Date: 05/01/23 12:28 pm Title: We Fall Through Fate
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 10/09/14 08:48 am Title: Run, Run, Run
Stunning, steamy, beautiful, I love it!
Author's Response: Wow, I'm a little late on responding to reviews lol But thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/08/14 03:25 am Title: Run, Run, Run
this was a really good story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writing it :)
Date: 10/08/14 01:06 am Title: Run, Run, Run
Ugh, OMG this was so good. I LOVE your characters, how they behave and talk. The standout in this fic is the realism IMO. It's funny, cuz even though the sex was incredible, I think the best parts are the parts in between, where they're just together in their relationship and with their feelings. The line towards the end where Tom wants to drive and make love under the stars... that was just perfect. I love the emotions in this fic. Well done!! :)
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much for the awesome review! It made may day :) I agree with you - I started the story mainly as a pwp/lemon fic, but I also wanted to get into the layers of their relationship and show the intimacy and sadness of the song. One of my favorite things about writing real life twincest is this story's perception of it. One or both of them is feeling down, but they can always make things better for each other - just by being there.
Date: 10/07/14 07:58 am Title: Run, Run, Run
Really enjoyed reading this :) what do u think of the album? Had to ask lol
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! And I think the album is perfect! Like Bill said in the story, their crown jewel! :)
Date: 10/07/14 02:07 am Title: Run, Run, Run
Loved it. Ending was perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/06/14 09:34 pm Title: Run, Run, Run
omg i loved this! it was beautiful! the thought of insecure tom breaks my heart a little. like bill said, he's always the rock!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I did so much from Bill's POV, I wanted to reveal to the readers that it wasn't just Bill having doubts. But, the point of a relationship is to get through it together :) that's what I love about the twins! They always make it together:)
Date: 10/06/14 09:31 pm Title: We Fall Through Fate
Thank you!! Someone else appreciates that the twins are still the twins!! It gets a little depressing hearing people bailing out on them simply because their music isn't the same. If you give it a chance you will see that it's still good just different and IT'S STILL THEM!!! Well, I did freak a little over LWLYB but I just imagined it as Bill being an exhibitionist for Tom and then I was alright. I know, I know. I'm such an absolute twincester. :D
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm glad you saw the meaning of this story:) I wanted to write a smut story from this era, but then I also wanted to get across the idea that Bill and Tom haven't changed at all. Btw, I think everyone freaked out about LWLYB, in one way or another lol I know I loved it! Well, thanks for reading and reviewing! So glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/06/14 06:57 pm Title: Run, Run, Run
This was an absolutely beautiful story. I was so sad for Bill in the beginning but Tom really is his knight in shining armour and came to his rescue. Loved every word of this. :)
Author's Response: Wow thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Yes, this is my favorite side of Tom to write - the loving, protective brother who will do anything for Bill :)rn
Date: 10/06/14 04:47 pm Title: Run, Run, Run
:-)
Author's Response: thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/06/14 02:06 pm Title: Run, Run, Run
It was really beautiful and a little bit sad. But amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! So glad you enjoyed it :) It was meant to be sad in the beginning, but things got better at the end!
Date: 10/01/14 04:50 am Title: We Rise Again
this is so hot!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09/30/14 04:11 am Title: We Rise Again
this is so hot!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09/29/14 03:09 pm Title: We Rise Again
That was good, I guess for the final chapter it's gonna be about the same? Confrontation, comfort and sex? Not saying it wasn't VERY well written, beautiful description of the ocean and their house and Bill's emotion and very accurate sexual graphics, it's just a little predictable. I don't know what's up for chapter three, but this has been a nice 2 chapters. Maybe I'm just too used to full out stories instead of short ones. Anyways, I'm excited to see what's next!
Author's Response: You're right, this isn't a full out story. Just a little something I did while i'm working on bigger projects. Maybe predictable, but this was simply supposed to a be a pwp/lemon story that got a little longer than I intended lol The whole point is the sex, so maybe that is predictable, but I know from experience that people enjoy reading that from me. The final chapter is not going to be the same, but I'll let you wait and see exactly what it holds :)
Date: 09/29/14 03:08 pm Title: We Rise Again
holy fuckity fuck! i bow before your smutty greatness!
Author's Response: Wow thank you!Glad you enjoyed :) you're so sweet <3
Date: 09/29/14 02:12 pm Title: We Rise Again
Amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 09/29/14 01:50 pm Title: We Rise Again
hot :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it
Date: 09/22/14 11:05 pm Title: We Fall Through Fate
excuse me. i have to go find a cigarette.
love and sex all rolled into one. who could ask for more?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your reviews are always such an encouragement :)
Date: 09/22/14 04:32 pm Title: We Fall Through Fate
This was written so deep. Felt like I was peeping. Lol.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! Your words are an encouragement :)