Date: 06/30/14 05:20 pm Title: Week Three: Numb
It seems wrong to say I enjoyed this because its such a tragic story, but you wrote it so cleverly from Bill's POV through his letters to Tom. It was a great read, thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was hoping that a tragic story would make for a good read.
Date: 06/29/14 07:51 pm Title: Week Three: Numb
I loved that it didnt have a happy ending. It's real and it shows just how far someone can really go when they lose someone or when they're pushed to their limits. I loved that his parents werent really supportive. Its very realistic that they wouldnt understand him. I loved it. It showed just how tragic things can turn out for anyone, when they dont have help.
Author's Response: I am in love with your deep reviews. Thanks so much for reading rn
Date: 06/29/14 03:45 pm Title: Week Two: Anger, Sadness and Pain
I wish this was a bad dream...and the conclusion: Bill wakes up and Tom is sleeping next to him...
Author's Response: That's so sweet. I like that idea.
Date: 06/29/14 03:16 pm Title: Week Two: Anger, Sadness and Pain
I love all the emotions that Bill is feeling. How Bill hates him, loves him, misses him, blames him, blames himself. All of it is so chaotic, yet understandable because in the end, he really doesn't know how to feel about what happened and still can't bring himself to move on and keep living. I'm really on the edge of my seat wondering about why Tom killed himself and how Bill's life is going to pan out.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I was trying to illustrate how frazzled he is and the next one is currently in production.
Date: 06/29/14 11:07 am Title: Week One: Confusion And Repition
I love that focus isn't so much about the drama, but more about how Bill is learning to cope with the loss of a loved one. It's a very painful feeling to loose someone, that can't easily be described. I think it's very realistic that Bill can't seem to move on and is actually doing something healthy to help him cope with Tom's death, and writing letters to him. Overall I love it. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I am currently writing the next one and it is going to be interesting.
Date: 06/29/14 01:08 am Title: Week One: Confusion And Repition
Not exactly sure what to think about this one. Need the other parts to see where this is going. You certainly got me interested and looking forward to the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks so much I'll be posting the next one later on today or Monday.rn