Date: 08/06/16 03:03 pm Title: Three
Ugh, I felt a little sick when Tom saw Bill and the guy kiss. This is written so well and just wrings those feelings out.
Author's Response: I'm so flattered to know that you could feel the emotion through the words! You're lovely. Have I mentioned?
Date: 08/06/16 02:46 pm Title: Two
Ohh the tension was gorgeous!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Tension is one of my favorite things to write.
Date: 08/06/16 02:31 pm Title: One
Love this first chapter! I'm super intrigued by these characters and where you're taking this. :)
Author's Response: So, I was in the process of moving when I read your reviews initially, and now here I am to respond! I got so excited when I saw your name pop up in my email. :)
Date: 08/05/16 12:30 pm Title: Fourteen
Awwww what a wonderfully happy ending for these two!
No need to be sorry at all for taking the time to complete this story. We all have our own lives to live and updating stories isn't number one priority. I do hope all is well with you, my dear :)
You're amazing and I loved this story, just like I've loved all of your other stories :)
Author's Response: It's youuu! Thank you so, so much, for your continued support and lovely words. I'm happy you enjoyed this story, I really am. YOU are amazing and I hope you're doing fabulously. Life is going well at the moment. Lots of big changes happening and I'm just trying to keep up. Sending you lots of love. <3
Date: 08/05/16 07:15 am Title: Fourteen
Wow! I was so happy when I saw this one get updated, and then I got kinda shocked when I saw that it was completed? I kinda wasn't ready for it? But I liked it, I really do. I am just going to miss it, that's all. It's been a great ride and it's been wonderful to watch Tom be there for Bill, and just supporting him. I loved this. I am so glad they found each other again. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much, sweet thing! I don't know if I was really ready for it to end, either, and if I had more time I might have continued it for a few more chapters. But, seeing as I took almost TWO years to finish the thing, I thought I shouldn't keep you all waiting anymore! I'm so happy you enjoyed it, though. Thank you for reading and being lovely. <3
Date: 08/04/16 03:53 am Title: One
I feel like it was somehow rushed? Iike you couldn't wait to just end it... I don't feel like this epilogue gave justice to the story, i'm sorry :( BUT anyway, this is the way it is so i just have to accept it and tell you that i loved it anyway because it was you who wrote it and i love your style and this story too much not to be all mushy at them going away together. Soneone said 'it feels like they are already married' and that is so true! This ending would have been perfect if only i had a few chap to really feel like there was some kind of closure for all the "problems" this couple had. But i really want you to know that i REALLY loved it anyway, like really. It's just me and my stupid head thinking what i wrote! That said, YOU MUUUUSTTT (no you don't) give us a spin offffff into their futureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *heart eyes* i know you're probably done eith them but i'm not so please please please give them a little bit more life, my imagination is not as good as your writing. Oh and, i do feel like this story was perfect even without the sex factor, and not many people can write a great story without it... But i also would like to know how their first time was sss i'm so curious like a monkey ahhh i love you *explode*
Author's Response: I definitely get where you're coming from, and honestly, I did feel a lot of pressure to complete it. Because I started this story so long ago and took so long to update I felt guilty and I just wanted to put something out there that was nice and could end it. I think if I was more inspired by the story still I might have written a really long chapter. I'm just ready to move onto other things! But, I'm really happy that you enjoyed the story nonetheless. <3 Thank you so much for being a loyal reader and always giving me your support. I love and appreciate you so much!
Date: 08/02/16 05:56 pm Title: Fourteen
I have si many mixed feelings i'm about to explode i swear
Author's Response: Tell me some of your feelings! I would love to know.
Date: 08/02/16 05:35 pm Title: Fourteen
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 08/02/16 05:21 pm Title: Fourteen
Short and hopeful, and sweet to boot *heart*
I had a good time reading this story; thank you so much for sharing it with us ^^
Author's Response: Thank YOU so much, love! I'm really happy you had a good time reading it. :)
Date: 08/02/16 03:14 pm Title: Fourteen
Hi.
