Date: 03/01/08 10:05 pm Title: In Zimmer 483
Oh My God... The ending made me cry, for no reason LOL this is just so sweet. I seriously love it!
Date: 01/18/08 10:17 am Title: In Zimmer 483
So beautiful!
It made me squeal.
I love how you portray their relationship.
Date: 01/18/08 09:15 am Title: Blue Tuesday
Aww, I really like this so far. I was drawn in at the first paragraph.
Onto the next chapter!
Date: 01/10/08 02:35 pm Title: Detour
“Do you want me to stop going out, partying, and having fun?!” That would’ve been a lie because Tom never thought it was fun, but only a way to redeem himself and hide from something he’d never want to face. “I always, always come back. I could stay out and not show up until practice. I come back for you.”
I melted at this paraggraph. You are just too good.
“Not sleeping with me tonight?” came a soft voice. Tom bit into his cigarette, tasting its bitterness. He took a Kleenex and spat. A shadow cast over his bruising cheek and he surrendered to cold indifference.
“No.”
Just leave me in the puddle right here... I'll reconstitute in an hour or two.
Date: 01/10/08 01:57 pm Title: Pulling on Heartstrings
Oh crap. Tomi boy, you've stepped in it now...
Date: 01/10/08 01:43 pm Title: Something to Yell About
In the recesses of the black van and half an hour after lunch, George was helping Bill clean his tongue. He scrubbed the area around Bill’s piercing with a Q-tip in careful concentration. It was a habit Bill had developed after his tongue ring had tasted like sweet and sour pork for hours after trying Chinese. Weird, but not unBill-like. Tom rolled his eyes in disbelief. His brother could do that by himself. He always had. Bill swirled his tongue around, watching Tom out of the corner of his eye. Tom turned away completely and began talking with Gustav.
For some reason this passage stood out to me. Bill could do that himself, but he got Georg to do it. Something tells me Bill's sort of like this in real life. He's very charming, just like in your fic. Great job.
Date: 01/10/08 01:32 pm Title: Blue Tuesday
*sighs* This is so bittersweet. Protective!Tom is so hot.
Date: 12/05/07 02:04 pm Title: In Zimmer 483
just... fantastic
Date: 12/05/07 05:15 am Title: In Zimmer 483
this isn't the end? is it? please tell me it isn't it's to good to stop. ;) do continue please. i'll give you..uhm an extra big cookie if you do
Author's Response: oh no! I'm sorry, hun, this is the end for this series. <3 thanks for reading!
Date: 12/05/07 04:54 am Title: In Zimmer 483
beautiful!!!!! LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!!! you have to write another one!!! your soooooooo good at this....i didnt want this one to end but every story needs an ending! thankx so much for all your effort!! it really paid off!!
Date: 12/05/07 02:49 am Title: In Zimmer 483
This was amazing ! I *calms down* I like this story so much! And no it's over T_T ! This chapter was so brilliant! Everything was just perfectly planned out! From their argument to them making up. And the last lines were just the best thing I've ever read!
Past the shallow hours of late evening and early morning, everything was perfect in Room 483.
That ! That Was PERFECT! I get goosebumps just thinking of the words, I dunno why, it was just the ultimate way of ending this story! I'm gonna miss this FF so much ! You're really talanted and I hope you'll write another story ^_^
Author's Response: I got goosebumps when I read the ending to my own fic, too! lolrnrnyou're the sweetest, thank you :)
Date: 12/05/07 12:12 am Title: In Zimmer 483
Exquisite. I do love this story, and you wrote it well. Amazing job.
Date: 12/05/07 12:04 am Title: In Zimmer 483
Oh GEORG. He makes me LAUGH!!
I love this fic XD
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Date: 12/04/07 11:35 pm Title: In Zimmer 483
I already commented on this when you first posted it on THSlash, but I just wanted you to know that it was an enjoyable read all over again. I still have it saved to my memories.
Wonderful job! Now go write more of Bungalow, woman! LOL
Date: 12/04/07 11:34 pm Title: In Zimmer 483
i loved it!! ^_^ there should be a sequal :D
Date: 11/29/07 11:14 pm Title: Eye of the Storm
uh oh.
update sooooon!!! this is slightly addictive.
Date: 11/28/07 10:08 am Title: Eye of the Storm
Ugh, TOM! >:O
I love this fic!
Date: 11/28/07 07:58 am Title: Eye of the Storm
O.O ....oh shit.
busted
Date: 11/28/07 06:05 am Title: Eye of the Storm
holy cow!!
MORE! thats so goood!