Date: 05/01/23 12:45 pm Title: Back to School
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 08/13/15 09:25 am Title: Back to School
My gosh please please please...I am begging you to please make a sequel, you will be my savior. Please..sequel.
Author's Response: Hey sarah! Thanks alot for your review. really appreciate ur time. Well... Since i'm busy with work life n all , i can't promise you for a continuation, but maybe I might. I need ideas n all. :)
Date: 03/02/15 01:54 pm Title: Back to School
Myy goddd!! I was shedding tears at the last few chaptersTwT thank you for writing this story!!!
Author's Response: hey! Thank you for reading it. I'm glad you liked it. check out my other story I posted ''WORDS" :)
Date: 02/25/15 01:45 pm Title: Back to School
Yay!!! :D If so, I'm waiting for it. Love youuuu... I just really like the story.xD
Date: 02/25/15 02:10 am Title: The change *REPOST*
love your story from start to finish. even the ending was perfect
Author's Response: thank you so much! I appreciate it. Ur time meant alot to me.
Date: 02/24/15 12:00 pm Title: The change *REPOST*
I would love a sequal
Author's Response: hmm..even i feel so, there would b a sequel :) i am thinkgng abt that.
Date: 02/24/15 09:26 am Title: The change *REPOST*
A much better end than the first :) I would like, if there will be a sequel :)
Author's Response: thanK GOD! finally! Hehe thnk u. I tried to make it look original. I am also thinking to continue the story,but i would require some help in it.:(
Date: 02/24/15 04:48 am Title: The change *REPOST*
Awh so sad :( I really need a sequel in which Bill and Tom meet again, because they belong together :)
Author's Response: thanks alot! I am happy u like it. I am thinking of a sequal as well 4 my other story 'words'.
Date: 02/24/15 03:17 am Title: The change *REPOST*
When it was just narrative written it wasn't very sad. But now that you made it dialogue, it's really depressing. I feel like all their wmotions are sent to my soul. But it's still very beautiful written and it's very deep and emotional. I really will miss this story.
Author's Response: really? Aww., u r sweet. Thanks alot,but i am thinking of a sequal. Hehehe
Date: 02/14/15 12:29 pm Title: Back to School
Naaa, I dont think I would like them privat. But the imagination of Tom and Bill as a pairing is really nice.
Yeah, I'am from near dresden.
Author's Response: Awww...:) lucky. If I was a German...I swear I'd never shut up xD cos the language is so tongue twisting. German boys are so tall? How are the boys in Germany? Are they hot like tom n bill?
Date: 02/14/15 11:46 am Title: Back to School
If you want - I would be happy!
Naa, I didnt. I'm not a Tokio Hotel fan. I just write and read BillxTom FF's. Acutally I didnt know there was already a concert. Thought the first concerts will be in march.
Author's Response: I am not a crazy fan too,but Bill n tom are like dream boys in real life :) their existence is just so unique. I like how mysterious they are. You are from Germany? Yeah?
Date: 02/14/15 11:35 am Title: Back to School
Yeah ... Maybe you could delete the last chapter and write a story that continues this (with a sad beginning - with other reasons why they are not togehter)? Or just edit the last chapter, so that the reasons different?
I dont know ... I actually would be really sad if the last chapter stays the way it is - I liked the story (what I read of it) and it would be sad if the end would be ruin the story.
But sure - It is your story, so you can do with it what you want :)
Thanks for not being angry with me :)
Author's Response: Alright...then I'll try to change it. :) if that's possible. I'll need some time to think about it. BTW have you been to their recent feel it all concert?
Date: 02/14/15 11:16 am Title: Back to School
If Gordon is happy for bill, and then didnt allowed them to be together, its for me, a chaning mind.
So he was sorry he didnt showed Bill love and he is happy, that bill can show love ... and then he took Bill what Bill loved - Tom ... Sorry, that still dont make any sense. It is even worse ...
I understand, that if you wanted to end it this way, you let it and this way. Im author myself - as a hobby and as work.
But as a honest reader, I review honest.
And I have to admit, that I would like if you write a story that continues this story, but I dont know if i want/will read it, if this and stays the way it is.
Even if there is any chance that gordons desicison could be realistic - if tom and bill were THAT much in love, they just would have met in town - or wherever.
I can see it how I want, there is no way for me, to see logic in the last chapter ... The whole chapter doesnt make sense.
It just ruins the whole story.
