bill and his crowd... Bushido, too
Date: 03/12/15 09:14 pm Title: Three
Oh gosh. Well, there is obviously something big at play here and I am more than intrigued to find out!
I love the power Bill has over Tom, it's chilling in the best of ways.
Date: 03/12/15 07:56 pm Title: Two
god this is sexy, this whole thing is sexy, and dark and just so well written! You have an absolute ton of talent!