Date: 10/06/25 10:45 pm Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
I wanted more of Bill bottoming..
Date: 08/07/20 03:04 am Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
Nice ending! Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks for reading such an old story. I hope it was enjoyable!! :)
Date: 02/07/16 04:18 am Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
this was a good story!!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Ah! I love random reviews on old stories. I'm so glad you liked this fic. :) It's one of my favs. Unfortunately, I'm pretty sure I won't be writing a sequel to this one. Sorry.
Date: 10/10/14 05:56 pm Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
I'm so, so happy the twins ended up really together like that, and didn't let the Gs disapproval(well, Georg's really) get in the way of their relationship. And really, it serves the Gs right that they now have to listen to the twin's sex sounds. If they hadn't tricked Bill and Tom into swapping clothes in the first place they might never have realised their attraction to each other. So the Gs only have themselves to blame. LOL!!! Great chapter; great story. Thank you.
Author's Response: Tehehehe, yeah, it's kind of slap in the face to the G's, eh? Like, "it's all your fault". lol. Glad you got it. :) Thank you for the review, I'm so happy you enjoyed this! I hope the twin dynamic fell into place correctly and it wasn't too sappy in the end, like with Tom showing his vulnerability, and Bill coming around as well, etc. I'm still afraid it moved a bit fast, but it is what it is. Thanks again. :)
Date: 10/08/14 11:07 pm Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
haha its ottayy.. though i totally forgot it wasnt over yet O.O
Author's Response: Oh my gosh... that's my fault that is, for keeping you all waiting so long! Yikes. Forgive me!! :( I hope u enjoyed the ending nonetheless. :)
Date: 10/08/14 08:39 pm Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
i love geo's expression in that picture. it says to me "yeah, i heard them fucking. i can never unhear it. kill me now."
Author's Response: OMG you crack me up!! ROFL! I didn't even Photoshop that part, that's just the look he had in that pic. Hahahaha. But oh jeezz.. I didn't think of that at all, but now that you've said that, that's all I'm seeing on poor Georg's face also. haha!
Date: 10/08/14 04:18 pm Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
:-)
Author's Response: Thank u. :)
Date: 10/08/14 03:11 pm Title: WE ALL FALL DOWN
Amazing and funny! Thank you!
Author's Response: Wow, hehe, you read it already! I just got around to catching up with reviews. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying and reviewing. :)
Date: 09/13/14 01:47 am Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
Love it. Please please please please please post more soon.
Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou! :) I'm super sorry I took so long to post the last chapter, even after u asked so nicely. :( It's the longest I've ever taken between updates, and I'm sorry! But it's up now, and this fic is done, and I hope you'll like the ending.
Date: 09/11/14 11:31 pm Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
OMG!!! O.O
Author's Response: OMG, I KNOW. hehe. Thank you. :)
Date: 09/11/14 10:43 pm Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
OMFG TROLOLOLOLOLO DRAMA BOMB!!! .... i was literally spazzing und yelling SHIT! multiple times XDD
Author's Response: OMG, tell me about it! hehehe. Honestly, thank u so much for this review, cuz I feel the same every time I read this chapter. It's probably my fav I've ever written. I don't normally write physical violence -- it doesn't come naturally to me to put myself in the shoes of ppl who would ever throw a punch -- but I kind of love that there's a tad in this fic. It feels good to have pushed myself there. And I just love the (I know I'm quoting myself here, but I love this part, hehe) -- "YOU BLEW YOUR OWN FUCKING BROTHER! That's what! What the FUCK is wrong with you?!" -- Oh man, I swear I'm a fan of my own writing when it comes to this chapter. hehe. Pardon for my vain self-flattering rant, I know my writing isn't perfect, but it hits a pleasure-center w me this one.
Date: 09/11/14 11:47 am Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
Holy. Fuck. You have to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be slowly dying until you do!!! Aaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!! How dare Georg!!!!! And Gustav too!?!?! The poor twins!!
