Date: 11/18/14 05:54 pm Title: Nine
I never thought Bill would open himself so much this soon, what a good surprise!
In the whole chapter the quote that got my attention the most was:
“Anyway, this is stupid,” he says quickly. “You don’t want to hear all this. Why don’t you go, puppy? I think there’s some Satin in my cabinet. Help yourself.”
Personally, it tells almost the same or more about Bill's past "relatioships" dynamic than all the rest ;)
I'm glad Tom's (seems) to be here to show him it's possible to like him without a sole interest in his Satin.
Date: 11/18/14 01:21 pm Title: Nine
Beautiful chapter! Oh Bill finally has let out something about himself , but I still can't trust him! I' ve got the feeling that he is trying to decive Tom...
Date: 11/17/14 09:35 pm Title: Nine
I wonder what in Bill's story actually happened. I hope he indeed opened up to Tom.
Life seems to be so sad in this utopian world. No wonder Bill became Tom's whole world. Great chapter!
Date: 11/17/14 05:09 pm Title: Nine
I feel so sorry for Bill. I think most people can relate to the emotion of 'not fitting in' where your that one person that doesn't fit the mold. Almost like you break it. And that feeling of isolation and a sort of anger. When you just question yourself why, why did you do that. What makes you so different. And just why cabt you fit in. It kind of makes Bill seem more 'human' so to speak. If you get my thinking.
Anyway great chapter! I loved it!!!:-):-):-)
Date: 11/17/14 04:25 pm Title: Nine
Oh, so Tom wasn't the only puppy, huh? But now he is. I loved the way he tried to get closer to Bill, nuzzling against his knee. It was so cute and it was nice to see that Bill reacted in a positive way. And, it was kinda sad to read how he broke down, in glad his puppy was there for him, to soothe and comfort him. I like the way their relation is developing, but I think something bad is coming D: can't wait for more! ^^
Date: 11/16/14 12:11 am Title: Eight
This is a very interesting development. I wonder what Bill tried to accomplish? To prove to Tom that he had nobody but Bill? That Tom cannot trust anyone but Bill?
Is it even possible to get of Satin? Btw, thanks fr explaining more how this society operates and the role of Satin in it.
I felt so bad for Tom. Tom is a good guy. He loves Bill. I wonder how Bill feels about Tom. Oh, the mystery!
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
Thanks so much for regular and frequent updates!
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks very much for commenting :)
Date: 11/15/14 05:40 pm Title: Eight
I have a feeling that Bill trying to make Tom go clean of his addiction and the fact it appears it's not the fisrt time he tries it ("third phase") might be a clue to what he does behind Tom's back, doesnt feel like something bad.
More like he found out people can overcome their addiction and whats to fight whoever wins with it...like bushido. And maybe Bill's product allows people to try a detox after a while? Presuming too much I know lol.
Anyway, I think after this Bill will come clean with Tom.
Author's Response: Hey - thanks so much for your comment. It means a lot that you like it enough to presume! :)
Date: 11/15/14 05:10 pm Title: Eight
Bill loves Tom :-) Buttttt I felt sorry for Tom. What Bill did was kinda mean
Author's Response: Bill is kinda mean ;)
Date: 11/15/14 04:59 pm Title: Eight
I'm so confused now haha. I do think Bill genuinely likes Tom. aah I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: New post soon ;) thanks for commenting!
Date: 11/15/14 01:16 pm Title: Eight
What in the world was all that? D: third phase? What does that mean? What are they doing to Tom? Does Bill truly loves him? I need more, please!
Author's Response: Next post will be up soon! Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 11/15/14 01:04 pm Title: Eight
nice :) Tom is so desperate but as Bill said - he has him now :)
Author's Response: He does :) thanks for commenting
Date: 11/15/14 06:10 am Title: Eight
That was so. Fucking. Intense.
But i'm still confused about bill, feels like he wants to be the one tom will be addicted to. But so much of "i want you in control" if all he is doing is bein the one to have control over tom. Just a substitute of all the others he claimed were the evil. I gotta see what happens next with this new blue drag.
And i want to know if bill's " I love you" was a sentiment or more like "vote for me and you'll have everything you want" x)
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting - hopefully all your questions will be answered in the next chapters :)
Date: 11/15/14 05:45 am Title: Eight
So Bill is taking him over completely. At least Tom has someone to look out for him.
Author's Response: He does :) thanks for commenting
Date: 11/14/14 11:30 am Title: Seven
Started reading this story today and I am really loving it so far. I don't usually go for stories without a "more sweet" Bill but since I remembered your name from here I decided to give this a try. And thank God I did.
I like how you are developing the story, not getting too slow neither too fast. And I also like how you describe the scenes.
I don't really trust Bill yet. He looks too much like a spoiled diva. I wish Tom, as someone alone in the world, deserves better than him. Tom is a sweet and nice guy, I hope he will wake up and grow a pair of balls to scare Bill a little bit for him to notice Tom's real value. I am sure that deep down Bill can be a nice guy but he definitely needs someone strong enough to show him the world doesn't revolve around him and he should start giving people its own value and appreciation. But maybe that's just the way I think. XD
Can't honestly wait for one more chapter. Keep with the great work! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks very much for commenting. I'm glad you decided to give the story a try and you're enjoying it so far despite Bill being less than nice ;)
Date: 11/13/14 05:51 pm Title: Seven
Oh wow, this is my absolut first review! This story is just so good, beautifully written, and fucking intriguing. Bill is really scary and I can't shake off the feeling he is up to something. And I definitely want Tom to stand up for himself and make Bill fall head over heels in love with him! Can' t wait till next chapter... Thanks for this story
Author's Response: Wow I am honored to have brought you out of lurkdom! Thanks very much for taking the time to comment, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Date: 11/13/14 04:40 pm Title: Seven
:)
Author's Response: :D
Date: 11/13/14 11:59 am Title: Seven
Wow, that was so cool ;) Tom is definitely like puppy but it seams like for him and Bill this is behind all of this something more cos TOM definitely gets Bill's attention like no one
Author's Response: He sure does ;) thanks for commenting
Date: 11/13/14 09:07 am Title: Seven
Ah, this is so exciting! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: 11/13/14 07:35 am Title: Seven
Holy. Wow. Bill is scary. In a super sexy way of course but jeez. I. Guessing Tom wasn't quite wrong in what he saw...especially given how manipulative and sneaky and kinda freaky Bill is. You definitely don't want to get on his bad side but Tom is going to need to watch his back and stick up for himself. Otherwise Bill will just trample all over him. Tom is so sweet too. He needs to man up! Come on, Tom! Throw Bill against the wall next time! (Dreaming of sexy Tom knocking Bill down off his pedestal sequence followed by hot steamy...yep....I'm getting carried away.) Anyway I can't wait until your next update. This story is fantastically written, completely original, and all around beautiful. Great work! Thanks for making my night!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it :)
Date: 11/12/14 03:51 pm Title: Six
To be honest, I don't know what to think about Bill anymore. I really don't know if he's using Tom (not just physically but for something else) or if he actually feels something for him. But it is obvious that he feels attracted.
I'm happy because somehow the puppy has managed to keep Bill interested enough. I mean, Bill took him to a place that he probably had never shared with anyone else... and I want to think that's special. Also, I think it was Bill's way to make up for what happened at the hotel.
Finally, I don't know why, but I love when Bill talks to Tom, it's just fascinating
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm glad to hear Bill is keeping his mystery! ;)