If you wanted to be saperated at the end, you could have used soooo many reasons for it. Like Bill was afraid to ever hurt tom, or criminals that are behind him or what ever ...
I just should forget the last chapter. Then it would be fine ...
Author's Response: Yes....I understand. No problem. I took it positively. I was hoping to continue the story,but it would seem odd. And since Bill and Tom didn't have much time to know each other n what exactly happened with Bill, I thought of typing a continuation in a new story. I also felt that the decision what Gorden made would make the readers feel that he is a father who is concerned about his reputation. As compared with other Gordens in stories or as a fathers role, I thought of giving it a little twist. About Bill and Tom's communication,after Bill went away and why he never kept in touch with him will be a continuation in the second part if maximum readers wish for it. :) your time really meant a lot to me and I am thankful for letting me know your point of view.
Date: 02/14/15 10:55 am Title: Back to School
Actually its no fun part, when I cant see the sense in it and I dont know, if there will be a story, that will continue this ...
I feel really sad about it, and I dont want anything bad, so please dont be angry with me. I'm just really dissapointed.
And yeah, Gordon changed his mind? why should he? He is an aduld. A guy, that relised a few improtend things in the situation at the and of the chapter before the last. And than he changed out of the sky his mind a few seconds later? I dont think there will be a reason that could be realistic.
I just ... yeah, I'm just dissapointed. I was so happy when you saw, that you finished the story, and then I saw the end ... It looks like you didnt wanted to write more and just finished the story, without looking at the logic. Like you didnt liked your story at the end.
If there wouldnt be the last chapter, it would be totally fine. But the last chapter (the epiloge) ruined for me the whole story.
Sorry ...
Author's Response: Oooo...I am sorry,but I really wanted the readers to feel confused. I also didn't mention in the second last chapter, that Gorden changed his mind and stopped them. he saw Bill's pain, but he did it for his reputation and to punish Bill. There you go...I said it :) that was the reason. But there are many more. I really wanted the story to end like this. I wish to have maximum votes to continue the story :D
Date: 02/14/15 10:18 am Title: Back to School
WTF ... I dont get it ... I have to admit I didnt read the whole story, because I always wait for a story, to be finished - so I can read a finished story and because I dont read storys with bad ends.
So I saw the bad end and read the last to chapter ... And I really dont get it. At the end of the chapter before the last, gordon is happy that bill can show love, and embaressed, because he didnt showed love to bill.
And in the last chapter tom is talking about a bad gordon who didnt allowed him, to stay in touch with bill. Sorry, that doesnt make sense.
And Bill was so happy at the end of the chapter before the last, that he can see tom again, and then he didnt answered his mails?
It ... It makes me sad, because I spoiled myself here and than, when I read a bit of the chapters (And the story was good!). And now there is a bad end that dont make sense ... :(
Author's Response: I know...but that's the mystery....:) I am greatful you read it all. But I am planning to make a continuation of the story. I did not go in details and deep in the last chapter so I could make the readers feel curious. :) I left some parts as to y Garden changed his mind. If u wish for a continuation, then just ask for it. I know this made u feel angry,but that's the fun part :)
Date: 02/14/15 09:49 am Title: Back to School
Yes!!! I would totally like a "to be continue" thing. :D And don't worry about grammatical errors, there are not very many. The main thing is to be a good and interesting story. :)
Author's Response: Uumm..okay,but I need majority votes cos then it wouldn't make a point to update coz some readers like the end to be like this :) if others wish for a continuation,then I'll work on it :)
Date: 01/15/15 04:50 pm Title: Back to School
Yay, they're together again! ;-; Although you tagged 'Major Character Death' so I'm scared at the same time.
Author's Response: Thanks alot for reading :) you inspire me to think more:) eemm.. I still gotta figure out the end. Xoxo
Date: 01/15/15 11:31 am Title: The heart prayers
Awwww! How romantic and emotional. I love it so, so much, God, I don't know what to do with myself. I'm crying with crocodile tears right now. :')
Author's Response: Yesss!! U like it! :) thanks so so so much! You inspired me to continue :) I hope to update soon. My sister's wedding is coming soon plus i have exams coming up so, hope to update.
Date: 01/15/15 03:37 am Title: The heart prayers
So beautiful! They are together! I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks alot for reading:) hope u enjoyed reading.
Date: 01/15/15 01:46 am Title: The heart prayers
Cute and yesss
Author's Response: Thanks alot for holding on n reading. Your time means alot to me.