Date: 03/20/08 06:17 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
"Tomi! You're so muscled! Do you work out? No, of course you don’t, not the way NORMAL people do anyway… You better not smell like the girl you’ve been with last night!” Bill scowled, being forced to listen to his brother’s complete make-out session with the nameless chick, and actually being forced to ENDURE it, he was now ready to claim his compensation.
He pulled the shirt off Tom's head, and threw it in the corner. After that he pushed Tom down on the pillows, and nudged the crotch of the triple XL-sized jeans with his nose.
"Bill! What the hell you doin'?! Get your fucking nose away from my crotch, you pervert! What if someone finds us? Go away- Ahh!"
Tom felt his jeans being tugged off his slim hips, and tried to pull the blankets over his "evidence of manhood". (But that wasn't really helpful, since I'm the writer of this fic, and I've decided that Tom is… rather large ^_^)
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HOLY CRAP THIS IS HILARIOUS!! AND HOTT! I love it. Great great job. *faves*
Author's Response: thanks! :D Good God, I still have to read your stories! that is, I read them, but I still have to comment on them ^^() SOrry. I totally forgot. Will do soon!
Date: 03/20/08 06:04 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
hahahahahaha that was sooooo funny!! i really love it!!XDXDXD all of it was great! write more! bye ;)
Author's Response: thanks a lot :) Glad you liked it ^^
Date: 03/20/08 04:50 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
ahaha keeps making me laugh...good un ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! :D If you guys are happy then I'm happy :D
Date: 03/20/08 04:40 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
Haha, awesome ! :] I think that the chapter end notes are funny xD :P
Author's Response: Lol, the chapter end notes? XD thanks.. I guess.. haha. I was serious though, that commercial was SO funny! XD I wish I'd recorded it.. hehe
Date: 03/20/08 04:37 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
ahahahaha... this was so funny...
seriously... lmao
I'm adding you to my favorite authors, 'cause this was freakin' awsome.
Write more like this one yes?
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm flattered hahaha. I think I'll write more like this. I've tried the more-parts-stories, they really don't work for me, so I'll just stick to the one-shots ^^rnAnother one is coming up soon! :D
Date: 03/20/08 04:27 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
omg
finally someone who rights a story about to getting fucked by bill
i love you for this
not to mention this was hella funny
great job
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought so too, it gets kinda boring to read about Tom being on top every single time ;p
Date: 03/20/08 03:59 pm Title: A Curious Bill is Nothing but Trouble!
AHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my god, I'm still laughing! xD Was this to be taken serious, then I'm sorry.. XD I laughed all the way thorugh it! And the way they keep talking, like they're not fucking? xD haha! Brilliant!
Author's Response: well, I categorized it as humor, didnt I? :P Im glad you liked it! ^^