Date: 11/28/14 07:28 pm Title: Fifteen
Things are heating up! Tom is not as dumb as he seems sometimes around Bill. I wonder who was behind the attack.
Author's Response: It is! :) thanks for commenting.
Date: 11/28/14 05:30 pm Title: Fifteen
First I wanted to thank you, you always reply to my reviews and it makes my day! Second...I loved this chapter! It's all about Tom, and in this story he is definitely my fav,he really makes some good moves here and I' m kinda proud of him. And the end with the action leaves me lingering for more. If they shoot Bill, I' m ok with it, I' m still angry with him for poor Andi..... And, totally off topic, I' m curious, how old are you? ( only if you wanna say tho!!)
Author's Response: haha! I'm not sure I want to say how old I am. What do you think?rnrnI'm really happy you liked the chapter :)
Date: 11/28/14 04:51 pm Title: Fifteen
I was in some kind of denial about bill sleeping with other people,that together with the lack of a Bill/ofc/omc shippinb always made me thinks the hints Tom talked about were just a result of jealously...
Im surprised he seems to accept it ss something natural by now and doesnt confront bill about it
Author's Response: Hmmm... perhaps I need to put that warning in? I didn't consider it as Bill's liaisons are not even side pairings really.
Date: 11/28/14 02:20 pm Title: Fifteen
Maybe they did it to make Kay trust Tom. Or maybe they just didn't think Kay was going to be with him at that time. Oooh, the questions...
Poor Tom, I keep waiting for the moment everything will go wrong for him. That boy is too addicted to Bill.
Author's Response: He is much too addicted! Not sure I can blame him though ;) thank you for commenting!
Date: 11/28/14 10:29 am Title: Fifteen
Who got shot?! Oh, no... This is getting dangerous. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! :)
Date: 11/28/14 05:15 am Title: Fifteen
OH GOD WHAT IF TOM COMES BACK TO THE HOTEL AND BILL IS THE ONE THEY GOT AND AND AND... WTF WERE THEY PLANNING TO KILL TOM TOO WITH ALL THOSE FLYING BULLETS????? I start to panic whenever bill ignores tom, something happens to tom. Update SOONER D:
Author's Response: Eeep I'm updating daily! Hope that is quick enough ;)
Date: 11/27/14 01:57 am Title: Thirteen
Whew so hot. Jeez. Bill is turning Tom into a beast waiting at his beck and call...slowly but surely. If Bill was abused by Bushido then maybe he's now determined not to let anyone dominate him typically. And it's turned him into this violent, powerful dark sort of mystery. I love his character. He's so twisted and so fascinating all at the same time. Perhaps that is part of what draws Tom to him as well. Like a moth to a flame. Ugh what an amazing story. I need to go back and review. I've actually read every chapter, even the next one...they're so good. You're amazing. Phenomenal. I dream about this story. About to do that now...should be sleeping. Ok good night ;)
Date: 11/27/14 12:39 am Title: Thirteen
That was by far the most intense and greatest smut scene I have ever read in all of my five years on this site. 5 stars, score of 10, 1st place, and every other award in the world goes to you! *standing ovation*
Date: 11/26/14 09:50 pm Title: Fourteen
I have mixed feelings, I feel kind of dissapointed because of Tom's new behavior, but at the same time, I think it's really, really hot and I'm kind of proud that he's getting stronger somehow. I don't know... and even if Bill is mean and evil, I love him. Though, I think it would have been great if Tom had confronted him. It would've been interesting to see Bill's reaction. Anyway, can't wait for more!
Date: 11/26/14 07:05 pm Title: Prolouge
This is the kind of story that makes me do the only thing i do when i become obsessed with a story: SPOILER MYSELF. Whenever you update i cant help it but go straight to the end to spoiler myself that tiny bit of information that i need, to go through the chapter, wich is if i have to prepare for the worst or not. LOOK HOW PATHETIC I AM! Your fault!!!
Anyway even with that kuno fight i believe this chapter is the most... Calm? I dunno, but it feels like that. Like the calm before the storm. Even the dialogue between bill and tom, yeah it was intense..but not the kind they had before...its like they came to know each other and what to trig and expect from one another. And i feel also like they reached a milestone wich was bill giving sexual control to tom and bein at tom's mercy. It shifted something between them.
And i may be wrong but i realised that the street satin made people slow, like sedated. Bills satin tends to give you too much energy.. Wich you have somehow to use, either sex..or get shit loaded or tending to be violent. Bill too...we saw it before in that part of the club.
But i can be wrong! By the way i like how tom is taking it all out on anyone but bill, we saw it when he had the allucination that andreas was bill. It keeps me calm somehow..because i know that even if their relationship is somehow developing and moving on... They still are not ready to get it all out on each other. It would certainly destry tom.
Oh and, i like all the 'dog eats dog' stuff, because it's the honest truth. Some souls may be kinder than others but lets face it, whenever we are confronted with something or someone who is trying to take away from us the only real thing we care about, the only thing who keep us moving, we become tom and bill. We fight back. We become animals. And im so glad they are now fighting in the same team at least. Even if i still smell lies in what bill is telling about his story, to keep tom moving.. "What if it was me?" Tends to be the rule..
