Date: 03/12/23 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other fics of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 11/07/17 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 04/04/15 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
“Please.” Bill wheedled, crawling out of the bed as Tom made a dash for the door, “I promise, I'll do everything you say and learn really fast!”
“You can just forget it.” Tom replied, holding his nose in the air, “A vagina is not going on this body.”
“Oh, 'cause it's such a sanctuary.” Bill replied, sarcastically.
“Of manliness.” Tom added, “A pussy fits right in on your body. Not mine.”
“Fine.” Bill replied,--LOLOL OH come on!! youstop there!?? nooo keep going!! I wanna see a Tom girl XD loved the story I hope you do a sequel I just know it will be just as funny and awesome.
Date: 04/04/15 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Towards the end it was sad and funny at the same time. Kinda sad their time is over :(
Date: 04/04/15 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
This wa sme throughout --> :O so descriptive and detailed I saw it it all in my mind XD I'm just in awe wow. JUST WOW I think Bill should stay a girl Tom enjoyed that way too much lol
Date: 04/04/15 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
OMG XD thats all i can say OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG hahaha oh man, Tom a horny pervert and poor Bill so curious! Imagine being tuned into a man, I would die haha (im a girl) in my case i would panic ahahaha unless I get turne dinto a beautiful man like Bill hahaha
Date: 04/04/15 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG LOL XD hahahahaha Poor Bill and the heat sensation Bill Honey thats called night/day sweats we women get XD hahahah
Date: 02/09/15 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
The description was so on point but the ONLY thing that could have made this better was to have a part where Bill did fuck Tom's new body like wlkfjwelkjfw
Author's Response: Thanks for reading this! Lmao I was telling people I might write a sequel with girl!Tom, but now Idk. I'm all caught up in working on Safe Haven and don't have time for anything else lol Hopefully no one is too disappointed xD
Date: 11/16/14 04:16 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha! Ok the best part was definitely the ending! Brilliant! Bill tricking Tom, Tom as a girl... Oh man, that's what dreams are made of. Lol! This story was a good idea, even though it requires heavy suspension of disbelief... Seems they adjust to Bill being a girl a little too easily. A bit more angst may have been more realistic. And the bartender handing over the magic liquor so easily... seems something so precious wouldn't be something someone would ever just hand over without a fight. Oh boy, I also have to say, some of your word choices... it feels like the words somehow didn't belong. I don't know why that is. So yeah, I didn't like everything about this fic, but on the whole I think u did a good job. Very entertaining! I'd love to see a sequel where Tom gets really shy about his lady bits or something... Haha! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Not everything may have been realistic, but I was really just going for a fun, sexy story :) I pay more attention to realism in my longer, more serious fics :) I hope to be doing a sequel at some point, though I'm not sure when. I'm deeply involved in one of my long fics right now :D
Date: 11/15/14 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Lol that was funny and hot... It really was a good read. Will there be a sequel where we get to read about Tom as a girl? That'd be good to read :-)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) I'd like to get back to doing a sequel once I finish up another fic I'm working on :)
Date: 11/15/14 09:01 am Title: Chapter 5
this was a sexy story *_* *drools* well done!! :D you're a genius. Now, write something about Tom being the girl? ^_^
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Yes, I'd love to do girl!Tom once I finish up another fic I'm working on :)
Date: 11/15/14 03:43 am Title: Chapter 5
Is there going to be a sequel
Author's Response: I can't make any promises, but I really would love to do a sequel once I finish up another fic I have going :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 11/14/14 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 5
SEQUAL!!!! OMG! xDDD
Author's Response: Yes, I am interested in doing a sequel when I finish up another story I am working on :) Tom with a pussy would be so hot and funny :P
Date: 11/14/14 11:32 am Title: Chapter 5
You made my day!!!!! I saw the fifth chapter up and I had a freakin' fit! Then I read it and I had another. :) I love it soooooo much! You have to do a sequel with girl!tom.
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much! You made MY day :D I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I can't promise a sequel right now because I am working on some longer projects, but I am very interested in getting back to it and having Bill fuck girl!Tom :D
Date: 11/14/14 02:40 am Title: Chapter 5
Ahah I love it ! Would love to see bill fucking girl!tom :p
Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it! I can't promise a sequel right now because I am involved in other longer projects, but I would love to get back to it and have Bill fuck girl!Tom :)
Date: 11/14/14 01:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Haha
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11/14/14 12:55 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahahaha....perfect! :DDD
Author's Response: Yeah I thought so! It's what Tom gets for calling his body holy;) lol Thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11/14/14 12:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahahahaha So good fic So good end :-)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! And I'm glad you found it humorous! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 11/14/14 12:02 am Title: Chapter 5
nice :) looks like everything is going perfectly
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 11/13/14 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
bill, you cheeky little monkey! that's not nice, tricking your twin into growing a vajayjay against his will!
so does this maybe mean...sequel?
Author's Response: Well, I'm gonna be honest, a sequel to this story is not really high on my priority list because I wrote this fic a long time ago and I am now embroiled in other, longer projects. BUT, I would love to get back to it at some point and see how Tom fairs with a vagina :) . . . Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading :)