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Reviewer: Blue_Dragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/15 12:15 pm Title: Seven

Wow! This chapter is really amazing. It includes something about Bill and contents hot stuff, as kissing. I enjoyed it a lot. And the memory part is very cute. And I like how they hang out like friends and play truth or dare. It's a little weird how they hang out like this, but I like it. And I really like Miles, he is a great man. :D

Author's Response: Hey, I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it! It is kind of odd how they just hang out and make out, but I mean, I'd like to join the party. ;) Thank you so much for reading and for this lovely review, and for liking Miles. I'm having fun writing about him!

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/15 05:17 am Title: Seven

Great chapter! I had to read it twice :D
This story is definitely my next favorite for a translating, really! If you don't mind of course...
I really look forward to their another time together! Miles is an amazing friend :)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! Of course I don't mind if you translate it. :) I'm so happy you're enjoying it, and I hope you like what's coming next, love!

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/15 04:03 am Title: Seven

Love this story.....

Author's Response: I'm so happy you do! :)

Reviewer: lalaabanana Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/21/15 12:59 am Title: Seven

"but I have no future plans of writing anything new. I feel good about what I've written and that everything is complete, and I will leave it at that"~MohanRocks..

Muahahahahahah!!! Yes you contradicted yourself and are currently writing another awesome story!
Im so glad i stumbled upon this! Literally the first thing i thought about when Bill said he was a sex addict was Will Ferrells Blades of Glory..LOL
I absolutely adore their chillness in this story, just friends hanging out like friends do, sometimes kissing, all good. Until the next chapter -puppy eyes-..Seeya!

Author's Response: Hahahahaha you caught me! I actually forgot that was still my bio. I might actually leave it because I think that's hilarious. I'm so happy you're here reading! And dude, I totally forgot about Blades of Glory lmao. Imagine if he was like that. xD Seriously though, I'm glad you like the chill vibe, because that's definitely what I'm trying to exude with this. I am already in the beginnings of the next chapter, so hopefully there will be one next week! Thank you, thank you. :*

Reviewer: Nymphetamine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/15 10:02 pm Title: Seven

This was oh, so perfect! It was really cute. I can't even say anything else; I like Miles, and I loved those two last paragraphs. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: You are so sweet and this review was so cute! I'm happy you like Miles and that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank youuuuu, love!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/15 09:30 pm Title: Seven

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, love!

Reviewer: Kerlinka Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/15 09:23 pm Title: Seven

Woah! I really enjoyed this chapter. I literally screamed when I saw that you updated so fast haha! It totally made my day. Anyway, to the story - I totally love Miles. He's wonderful friend and he is also the perfect boyfriend material. Ugh, did I just developed a new crush? Awh, how come that all the purrfect boys are gay? xD And I honestly wouldn't mind if he joined the guys in their sexual life in the future. But I can probably only dream about it :D anyway! I'm happy that Bill opened to Tom and is getting more and more comfortable around him. I can't imagine how hard it is to be sexual addict. Bill is lucky to have Miles to keep him under some sort of control for all these years.
I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm always totally looking forward to it.
Btw, I'm really mad that I didn't have a tree house as a kid! Man, my childhood would be much more fun! Haha, I'll talking too much so I'll stop here xD
So again, thank you for this amazing chapter and have a wonderful day!

Author's Response: Hahah, I really did update fast for me! You're the cutest for saying it made your day. Dude, I'm so happy you like Miles because I'm enjoying writing about him. Honestly, I would love for there to be a situation where all three of them had an experience. You never know, it might happen.. ;) I'm so pleased that you liked the chapter! And girl, I really wish I had a tree house, too. It was always my dream! Maybe someday, maybe someday. Thank you again, sweetheart!

Reviewer: TK89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/20/15 08:10 pm Title: Seven

I laughed, I nearly dislocated my jaw, all in different parts and back and forth.

I have so many phrases that I loved here!! (And I know you like when we tell you) but my favourite one was:

"Tom didn't know if he should take that as a compliment, or something to be really fucking concerned about."

LoL!! Brilliant.

This whole chap: Completely, and absolutely, stunningly BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love you!!

Author's Response: You have no idea how much I adore you! Or maybe you do. :) Thank you so much for reading, being such a big supporter of me and my writing, and for this wonderful review. I love YOU!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/15 11:58 am Title: Six

Okay, I did not see that coming! I was shocked! I love this story, and I'm pulling for them but wow! what a suprise! still, I love this story ^_^ so much!

Author's Response: I like surprising you, girl! Thanks so much for reading and loving on this. I'm working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully it'll be up really soon. :)

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/15 09:41 am Title: Six

Ahhhh! I was thinking he was addicted to something, but I have to admit sex wasn't on my list of things I thought of. It makes so much sense though and I loooove that it wasn't something predictable, there's nothing I love more than stories where I don't know what's going to happen next, and well, with you I never know. (I just remember the first time I read Rough, it was super late, I had an important day coming up and I couldn't find a good chapter to stop at because I always found new things I wanted to find out about. Dammit woman! You're too good!)

Okay, from the start!

Bill's grandma seems to be the coolest ever. Bringing them beer and being all chill and stuff. I like her a lot, and I'm so happy Bill has someone like her in his life, he needs it and awe, she seems to be such a sweet person.

I feel so bad for Bill, poor thing, can't be easy for him, and getting surprised by a hot, shirtless, Tom? Nah, anyone would have problems keeping it together around that, and then with his addiction.. awe, honey :( I'm happy he's not pushing Tom away though, and that Tom isn't all freaked out and leaving him because that would just be sad.

I WANNA TALK TO MILES TOO! We barely even know the guy yet and I'm already in love with him. I don't know why, but somehow I have this secret love for OMC characters as long as they're not coming in between Bill and Tom. Someone I always end up loving the "best friend" more than the actual main characters. Am I super weird? I don't care. There are so many stories (and books for that matter) where I never think I get enough of the side characters, because I just love it when there's an awesome best friend who I don't have to be worried about because he's not going to come in and try to steal the glow from the main pairing. In books it's normally the gay best friend, but since all I read here is slash that doesn't work, but they usually have a straight best friend instead so it's fine. With Miles I don't care what he is, as long as he doesn't try something *glares at Miles* I'm watching you, boy! You might be sexy and all but watch it!

Too much rambling is going on right now.. I feel like my reviews are not as much reviews of the chapter as they are rambling about other things... but uhh.. it's a sign of my love, so yeah.

I'm sure there's more to say but seriously, scrolling up and down on my cell phone to see what I've missed is a pain so I'll end it here and just tell you that I LOVE THIS and I will impatiently wait for next chapter! Love youuuuu < 3

Author's Response: Girl, you seriously make me smile! Good job on figuring out he was addicted to something. I'm really glad I could surprise you with it, though. I've never read a story about Bill as a sex addict, and I wanted to try something new. I love starting a story in one way and then throwing in a twist that changes things up. So, it makes me happy that it's something you enjoy!

Bill's grandma closely resembles my own, haha. Without the beer. But if she did have that I can't even imagine how badass she'd be lol. I'm glad he has someone like her to help keep things in his life a little bit normal!

I think Tom hasn't fully processed what Bill told him yet, but he's definitely not going to run away from it or judge him. When he finds out more, it might be a lot to swallow, but he's a big boy and he cares about Bill. It helps that they have the history they do!

That is seriously so cool that you love supporting characters. They are often times my favorite, too! I truly appreciate when an author invests time and personality into supporting characters, even when they aren't around that much. In terms of Miles, he's not going to come between Bill and Tom in a way where he's trying to take Bill for himself or anything, but he is going to be involved in their situation. Just because he knows Bill best right now, and knows his weaknesses when it comes to his addiction. He's not there to interfere though, I promise! He's mostly there to look pretty and offer advice. ;)

I always enjoy your rambling! Thank you so much for reading, love, and for taking the time to leave this long review on your phone. You're a trooper! Lots of looooove to you. :*

Reviewer: EngelTraumer Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/14/15 11:57 pm Title: Six

