Date: 12/25/14 07:16 am Title: Five
I. LOVE. IT. Thank you for this amazing chapter, it was totally worth the wait. I'm looking forward for the next chapter! Anyway, merry Christmas, have wonderful holidays and happy new year !
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for saying it was worth the wait! You are so sweet, and I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter. I'm really excited to write the next one! Thank you, again. :)
Date: 12/25/14 04:37 am Title: Five
I would be lying if I said I wouldn't be more than pleased if you incorporated more of the "Miles and the boys moments". I usually dislike anybody who steps in between Bill and Tom but this was surprisingly different. I like the easiness they seem to have in their interaction and Tom kissing Miles was so, so hot. I wouldn't mind making Bill more jealous either, because that would be delicious to witness. Bill seems to have obvious overhand here, Tom is clearly crazy in love with him and always has been and I would really hate if he got hurt in the end. What I want to say is, that I wouldn't like to see Tom turn into a love stricken fool who is too easy of a catch. A little of struggle is always nice, lol, if you know what I mean. I am a build up whore, what can I say, lol.
To be honest, I still don't know what Bills exact motives may be. He has got a thing for Tom, that's more than obvious, but he is also more than inclined to play around and lead Tom to fool around with others. God knows what Bill has been though and how many guys he has bedded in his short life. I hope he is aware of Tom's position in all of this, no matter what assurance Tom is giving him all the time.
Love this story. Love your characters. I don't know why but I am always enjoying your Tom more, somehow, the same happened in Rough as well.
Great work! And thank you for a fabulous story.
Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: I am super pleased and feel totally flattered that you like Miles! I'm actually with you on that one, I usually don't like guys or girls that come between Bill and Tom. But I'm having fun with this guy and I enjoy writing about chill and pretty people. Also, I love build up and conflict and this isn't going to be a smooth and easy love story. I promise!
Date: 12/25/14 02:13 am Title: Five
Great chapter! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!
Date: 12/24/14 04:22 am Title: Four
Great chapter. For a little while I thought that Bill is going to rip off that towel and take what was/still is his but ...next time I guess. Thank you, it was so good that I was a bit disappointed when I found no "next chapter" button.
Author's Response: I sort of wish he had ripped off that towel! But, you are in luck, because i just posted a new chapter. :) Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts, sweetie. I hope you enjoy the next one! <3
Date: 12/24/14 03:56 am Title: Two
It's Christmas and I finally have time to read your story. Merry Christmas to me :D
Author's Response: I'm so happy you got the time to read, darling! Happy to have you here. :) Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/10/14 04:29 pm Title: Four
I love the story so so so much! Can I ask when you're foing to update? I am so desperate already xD everyday checking up for new chaptera
Author's Response: You are so sweet and you totally made my night with this review! I will 100% have a new chapter up next week. I'm so sorry for making you wait this long. I'm happy you're enjoying it!
Date: 12/02/14 02:05 pm Title: Four
You're killing us...
one paragraph at a time.
Author's Response: I adore you and I don't want to kill you!
Date: 11/29/14 11:39 am Title: Four
Ohh, I read this on my phone and then I completely forgot to review when I started my computer.. And now I'm ill so I won't leave a super long review, but remember that I love this just as much either way!
Tom is such a great guy, I love how he's coaching his team and that poor boy that he had to encourage like that, awe, good job Tom!
Haha, little Bill being such a nice guy! Taking the blame for Tom getting hurt and all, awe, so cute!
I'm if possible even more curious about Bill now... I really can't wait to get to know more about him, and I truly hope Tom can bring him back, because this is so sad already and I don't even know what actually happened to him.
Great chapter, as always, and I'm sorry for the not so great review, but I love this, I really do! < 3
Author's Response: I'm so sorry to hear you're sick! Thank you leaving me this even when you're not feeling well. You're the sweetest.
Date: 11/23/14 07:21 am Title: Four
Wow this story is soooo good! I read the first four chapter in a row and now I' m left lingering for more.... Tom is a sweetheart and I really hope he will conquer Bill in the end, they are so good together *.*
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I'm pleased that you're left lingering for more, because that pushes me to deliver for you. I hope you'll stick around to find out what happens next. Happy to have you here reading! :)
Date: 11/21/14 07:30 am Title: Four
Oh man I was not expecting that! Eeeke!! That was pretty hot! I'm actually glad Bill pushed Tom away, though, because I don't think they are ready to be doing any kissing or anything of the sort. They need to do some talking and some sorting of things out first. Although, they could do some kissing between talking ;D
I am definitely excited that Tom has decided to take charge because yes, you're right, somebody definitely has to! Plus, this way at least he gets to spend time with his friend and I think, and hope, along the way he will get some answers and hopefully more than just a friend. This was great!
I really enjoyed this chapter and it brightens my day when I see that you've updated! You're such a fantastic writer!
