Date: 11/25/14 07:39 pm Title: Thirteen
Ok, this was hot as f.ck.
Author's Response: Thanks! ;)
Date: 11/25/14 07:38 pm Title: Thirteen
Great chapter, the story flow is amazing.
I have a feeling that Bill was the one giving the satin to Andreas....and that Tom is still being a little played, not aware of the whole story.
Author's Response: You might be right..... thank you for commenting!
Date: 11/25/14 04:55 pm Title: Thirteen
Loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 11/24/14 01:57 am Title: Twelve
Omg, awesome chapter! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for commenting :)
Date: 11/23/14 09:44 pm Title: Twelve
Bill is evil. And I love it. *-*
Author's Response: me too ;)
Date: 11/23/14 05:37 pm Title: Twelve
OH MY GOD.
Author's Response: :O
Date: 11/23/14 05:06 pm Title: Twelve
Nooooo please say he didnt kill her!
Date: 11/22/14 05:34 am Title: Eleven
Nobody noticed that lol
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 11/22/14 12:02 am Title: Eleven
I need to know how Bill feels about Tom. He has to like Tom at least a little bit, right?
Author's Response: I think he does :)
Date: 11/21/14 07:11 pm Title: Eleven
I loved the action in this chapter and I loved a more and more selfconfident Tom. Now he is part of the important guys....and I love revolution and rebellion too!!!
Author's Response: He is! :) I'm really glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for commenting!
Date: 11/21/14 05:19 pm Title: Eleven
Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 11/21/14 10:46 am Title: Eleven
What a fantastic way of ending with this chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it ;)
Date: 11/21/14 09:35 am Title: Eleven
cool. Tom is definitely kinda lost in this world but Bill definitely is a master of that, he shows it
Author's Response: Yep you're right :) thanks for commenting!
Date: 11/21/14 07:50 am Title: Prolouge
Really cool fanfiction, I like it very much. I did read a bit, but I wont read all chapters, because I just read finished posted storys. How many chapter long is the story?
Author's Response: There's 21 chapters :)
Date: 11/21/14 01:37 am Title: Ten
I never thought Bill would kiss Tom in front of others, because I thought it was something too intimate for him to show. It could come up as a point of weakness or something, but he did it in front of Georg and Gustav... so now I'm confused. Is he only using Tom for some benefit? :( Aww, poor puppy.
Date: 11/21/14 12:17 am Title: Ten
And here it comes. The real reason Bill brought Tom in and groomed him for months for this day. I bet Bill's story about Bushido using Bill as a slave is mostly a lie. Tom is a bit slow on uptake. It seems that he still cannot see that he is being used.
Great chapter! Cannot wait to know what will happen next.
Date: 11/20/14 05:31 pm Title: Prolouge
The highlight of my day is when this story gets updated *.* i love it so much to be honest. Also the banner in itself is a work of art. So happy you decided to share your perfection with us! :)
Date: 11/20/14 03:07 pm Title: Ten
I am seriously hoping Bill really did fell in love (even if not on purpose) with Tom and is not using him exclusively to destroy Bushido. The poor thing won't handle losing another person. You need to seriously consider putting me inside this story to cuddle with Tomi and make sure he's an happy boy. Hahah
Date: 11/20/14 11:59 am Title: Ten
Wow, wow. I still don't know what to say!!! I have the feeling all thei ever did all along was to play with him, to use him and let him do the dirty work for them... That bill invented his story to get tom do whatever he wants at the mention of it, out of pity for bill, to revenge also, i don't know, gaaahhh.
On the other side i want to think that this plan is coming along to the "real" twisted relationship between bill and tom, so bill's story is real and he really opened up and stuff...
But bill DID pick him up in the first place because he saw "ferchichi" on his pass. So maybe Bill himself didnt expect to get involved with feelings later. Aaaaaaaaaaaa post soon!!!
Date: 11/20/14 11:22 am Title: Ten
o_O not Toms hair