Author's Response: OMG, it's reviews like this that kill me... I'm so sorry to have made you (and every other reader as well) wait so long for this last chapter. It's the longest wait for an update I've taken, and I really apologize. It's posted now though, so I hope you'll like the ending. :) Ch.7 doesn't elaborate too much on the G's dealing with the aftermath of such a blow-up in Ch.6, but I needed to do everything I could to just wrap things up and end this story. When I was writing it, I felt it was getting too long, and decided to focus on what ppl really wanted in the end: twincest. Hehe. :) Thank you for the review, made my day when I read it. :)
Date: 09/11/14 07:05 am Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
Wow! *O*
That was one way to find out :3. Awesome chapter! Waiting for the update ^___^
Author's Response: I KNOW, RIGHT!?!?? Hahaha, I've always wanted to write something crazy like this, with more action -- action as in yelling and fighting -- not action as in bedroom-action. lol. I write enough twincest bedroom action. Anyway, thank u so much for your lovely review. I just posted the last chapter... super sorry for the long wait. Hope you like it!! :)
Date: 09/10/14 10:30 pm Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
Uh-oh, there's a sex tape and if I know a thing or two about those is they're never good. I hope they delete it. And I hope everything works out for them. Georg didn't handle this very well. Thank goodness for Gustav and Bill or Georg would've turned into puppy chow and we'd have to feed it to Pumba.
Author's Response: You bring up a funny point actually... I never thought about the sex-tape leaking. HAHAHA. Gosh, I don't wanna put the twins through that much hell in this story, especially since there's only one part left, too little time. Actually, I just posted the last/7th chapter, so there's no part left, but at the time.... yeah. You get what I'm rambling about. So anyways, I couldn't for the life of me write all the drama of a sex-tape leaking, and a good final smut scene(s) in the last chapter, and all the feels, and deal with the G's having found out about the twins, and the ending of the horrible-no-good-very-bad week of trading clothing, and tie it all together with a little bow... it would have been a million words long. lol. But I do like the way your devilish mind works. I'll keep that idea in mind for another fic maybe. :) Thank you for your review.
Date: 09/10/14 09:15 pm Title: IN THE HANDS OF STUPID PEOPLE
Perfect! I'm stil laughing! :DDD
Author's Response: Oh good! :) I pride myself on some of the humor in the fic. Super glad it comes across. Thank you. :)
Date: 08/22/14 11:18 pm Title: DAMAGES
More more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Teehee, that's so cute. I take it that makes u like this fic? :) I just posted Ch.6, which happens to be one of my fav things I've ever written. Please enjoy. :)
Date: 08/20/14 02:44 am Title: DAMAGES
8C aw man i wasnt first..
oh well thats what you get when youre slow XDD
lovedd it ;) haha cant wait for more ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, darling, I'm so glad u like this fic. :) Ch.6 just went up btw -- sorry for the delay.
Date: 08/19/14 07:33 pm Title: DAMAGES
So yeah. This chapter was basically perfect.
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you, that's very high praise. Very glad u think so. :) Enjoy Ch.6, I just put it up, sorry for the wait. Hope you'll like it just as much. :)
Date: 08/14/14 02:54 pm Title: SIDE EFFECTS
The twincest is real! OMB, I can't wait for the rest. This is getting so damn good. That shower scene was hot too.
Author's Response: HAHA, you're sweet. Thank you. :) If you think it's good (Thankyouthankyouthankyou, your reviews make me happy!), it's only gonna get better! Ch.5 is up now, and I'm getting excited for the remaining chapters of this fic cuz I LOVE THEM, lol. When does an author ever say that? lol.
Btw, I know this is a typo on your end, but "OMB" is making me think "Oh My Bob" and I'm LMAO.
Date: 08/13/14 10:18 pm Title: SIDE EFFECTS
FIRST REVIEW ON NEW CHAPPIE~!!!!! (haha sorry... realleh determined to be the first~ haha... now i have to read it~)
Author's Response: OMG you're a dork! That's so cute. ROFL, and you made me laugh like CRAZY, I'm still laughing, lol. Honestly. :)