Author's Response: Heyyyy, sweet girl! I always love your reviews, okay. I get a genuine smile on my face. :)
Date: 11/20/14 10:33 pm Title: Four
Bill's obviously confused, subtly coming on to him and then backing off. Kinda mixed signals coming from him and I'm really curious to know what his problem is. I'm glad Tom is sitting around throwing a pity party anymore, and taking some action. He's a great guy who can win Bill back like he wants to if Bill will just trust him :) All in all, great chap :)
Author's Response: Ohh, thank you for this awesome review. You seem to understand the characters well! I'm glad Tom isn't sitting around and waiting anymore, because Bill needs someone to take charge and get some answers out of him. Thank you so much for reading! I'm about to start writing on the next chapter. :)
Date: 11/20/14 07:21 pm Title: Four
Aww :'( I'm frustrated xD I thought they'd kiss. Well, I know it will happen, it's just a matter of time. And I can't wait. *-* They both want it.
I felt kind of sad for Tom, though, you know, in the almost-kissing part. It must be hard for him to try to understand Bill. I personally can't think of one single thing that could be so bad and that's holding him back now. I mean, why is he so afraid? It's so obvious that he wants Tom too. Anyway, I'm glad that Tom has resolved to get Bill back. :D Go, Tom!
Author's Response: It was a close call.. But like, you totally know it will happen. They can only resist their desires for so long. ;)
Date: 11/20/14 03:54 pm Title: Four
Love this whole story so far!! So excited about the new chapter.
Author's Response: That makes me so happy to hear! Thank you a ton. :)
Date: 11/20/14 02:52 pm Title: Four
Awws
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you. :)
Date: 11/20/14 02:52 pm Title: Four
Love it!!
Author's Response: Thanks, sweetie!
Date: 11/20/14 02:48 pm Title: Four
O - M - fucking - G !!!!
I have no other words.
Author's Response: I love you, okay. I'm so happy you enjoyed!
Date: 11/20/14 02:26 pm Title: Four
I knew it that this won't be so easy... But that 'almost kissing' moment was amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! They're definitely getting closer.. ;)
Date: 11/20/14 12:45 pm Title: Four
omg i loved this! the tension and the almost kissing and tom in a towel...amazing!
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much! I just love writing tension and Tom in a towel, okay.
Date: 11/15/14 03:53 pm Title: Three
I'm finally going to review, and I'm sorry for being so slow and lazy, I just don't want to give you a half hearted one when I think you deserve so much more, so I waited until I felt like writing you a proper one.
I love Georg, I really do, just that he so bluntly said "you're an idiot" made me love him so much, because yeah, Tom is a bit of an idiot, but who can blame him? But you know, pointing those things out is the best friend's job, so yeah, I liked Georg already.
What he said five years ago, “You didn't just kiss any guy, you kissed Bill, and I'm chill because that makes sense. You two make sense.” was so cute! And then he casually changed topic to a game, man, he would be a perfect friend for me, I always do the same thing lol.
“You're so fucked.” - Yes, Tom, I agree with Georg. You are. I just hope it'll be worth it!
Okay I'm on team Georg here, have you noticed? I just really love how he looks out for Tom, he’s such a nice friend, and he’s got a point when he said that Tom shouldn’t spend time with Bill if it’ll end up getting himself hurt. Problem is that I don’t think it’d be very easy for Tom to stay away either way *sigh* Love and friendship, such complicated things.
Man, Bill is such a mystery... that private school though.. did his dad find out he's gay and tried to change him? Was that why he had to leave so quickly without even a goodbye? Actually maybe not, there must be more gay people at an all boys school. But since he had to change himself so much it still feels like it might have been a place with old school rules and shit. Hmmm I wanna know more. I feel so impatient here but I know it'll be worth the wait, so I'll be patient! Promise! But yay for his grandma who came and saved him! I like her already!
I'm happy they got the chance to talk a bit though, and it seems like Tom is doing alright even though I still feel sorry for him. I just hope neither of them will turn out getting too hurt, because that would suck ._.
Ugh, this is so, so good. I hope you can update soon because I want more! So much more! It’s brilliant really!
Thank you for another awesome chapter, I’ll try to be patient while waiting for next one ^-^ < 3
Author's Response: I'm sorry for being slow to reply! I'm just happy you're reading and I get giddy whenever I get a review from you. :)
Date: 11/08/14 04:14 pm Title: Three
OMG I love this story!!
All the flirting makes me go crazy, the sexual tension is starting to grow and I can't wait to read more about that! I really liked the part in which Tom kind of started to open and tell Bill how he felt and feels about him, it was so sweet...
I definitely can't get enough of that, it's just like Rough, it's an addiction!
Author's Response: This made me sooo happy! Thank you so much for reading and for leaving me such lovely words. I'm excited that you can feel the sexual tension growing between them, and that you like how they interact. I'm like, thrilled that you want more of this! I'll have another update ready this week. :)