Date: 11/13/14 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 5
Loved it. I loved how Bill was delightfully deceptive and got back at Tom.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I thought that was the perfect ending :)
Date: 11/08/14 12:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Tom's gonna get Bill pregnant. Lol
Author's Response: LOL yes! I thought of this same thing. That would be funny and awful all at once xD
Date: 11/07/14 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
that was amazing!!!!!!!! just read the last two chapters and i'm out of words. their sex scenes were so so hot - love it !!!! and of course i'm waiting for more
Date: 11/07/14 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
that was amazing!!!!!!!! just read the last two chapters and i'm out of words. their sex scenes were so so hot - love it !!!! and of course i'm waiting for more
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed :) Last chapter will be updating in the next couple of days, and then I have a new story for everyone after that :)
Date: 11/07/14 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
bill, you little slut! you're insatiable!
of course, if i had a tom at my disposal i'd be hella insatiable too.
so yeah. this was...yeah. wow.
definitely need to find a tom of my own.
Author's Response: Lol you are right! If I had Tom, we would be in bed all day and night lol Thanks for reading! I'm glad you've been enjoying so far :) Last chapter will be updating in a couple of days, and then I have something new to post for everyone . . . :)
Date: 11/07/14 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really really like this!!! Tom is so sweet and just plain sexy hexy. That line at the end killed me. " He really did miss it... " XD
Author's Response: Thank you! I, myself, was drooling over Tom here. Usually I am a Bill girl, but I have my Tom days xD haha Thanks for reivewing :) I'll be updating the last chapter in a couple of days
Date: 11/03/14 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not gonna lie, the plot didn't fascinate me, but once I read it, it had me laughing and had me fascinated at how...predetorial Tom is towards wanting Bill's new female body. I honestly can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was hoping the het and humor coming from me wouldn't scare people away since I don't do either very often lol Thanks for giving it a chance! I'll be updating in a week :)
Date: 11/03/14 10:35 am Title: Chapter 3
That was so fucking hot. Holy hell
Author's Response: Haha Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 11/03/14 08:16 am Title: Chapter 3
so fucking HAAAAAAAWT! I never read het but this one is Bill, so I realy loved it *-*
Author's Response: Thank you! I, myself, typically don't enjoy writing het because I am a twincest shipper 100% but to put a pussy on Bill is amazing! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I did :)
Date: 11/02/14 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow So hot :-)
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and stopping to drop a review :)
Date: 11/02/14 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just went tight -_- more sex! Hehehe ;)
Author's Response: haha Thank you so much! I enjoy every review, especially one's like these ;))) I promise, there will be more of Bill's pussy >:)
Date: 11/02/14 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hot! :D
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading, and stopping to review! I appreciate every review :)
Date: 11/02/14 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
well...it was good for me
Author's Response: Great! I'm glad you liked it! I was a little worried since I haven't written het in so long, but it turned out good lol Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 11/02/14 11:52 am Title: Chapter 3
Holly hell! *-* Tom asking him if he could lick him, and Bill ask him Tom to go down and suck him off were my favorite parts, haha. This was different, but oh so hot! I've got a question though, is this going to be a longfic?
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is the only het I've written in a long time so I'm happy it turned out good! :) To answer your question, this story will only have about two more chapters, so I wouldn't really consider it a long fic. I've been posting these shorter stories in the interim while I work on a very long fic that I'll hopefully be posting soon :)
Date: 10/26/14 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
ahhh! i love it!
Is this great or is this great! lol update soon
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. Hopefully, the next chapter will also satisfy everyone :D ;))))
Date: 10/26/14 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 2
and it would be great if Bill gets a period too!!!!! please please x3 it would be so funny x3
Date: 10/26/14 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg Loving this! :D more plz!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing :) I'll be updating in a minute
Date: 10/25/14 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Geez! *-* that was amazing, I need more, please update soon! This is so funny and hot all at the same time.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! I'll be updating as soon as a I finish answering these reviews :)
Date: 10/25/14 04:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh my god with is so hot.. Please tell me there's going to be some action in the next chapter!! :p
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. I'll be updating here in a minute, so you will get to see what kind of action goes down ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/25/14 01:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Veeery interesting! I'm lauging :D
Author's Response: I'm glad it's humorous to you since that's what I was going for! Thanks for reading and reviewing :)