Thanks for sharing with us your story.
I'm starting to read the translation at thficcion.com and I already love it.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much for coming here and showing my story some love. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Date: 08/02/16 12:12 pm Title: Fourteen
ooooooomg!!! is this the end? was this the last chapter? I can't believe it *cries* ok, first let me take some breathe because since I saw this update on "recent stories" I started to fangirl like crazy (well, you know, this has been one of my fav stories since you started posting it)so yeah...
This short final chapter was perfect. I love the fact that Tom will keep in touch with Bill even though he's moving out for college, so in my head, they're already a couple and they're married. Yup. hahahaha I think that's the fun thing about "open endings" like you let the reader continue the story in their heads, I mean, I don't like it when the story ends and I still have questions. though, this isn't the case. So, it's fine.
I've been waiting for this update for...I don't even know! and I'm so happy you finally completed it. One of the reasons is because I liked this story so much and I didn't want it to be incomplete forever. The second reason is because I can finally translate this last chapter (yaaay!), definitely this story deserves being more known by the non-english speakers so I will help with that :D
In the othe hand, thank you, thank you thank you for writing this! and I hope you get the inspiration enough to keep posting more stories here :')
Stay amazing, take care!
p.s: this is the page where I'll be posting the spanish translation of this story, my user is the same as here (I haven't it posted yet because I was waiting for the last chapter *giggles* but I'll start now! thanks again for the permission.) ----->
http://www.thficcion.com/index.php
Author's Response: This is the end!! :( You are so cute, okay. I love that this made you fangirl. Thank you so much for saying the short final chapter is perfect. Means a lot to me! I like leaving things open so, like you said, the reader can continue the story in their heads. You can fill in the blanks with whatever you want!
Date: 08/02/16 10:36 am Title: Fourteen
but...it's over? *sobs*
Author's Response: It's over. :( But, there will be something new! Promise. <3
Date: 08/02/16 04:16 am Title: Fourteen
I was so surprised when I opened THF this morning and found this! I almost didn't believe you would finished it... I love this ending and I love these boys so much! Thank you for this story!
Do you think I could translate this story for our czech site, too? I would send you a link, of course.
Author's Response: Trust me, I was surprised as well when I clicked the post button! I'm so happy you loved the ending and our boys. Thank you so much for being such a loyal reader all this time and giving me such lovely feedback. You are welcome to translate it! :)
Date: 08/02/16 03:31 am Title: Fourteen
Aw thank you so much for finishing this, it has been a joy to read from start to finish, and I absolutely love this happy ending! It really was filled with hope and these boys are just so good for each other! I love you xx
Author's Response: You sweet and lovely woman. Thank YOU for sticking with me through all this time and always giving me encouragement. I'm so happy you enjoyed the story and its ending. I love you!
Date: 08/02/16 02:25 am Title: Fourteen
Great ending! Loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, love!
Date: 07/18/16 05:30 am Title: One
Sigh
Author's Response: Posted a little something and I hope you like it.
Date: 05/26/16 08:37 am Title: One
Still hoping... d84;a039;
Author's Response: <3
Date: 05/05/16 10:48 pm Title: One
Three months … :(
Author's Response: I know, I'm terrible. :( I just posted, though!
Date: 04/10/16 03:51 pm Title: One
Hello? :* miss you and this world!
Author's Response: Hello, love. I'm so sorry I disappeared. I miss you, too!
Date: 02/10/16 02:19 am Title: Thirteen
*embarrassing squee* Aaaa! Your updates always make me feel FANTASTIC ^^ The way you write cuddles and love is contented-sigh-worthy :) And oh mylanta, Bill said he wants Tom to stay in his life! *hearts* Also, it was good to see Miles again, hehe.
And don't worry; no matter how much time you take, I'll always be coming back to this.
Author's Response: Girl, it makes me so happy that this story makes you feel goooood! I certainly enjoy writing about the love these boys share. Thank you for your sweet words. I so appreciate you always coming back to read!