Date: 09/14/15 08:00 am Title: I Can't Stay
Actually yes...I would like to read more of this. This is a very sad and attention grabbing story. Plus you are an awesome author.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'll work on it as soon as I can :)
Date: 06/25/15 07:14 pm Title: Christmas Memories
This is so sad that I cries when she was saying that Tom just smiled when they were getting divorced and took it and when he was diagnosed with ling cancer. I'm still a little shaky on understanding parts but otherwise it is great. I have a question is the after parts connected with the last after part or just another random memory after their divorce?
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thanks for leaving a review. A quick update/explanation: you may have noticed I haven't been updating No You Don't in a while, but if you are interested in it, do let me know and I'll work on it. I prefer to work on stories that have readers invested in it. This helps me save time by focusing on these particular fics instead of typing away on something people aren't even reading. :)
I'm so honored that you enjoyed the fic so far. It's one of the best things to happen to a writer to have her readers feel in regards to her writing... For that, I thank you. These memories aren't necessarily related to each other, but they do altogether form a common picture... Don't you think so?
Feel free to talk to me about the parts you're not grasping. I am more than happy and available for clarification. <3
Date: 01/04/15 12:45 am Title: Christmas Memories
Toms hospital results right? (sigh) this story is soooo sad :( still so much I am trying to understand. Why must it be so dificult cant they stay together, clearly they love each other immensly.
Author's Response: Like another reviewer commented on this very story: sometimes love just isn't enough. It's sad, but there you have it.
Date: 01/04/15 12:38 am Title: Fuck Off
Wait, holdup Im so confused so she is allowed to chill with Derek, in this chapter its made out to seem that shes might be the problem. Maybe Toms mom had a reason as to not let her near her son you know, moms always know XD But I still dont get it, poor Tom though I felt really bad for him in this chapter. :/
Author's Response: Their marriage has been shaky long before the divorce... Perhaps even from its very beginning. More on that soon. :)
Date: 01/04/15 12:30 am Title: The Edges, The Curves
What happened I thought they apologized to each other, what did he do once again? :( (sigh) will he ever learn. I have seen people on this earth get chances time and time again and they waste them time and time again. I have a feeling Tom is one of those people in this story. @Naturlich they remind me of this song please listen, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bMJkddvJ4L4 such a beautiful sad chapter :(
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! You are right; although the persona is not entirely innocent either. Both of them have given each other chances again and again, but inevitably one would be spoilt with all the opportunities to start anew. They begin to take it for granted, won't they? Thanks for the song recommendation: I will definitely listen to it. :)
Date: 01/03/15 10:55 pm Title: I Can't Stay
This story is so beautifully written and I honestly can't get over it. The chemistry and confusion between the characters makes the story so interesting! I'm excited for the next update :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm flattered that you enjoy it. I will be working on the subsequent chapter. Thanks again! :)
Date: 09/30/14 11:23 pm Title: Fuck Off
I think their childhood is what makes them who they are now :')
Date: 09/22/14 03:12 am Title: The Edges, The Curves
So they divorced because he wants to keep his, and I'm quoting 'run through quite a football team with ladies' life?
This just so sad, why would he do that?
She's already there for him and she loves him, why can't he just stop and stick to her already?
That man is lucky for having someone like her waiting for you after a tiring day, cook for you, a rock for you to stand, a shoulder to cry for, that man is lucky! :'(
Love this chapter, by the way
Author's Response: The women were not part of the reason they divorced. Thank you for the lovely review. <3
Date: 09/21/14 01:26 pm Title: The Edges, The Curves
You really can feel the confusion.... Getting addicted to your story 😍
Author's Response: Thank you so much, sweetheart! I'm working on the next chapter. Hope you'll enjoy it <3
Date: 09/21/14 01:17 pm Title: You Are Mine Said She
Beautifully written... So much emotions... Well love is just sometimes not enough right?
Date: 09/20/14 03:53 am Title: Cuckoo
Oh my god so Tom is sick :( cancer? can you imagine if the guys got that? I mean since they do smoke like chimneys :/ I love how the story is unraveling! So much difficulty (sigh) please update soon! :(
Author's Response: I certainly hope they don't! I will update ASAP. :)
Date: 09/19/14 09:18 pm Title: Cuckoo
He's sick but why doesn't he want her ex-wife to be there for him?
Sure somewhere in his heart he would want her to be there. What's going to happen to her? I hope she stays strong. :'(
Great story, though
Author's Response: Tom was not the one who decided that her presence is undesirable. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/17/14 09:33 pm Title: You Are Mine Said She
OH MY GOD :'0
Date: 09/16/14 10:58 pm Title: You Are Mine Said She
This is sooo fucking sad :( she is like completely numb to his emotional outbursts i bet from all the hurt he has implicated upon her in the past. :( I feel sad fro tom because he finally sees what he had, what he use to have and now everything has changed. :( so much pain in this story, like an impossible love. I love the hurt in this story i cant imagine every having a relationship like that.
Author's Response: The sad thing is, relationships like Tom and the persona's are everywhere. Those involved make it their life's mission to keep the pain under wraps. I'm here to show the scars to you. :) Thanks for reading. <3
Date: 09/16/14 10:37 pm Title: Miracle Number Two
Omg I was reading so fast because I Just had to know if EZ made it, poor baby. :( I hope he fully recovers, ok so I am understanding that she took the babies away from Tom. There must be a reason or maybe Tom did something bad. Love this chapter!
Author's Response: Hopefully we'll see why soon. :)
Date: 09/15/14 04:53 pm Title: Miracle Number Two
You know what I think its such a great idea to write a story abiut future Tom when so many focus on the present or even the past. I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you again, darling! The idea has occurred to me for a while, and of course: I needed a huge issue that happened in between... Why not a divorce? Let's see how it goes. :)
Date: 09/15/14 04:44 pm Title: I Can't Stay
Oh my god I am in tears😭 so emitional. Really well written love. Now I cant stop reading
Author's Response: Danke, danke! So glad you liked it, beautiful <3
Date: 09/15/14 03:49 am Title: Miracle Number Two
OH MY GOD IT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I ADMIT I ALMOST CRIED :')
Author's Response: <3
Date: 09/14/14 11:36 pm Title: Miracle Number Two
This was absolutely beautiful! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: You make me smile so hard! Thank you so much!
Date: 09/14/14 11:32 pm Title: That Sweet Smell
Wow, this chapter as so great! It was so realistic and sad, I had tears in my eyes at the end. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Just realized I never responded to this... Although it was a while back, it bugs me to not respond to my readers' reviews. Thanks again for reading! <3