Wow....
I have a friend who has a friend who is a nymphomaniac. She was in a relationship previously but finds it impossible to remain monogamous. She's has STDs and she still can't stop sleeping dozens of people - both men and women. She's in her mid forties now and unfortunately I doubt she'll ever get better.... That's why reading this I'm kind of at a loss...This is a real life struggle that takes a lot strong will and fighting to control. I can't really personally grasp this since I'm mostly demi-sexual but I'm interested to see how Bill's gonna get over this. This is something he's going to have to personally pull himself out of if he ever wants a real relationship. Tom seems kind of helpless in this situation :(
So I'm interested to see the next chapter. *Applause, applause* Keep on with the awesome writing :)

Author's Response: Man, I've never personally known anybody with this problem, but I know it's very real and heartbreaking and I'm so sorry to hear about that woman. I can't even imagine how hard it must be to live that life. In Bill's case, and for the sake of the story, he isn't that far gone. It's a real struggle for him but it doesn't completely consume him unless his control slips, and he needs to learn how to view and have sex in a healthy way or else he's not going to get better.

Thank you so much for reading and sharing this with me! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/15 04:09 pm Title: Five

Oh man, Bill keeps confusing me, but I feel like he's giving small hints all the time and I'm so annoyed for not figuring stuff out. I have an idea, but I'm not sure and dammit, I'm not gonna say anything yet because I'm probably way wrong.

I had a bit right with why his dad sent him to that school though, so yay me! But there was a line there that made me think one step further and it got my wheels spinning for sure.. hm hm hm.

Okay, enough about that.

Miles! So I had to google him and that was just too much handsomeness for my phone. It's funny because I actually got this "chrome has stopped working" right after I googled him and I was like, damn boy! Too sexy for my poor Sony, huh? Anyways, I loved the character you created there, he seems to be a very nice guy and imagining him and Tom kissing? Uh, yes please! Even though I much rather see Tom kissing Bill I still wouldn't mind some Miles in there!

I'm on my phone, because my laptop broke and I'm so pissed at it because it types superr slow and I have to fix typos 24fucking7 so sadly I'll stop my rambling here, but you know I love this and I'll catch up on next chapter when I'm less tired and hopefully on a computer (no promises though, mine seems to be gone for real this time) but yeah, I love this, as always and this chapter was so sweet and awe, I wanna hug them all for being so damn cute and then an extra hug for Miles for kind of pushing those two together. Go Miles! Will we see more of him? *-* (If you turn Miles into a bad guy later on I'm gonna cry, you've been warned)

Okay enough rambling, my poor thumbs will kill me if I don't stop typing soon and I might throw this piece of crap (aka my phone) into a wall soon because it's not behaving, so better stop or I'll be without both phone and computer, and that would make a very sad Sandra x)

Right, so yeah, I love this! Amazing chapter and I hope to get time to read the next one soon as well ^-^ love you!< 3

Author's Response: Girl, you know you always brighten my day and night with your reviews, and I seriously adore how you say you're going to keep it short and then you just keep going. I loooove it! *-*

Okay, so now that I have the next chapter posted, I'll tell you that Bill comes clean in it about what he's hiding. So you can see if your idea is right! Him being secretive was really starting to bother me too, haha. And hey, you were totally on the right track about his dad and school! Go you. :)

Dude, Miles is just mmmmmphhhh. I've been following him on instagram for a while and I've just really wanted to include him in a story. He's gay in real life so it's not that far of a stretch, and he's really pretty so yay! I'm totally flattered that you like his character. I promise he's not going to turn evil! He's actually going to play a pretty big role in the story so it's good that you don't mind having him around.I

I'm so sorry to hear about your laptop! Ahhhh, I don't know what I would do. Seriously though, thank you so much for taking the time to leave this for me. It means the world to me! I hope you have a wonderful night and that you enjoy the next chapter when you get the chance to ready it. Looooove you! xx

Reviewer: velvetlilian Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/15 07:33 am Title: Six

Hi sweetheart!!!! I' m so happy you posted a new chapter *.*
Nooooooooo, I swear I didn' t expect that, you totally surprised me, I thought it was something like drug addict or maybe that Bill was raped!!!!! And I' m very happy that it isn't like that cause this is something new, not usually dealt with in the stories I' ve read. Poor Bill he is a nynphomaniac!!!! Bill and Tom in this story are just like Romeo and Juliet, star crossed lovers! How sad, poor darlings....but it is still beautifully bittersweet! I just hope this won't end with dual suicide.....kidding =) No seriously, I hope they will find a way to be together cause they are made for each other.
Ah by the way, last time I said in this story I love everyone, I confirm that I love Granny too!
When I read a new chapter I' m like, no please don't make this end, I just fell in love with this story from the first two lines and I fall in love even more with the progression of it.
I hope to hear from you soon and thanks ( now I would put here a heart to express my gratitude but I dunno how to do it, so let's pretend this thing here % is a heart, oki?)

