Date: 03/05/23 06:58 pm Title: Falling Again
Holy hell. These poor twins. First Tom is a total insensitive asshole and then he's crippled by his fear of giving up control for his brother. It was a great read though and I like how it worked out for them in the end with Tom giving in. So angsty with tortured characters, but so good!
Date: 06/15/20 04:17 am Title: I Trust You
this was a really good story!
I hope that there is a sequel to this!
Date: 08/30/14 01:18 am Title: I Trust You
Oh... my god. I don't have words, oh my god, I don't have any fucking words. Holy hell, that was so fucking hot. Normally I'm not a fan of botTom but damn. Just... damn. I don't have anything profound to say. I'm dead, you slay me. Fuck.
Date: 08/29/14 11:31 am Title: I Trust You
This botTom was the best I ever read!!! :o
Date: 08/29/14 09:45 am Title: I Trust You
That was GOOD!! Hotdamn! *fans self*
Date: 08/28/14 07:16 am Title: I Trust You
Sweet sex. I absolutly loved it. Bill and Tom r made for each other. Nice chap yo!
Date: 08/28/14 03:37 am Title: I Trust You
Incredible...well worth the wait. Possibly the best botTom I've read. Looking forward to the concluding chapter.
Date: 08/27/14 10:02 pm Title: I Trust You
I loved that even thought Tom says that he trusts Bill, he has serious doungs until he very last moment...feeling emasculated and wondering if he can even take it.
But i'm happy to see that Tom finally let go of all of his doubts and fully trusted Bill, letting himself just...enjoy it and not think about it happening.
Author's Response: Sometimes in writing its hard not to just let things happen so easily - so easily that it might be unrealistic. I wanted it to be realistic in that Tom was still a little fearful and doubtful even after he accepted his trust for Bill. But I also think it's realistic that Bill was able to support him through it and fulfill Tom's expectations even better than he thought :)
Date: 08/27/14 10:01 pm Title: I Trust You
i think...i don't hate botTom as much as i used to...
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! For me, that is a huge compliment. I, myself, love botTom, but I know some people don't, so I'm happy I convinced you to like it :) and for me, the sex is not always about who's on top or bottom. It's the emotions, intimacy and love. for me, that is the best part, and I think Bill and Tom can finally have that :)
Date: 07/31/14 04:57 pm Title: Through The Fire
*fans self* Is it hot in here? I think it's a little hot in here. o_o Ugh, I have to say, you never fail to get a bitch worked UP. And I just want to let you know how amazing your description of the dream was- twas pretty amazing, if I can say. *nods*
Author's Response: haha thank you so much! Its always my intent to get bitches worked up! Glad to see it's still working after 12 chapters lolrnrnTHANK YOU for mentioning the dream sequence! It was personally my favorite part of the chapter. A catalyst to finally make Tom realize how much he needs Bill :)rn
Date: 07/31/14 12:45 am Title: Change The Ending
im back from the dead~!!!!!!!!
hahaz... ja i've fallen behind a bit... i've been hanging out with friends... but i've finally decided to read~!!!
Author's Response: No worries!I'm glad you're still keeping up and enjoying the story!:) thanks for stopping to drop a review
Date: 07/30/14 12:22 pm Title: Through The Fire
Quick review from my phone as I'm on holiday in Scotland right now. I can see how giving up control is such an issue for Tom since he certainly likes to make the decisions and doesn't easily take 'no' for an answer from Bill. So happy he's decided he needs Bill so much he's willing to give up that control to his twin. Can't wait for the next chapter but I'll be sad if it's the last. Please update soon. Hugs Helen x
Author's Response: Aww thanks for stopping to review! I'm glad you're enjoying it so much . . . It's going to take a lot on both Bill's and Tom's parts to make this relationship work; it's always been full of hurdles and they are still making it :) There may be two more chapters; I will be sad too! But I will be back soon with a new story! I hope you'll keep following!
Date: 07/29/14 01:25 am Title: Through The Fire
They're finally getting somewhere! Nicely done, Shadow_Lover!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Patricia! You helped a lot!
Date: 07/28/14 12:46 pm Title: Through The Fire
i call this progress!
Author's Response: Progress at last!!! BotTom, coming soon! Stay tuned:)
Date: 07/28/14 10:25 am Title: Through The Fire
Ahhhhh! so intense! SO GOOD moremoremore
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! I'm working hard to bring you botTom soon
Date: 07/28/14 05:26 am Title: Through The Fire
He finally realized that he trusts Bill. I love the way they need each other, their sweetness and passion. Amazing job!!!
Author's Response: Tom always knew he trusted Bill; he just couldn't accept it in the situation . . . When he took all the fear and pride away, he realized there's really nothing to worry about:) Thank you for reviewing! I hope to be updating soon:)
Date: 07/28/14 01:08 am Title: Through The Fire
plz update soon
Author's Response: I'm working on getting some botTom going as fast as I can:)
Date: 07/28/14 12:49 am Title: Through The Fire
I love that Bill keeps Tom at a distance to force him to decide ehat he wants from Bill. And I love that Tom is still being a typical guy and being very scared and insecure about being on bottom and being penetrated.
I loved that Tom's nightmare was an obvious reflection of how he doesnt want to loose Bill and how he obviously needs him. Hopefully it makes him make that tough decision.
Author's Response: Tom is slowly beginning to accept the idea . . . Soon, he's gonna realize he likes it;) hehe . . . Thanks for mentioning the nightmare - it was my favorite part of this chapter :D i felt clever writing it lol
Date: 07/24/14 04:53 pm Title: Change The Ending
Ack- I'm such a jackass for forgetting to review the last chapter. And awh, I really love how they're working it all out... makes me all fuzzy on the insides. :}
Author's Response: Well, I feel like a jackass for taking so long to answer reviews! lol Glad you enjoyed the chapter . . . I myself am so glad to see them finally being happy together. It was a long time coming:)