Date: 08/13/24 11:35 pm Title: Fourteen
As someone who’s dealt with drug addiction this story is compelling, raw, and so real. The things you can experience as an addict are depicted so well it’s almost crushing to read. The feature is well deserved and I’m not even done reading. Many roses to you there well earned.
Date: 08/13/24 11:35 pm Title: Fourteen
As someone who’s dealt with drug addiction this story is compelling, raw, and so real. The things you can experience as an addict are depicted so well it’s almost crushing to read. The feature is well deserved and I’m not even done reading. Many roses to you there well earned.
Date: 03/05/23 05:31 pm Title: Prolouge
This was SO intense and gritty! I read it straight through between work/sleep. Bill is so intense as a badass lol. I felt so bad for Tom when Bill forced him to get clean(er), but glad that he did! Although their relationship will always be kind of fucked up I'm glad it was a "happy" ending.
Date: 07/26/20 06:20 am Title: Prolouge
honestly, this was amazing. i can't even put it to words; this captivated me so much i was going crazy for three evenings straight just reading non stop. jesh. thank you. unbelievable.
Date: 03/17/20 02:42 pm Title: One
I’ve only started to read this story, I’m never really a fan of writing in the present as I prefer past tense. But I thought I would give this a go! So far it’s really interesting, I’m looking forward to seeing how The characters develop.
Date: 03/15/17 09:37 pm Title: Six
I have been reading this all day and LOVING IT! Though I am starting to get the impression that Bill may not be a good guy...
Date: 01/10/17 02:16 am Title: Epilogue
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 08/01/16 05:57 am Title: Prolouge
This is an amazing story and I love it. All I can say is 'WOW!!!!!
Angeleyes
Date: 04/22/15 04:56 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved it!!!
Date: 04/15/15 11:21 pm Title: Prolouge
Ooooh this is so Feel It All! Very intrigued!
Date: 04/02/15 03:14 am Title: Epilogue
Aha! Read it all over again.
Yeah, I see now what you said about Tom wanting to stay in the manipulated situation. I'm just glad that Bill didn't drop him/leave him hanging out to dry at the end; he had accomplished his goal after all. From his character, I was expecting that. So, like other readers have said, maybe he DOES love Tom... in his weird, twisted way XD
Since I haven't seen anyone mention this, I looove how you worked in the name Tokio Hotel, as well as the twins' birth year ^^ That was very clever.
Oh, question though: In chapter fourteen, Tom sees a copy of his rat on the table. Was that only for the reader to notice? Because he didn't even make a comment, and it was clear he didn't know about the eavesdropping until later.
Date: 04/01/15 02:20 am Title: Epilogue
Whaaaaa? Oh man, gosh darn it XD I was REALLY hoping for a change of heart in either Bill or Tom, but it is what it is. At least he didn't turn the gun to kill Bill, though, which I was expecting/fearing at the end of the last chapter -- seeing that he'd just found out the truth and all. And yet, somehow, that probably would've been for the best...? DX Who knows. Maybe Bill will be a positive thing for the Satin trade. Or even rid the city of it entirely.
*goes to read it again, now from a new perspective* :DD
Date: 03/31/15 01:03 am Title: Ten
I'm so worried that Bill just told him that story (true or false, who knows) just to fuel Tom getting on their side xP
Date: 03/31/15 12:33 am Title: Eight
Wow... That was intense...
Date: 03/30/15 10:54 pm Title: Seven
Gah, I think he's going to overdose at this rate D: Just like the girl in the FIA video.
(Lol, I'd think this fic was inspired by that if I didn't already know this came out a good while ago)
Date: 03/30/15 01:35 pm Title: Three
*is worried about Tom's addiction* D:
Date: 03/30/15 12:27 pm Title: Two
I suspect that Bill is only letting Tom into his inner circle because of who he works for. *reads rest of chapter* Okay now I definitely think that XD
And yikes, I suspected it in the last chapter, but now it's confirmed that this WHOLE CITY (and possibly all of society?) runs on drugs. How strange.
All of the sensations in this fic are soo... prosey ^^
Date: 03/30/15 11:37 am Title: One
Why do I keep mentally pronouncing the drug's name as Satan XD Freudian slip, I guess
Date: 03/30/15 11:30 am Title: Prolouge
Lol, I usually avoid drug fics like the dickens. But I'm gonna give this a try, aaaaaa!
Date: 03/22/15 03:33 pm Title: Epilogue
Ohhhhhh that ending, I love it. I LOVE it. So I had a lot of questions in the last review but I'm just going to go with, Bill loves Tom and Tom loves Bill. I just... Bill in this story, I could never trust him but I fell so in love with him. I see Tom's predicament haha!
This story is going right to my favourites, WELL earned, and so I can find it easily in the future because I know I'm going to be returning to this one. I feel like it's the kind of story that is just as great the second time round, because I can pick up on things that I perhaps didn't the first time. Your attention to detail is phenomenal!
Oh this is just incredible, I don't think I've been so totally swept up in a fic in a long time. Thank you for writing this :)
I'm going to need some time to recuperate now, I'm a bit broken.
Author's Response: Thank you for all your lovely comments and for taking the time to let me know what you think after each chapter. It's awesome for me to get little notes in my inbox! I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you do end up reading it again, you'll have to let me know what you think the second time around :)