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you're here reading! This review made me feel so good and I completely appreciate you taking the time to write it for me. :)

Surprise! I do love a bit of a twist. It's always sad for me to read about Bill as a drug addict or a rape victim, so I knew I would steer clear of those things. This is a serious problem too, but hopefully with Tom by his side they will be able to get through it. You're so cute, by the way. :3

It totally makes me smile really big that you love Granny! She'll pop back up here and there, and I promise this story isn't near the end. So don't worry! I'm already starting on the next chapter because I'm really excited about where this is going. :) Thank you again, sweet pea! Hearts always disappear when I make them here.. So I'll give you a % back and we'll both just know it means heart from now on. ;)

Reviewer: Nymphetamine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 10:05 pm Title: Six

Actually that was the reason why I imagined Bill was holding back. I mean, I didn'tknow nor imagined that it was a serious problem such as an addiction, but I did thought he was somehow embarrassed by his past.
I'm very proud of Tom. I loved that he finally faced Bill the way he did. Good job, boy! And I'm proud and happy because Bill opened a tiny bit. :)
Can't wait for more! Lots of love to you too!!

Author's Response: You totally guessed the direction this was going! Good job. :) I'm proud of those boys for talking things out, too. And I'm happy you're still enjoying the story! Thank you so much for reading and sharing this lovely review. :*

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 09:16 pm Title: Six

Oooh how interesting, so much potential drama here...I hope Tom is able to learn enough and love Bill enough to help him conquer this. Thank you!

Author's Response: SO much potential drama. Just what I like! Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, love. I hope Tom is gonna be able to take care of Bill in the way he needs, too. :)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 08:47 pm Title: Six

i. love. adele!!!
i want a beer drinking, poker playing granny! where can i get one?

also..."You get in, you get off, and if it's great time then you do it again. It's not that complicated,” Tom said incredulously."

this was brilliant. silly and funny yet at the same time if i were to actually hear tom say those words...yeah. i'd die.

so. sex addict. okay, if i have to settle for kissing and cuddling (for a while?) i shall.

Author's Response: Dude, my granny is just like her except without the beer. I imagine she'd be out of control with the help of alcohol! I really like it when you pick up on a quote that you like and then share it with me. It makes me happyyyyy! I'd be all *-* if the real Tom said that, too. I really would.

Let's just say, there's going to be quite a few experiments of control between these boys.. Take from that what you will. :) Thanks, sis!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 07:15 pm Title: Six

Love it!

Author's Response: Thank you, love!

Reviewer: Kerlinka Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 05:45 pm Title: Six

Woah I really didn't see that coming! I really wish that Tom will be able to help him..I feel that there will be some difficulties though. Anyway I'm sooo looking forward for the next chapter and I can't wait to read about Miles next time. I really like this guy even though he showed up only in one chapter yet. I love this story very much! Have a wonderful day :)

Author's Response: It makes me happy that you like Miles! He's going to be a key part in the next chapter for sure, so I'm glad you want to read more about him. :) Thank you so much for this review, it made me smile! I hope you continue to enjoy. :)

Reviewer: Catherine Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 05:11 pm Title: Six

Didnt see that at all... ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad I could surprise you! ;)

Reviewer: TK89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/15 04:58 pm Title: Six

O - M - Lord in heaven!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Like, wow……… FUCKING AMAZING WOW!!!!!

Making him a Sex Addict????? That's something I've never read before, ever, in my entire existing (and I've read a LOT of shit)… 50 Shades doesn't compare to it, that's a different shit.

My, oh my… OHHHH MY!!!

Can you tell I'm speechless??

Argh, I love you.

Author's Response: I love this review and YOU so much! I'm so excited to be able to show you something new, and your enthusiasm seriously makes me want to write more. Thank you, love!

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