Date: 09/26/14 12:29 am Title: One
I love this already! Can hardly wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sweetie!! <3
Date: 09/25/14 11:07 pm Title: One
Oh god, you know, I wanted to write a story in my native language and my initial idea was pretty much similar to what you've presented in this chapter, but I'm not a good writer and I really didn't even know how to develop the plot, so I gave up on the idea months ago, hahaha. You're an awesome writer, so I know this is going to be great and I'm glad that in the end, I'll be able to -at least- read a story similar to what I wanted; and this is surely going to be much better to what I had thought. :P First chapter was good, I felt bad for Tom; it must've been very hard for him to be waiting for Bill for so long. :( Luckily, Bill's back!! And I can't wait to see what's next. Lots of love to you! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! :)
Author's Response: I am so, so glad that I can offer you something similar to what you wanted! Thank you for this lovely and sweet review. It made me really happy. :) I can't wait to share why Bill left and what's going to happen between him and Bill now! I will hopefully be posting this coming week. Lots of love back to you! Thank you. :*
Date: 09/25/14 10:40 pm Title: One
Oh, me, me! I am ALWAYS down with Bill/Tom >:) And hey, this is not shabby for being a little rusty ;) If you've got ideas, bring 'em on! I like it :)
Author's Response: Haha, I am so happy you're down with this. :D Thanks so much! I'll definitely bring the ideas on in the next chapter soon. :)
Date: 09/25/14 09:50 pm Title: One
Okay, not that I've read this, I can give you a review :)
I really enjoyed this first chapter. It was nice to see a few flashbacks to give us a bit of an idea what happened in the past with Tom and Bill. I am looking forward to having my questions answering in upcoming chapters and I hope Bill can tell Tom why he left.
It's so great to see you back here and I am really looking forward to more! :D
Author's Response: Seriously, you're the sweetest to review before and after reading. :) You'll definitely see more flashbacks soon, and you'll find out bit by bit why Bill left and where that leaves him and Tom now. Thank you again for giving this a chance. So nice to hear from you! :)
Date: 09/25/14 08:40 pm Title: One
OMG YOU'RE BACK AND OMG I'M SO EXCITED!!
I seriously am so excited to read this new story of yours! I haven't read it yet, but I'm about to start the chapter and I just had to say I'm so excited to see you've started a new story!!! Welcome back!! :D
Okay, I'm off to read the chapter!
Author's Response: You have no idea how much this made me smile!! Thank you for being so excited. That makes me want to write even more! I missed corresponding with you in reviews, and I'm so happy you're here and reading. :)
Date: 09/25/14 07:05 pm Title: One
You are BACK!!! Yaaaaaayyyyyy!!!!
Author's Response: I am BAAAAAACK! Oh my goodness, you are so cute!!
Date: 09/25/14 05:31 pm Title: One
I'm IN!! Already tracking, and already impatiently waiting for an update ^^
Author's Response: Yaaaay, that makes me so happy!! Thanks for climbing aboard for the journey :) I'll update as soon as possible!
Date: 09/25/14 04:30 pm Title: One
Okay, you have no idea how excited I am, I'm literally shaking and I'm pretty sure this review will end up being a mess, but bear with me, ok?
I liked the little bickering between Tom and his mum in the beginning, it was cute, and when she said that she had seen Bill... I could feel Tom's shock, and when I read the last part I understood it even better. Hell, I feel so sorry for him, Bill leaving without a word, after telling him what he did, and after the kiss.. wow. I can't wait to get to know what actually happened there. There must be a reason, right? I mean.. they were so close.. God I feel so bad for Tom, but I have a feeling I'll feel bad for Bill as well.
Bill seems to have changed a lot? I didn't get a clear impression of how he used to be, but Tom's surprise was enough to guess that Bill is probably not how he might have expected him to be after hearing he was back in town. And I don't just mean the way he look, I think he might have changed in more ways.. but time will tell.
And hmm, Bill never even called... man I get such a bad feeling about this!
I laughed at Georg, most because the first thing I worried about when I was about to move out was that toilet paper is so expensive and it's the kind of thing I've never even thought of that you actually need to buy. So when I moved out and was super nervous about everything I actually freaked out over the toilet paper! "What if I forget to buy toilet paper? Then I'll sit there like a fucking idiot!" That was Sandra freaking out.
I guess our mind is acting weird when we're nervous about something :P
Okay, I'm rambling... I'm so, so curious and excited over this, so YES please keep writing!
Great start, looking forward to read more!
Author's Response: First of all, I just have to remind you that you are so cute and lovely, and I need to tell you that this review made me smile sooo much! Okay, now I will move on :)
Date: 09/25/14 04:25 pm Title: One
nice ;) waiting for more
Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie!!
Date: 09/25/14 03:58 pm Title: One
It's so exciting to see something new from you! Love the first chapter and I can't wait to see where you take this :)
Author's Response: You are so sweet! I'm excited to be writing something new. Thank you so much for reading! I'll try to update again next week. :)
Date: 09/25/14 03:38 pm Title: One
OMG MY LITTLE SISTER IS BAAACCCCCCCKKKK!!!! *tackles you*
i like it so far. i'm already wondering if larry will make an appearance, or if bill will teach me any new fun phrases to add to my vocabulary!
Author's Response: I AM BAAAAAAAACK!! I'm sooo happy that you like it, sis! I'm thinking that Larry might just make an appearance ;)