Author's Response: Heee well I'll take it as a compliment that you are enjoying it enough to spoil yourself! ;)rnrnI think you're right, Tom is definitely taking his emotions out on others. He hasn't had much of a life so now that he's in a position of a bit more power, he's taking advantage of it. Thank you for commenting! It means so much :)
Date: 11/26/14 05:22 pm Title: Fourteen
o_O Bill can be a bit of an ass
Date: 11/26/14 01:31 pm Title: Fourteen
Bill is so evil!! He' s pretty scary and has no moral.....I really felt bad for Andreas, he is a good guy and he helped Tom when he was in need.I like this new strong Tom, but I really hope he won't become heartless like Bill, I think that Bill has a lot to learn from Tom, just as Tom learned to be stronger and more selfconfident from Bill.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting :) you're right, I think Bill could learn a lot from Tom, but will he ever realise it? Hope you're enjoying it!
Date: 11/26/14 01:10 pm Title: Fourteen
Thanks for your reply to my other comment! :)
I get it that Tom had very hard before Bill and Bill did tons for Tom, I really do. I am just a bit disappointed with what kind of person Tom is becoming. But I guess I expect too much from him. I keep forgetting is a drug addict. It is a wonder he still has some principles.
I'd like to know whether Chantelle is still alive.
I like Gustav. He is not mentioned often, but he has a presence.
Bill is a an amazing psychologist. Very skillful.
Anyway, this is great story! It's like a roller-coaster. Love it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story :)rnrnTom is definitely changing, Andreas' is right, but I doubt Tom really realises how much because like you say, everything else in his life is being eclipsed by Bill! :) <3
Date: 11/26/14 01:05 pm Title: Fourteen
I was right that Bill set Andreas up. I think he wanted to teach Tom a lesson. I am a bit surprised that Tom did not get angry at Bill over this, but took his frustration on other people like Kuno. I guess Bill can do no wrong in Tom's eyes, no matter what.
I am glad that Andreas is alive and Tom gave him his bad stash as an apology. I am disappointed in Tom the way he is changing and the way he is punishing other people for this change that deep down there he does not like, people who, however, have nothing to do with this change.
Author's Response: You're exactly right that Tom is taking any anger or emotion he feels on other people. He's been obsessed with Bill for ages and it is the first time that he actually CAN take any emotion out on anyone else :)
Date: 11/26/14 12:37 pm Title: Thirteen
Thanks for replying to my comment about Tom's addiction to Bill. I meant it figuratively, but now I think this addiction might be physical. From the very beginning of their relationships, Bill made Satin a huge part of anything physical he did with Tom (feeding him little portions from his fingers, etc.) I think Tom's body/brain may strongly associate Bill with Satin. So any coldness from Bill to Tom may trigger something similar to withdrawal symptoms in Tom.
Whether this is true or not, it is obvious that Bill has been grooming Tom from the very beginning for his own purposes.
Author's Response: I think it is safe to say that Bill has his own motivations. Everyone does after all, even Tom. Who is to say Tom isn't also gaining something from this relationship? He has a better job, better health, better accommodation etc. But yeah, certainly Tom does worship Bill like he used to worship Satin, and has obviously shown now that he will fight when it looks like something is going to get between him and Bill.... rnHope you are enjoying it and keep reading! Thanks for your comments, it means a lot that you are liking it enough to look into what's going on and write to me :)
Date: 11/26/14 04:59 am Title: Prolouge
Bill totally gave the satin to andreas to make tom pay for his behaviour during the chantelle thing.
He wanted him to understand the hard way.
But theres something bill isn't considering.. Andreas already knew about tokio. So the word is out somehow. Not everything is in his control!
About tom changing, i believe this is for the better, dont we remember how he was before?? A RAT in the dark. And now he is strong and head high.. Even if he is still addicted to bill. But this, i'm afraid, is turning more into blinding love, not just an addiction anymore.
And what do we have here duh duh duh.. Some of your feelings bill? Tomi, my puppy, want YOU.. This is getting soooooooooooo interesting!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting, it means a lot! :) Think you've got the right idea about Tom, he's had a pretty hard life before he met Bill....
Date: 11/26/14 12:50 am Title: Thirteen
Amazing chapter and the ending was so fitting. I am loving this story.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 11/25/14 11:14 pm Title: Thirteen
Bill is evil. I bet it was him who gave Satin to Andreas.
Tom has completely disappointed me. Is he really so dumb that he does not see that Bill completely manipulates him? It is quite likely that Tom is responsible for two deaths in one night. Doesn't it bother him at all? It seems that Tom is addicted to Bill no less than to Satin. Bill made him lose all his brain and human dignity. How sad...
Author's Response: :( Poor Tom has lived a pretty hard life up until the point he meets Bill. You might be right about his addiction... Thank you for commenting!
Date: 11/25/14 10:34 pm Title: Twelve
Do not know what to say. It's a cruel world, but Tom has a gentle hard. It's sad to see him changing.
Author's Response: :(
Date: 11/25/14 09:30 pm Title: Thirteen
Wow, this was intense. My favorite chapter so far. It was amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you :) so glad you're enjoying it!