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Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/14 01:24 pm Title: Oneshot
Date: 09/20/14 01:24 pm Title: Oneshot
Heartbreakingly sad. You captured the sense of loss really well. I felt especially bad for Adam who knows he will always be second best to a dead man in Bill's affections. You deserve more reviews, this was a great piece of writing, but not everyone likes to read major character death.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Even if it was sad. And I understand they don't. Personally I don't either. I just write this style best.
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