Date: 06/24/14 10:13 pm Title: So, This Is How We End?
Uhh...blood and tearing, much? :(((
Author's Response: Poor Bill:( but he's not done fighting yet! He's not gonna stop till he gets what he wants! I'll be updating soon because I hate to leave it at this lol
Date: 06/24/14 08:40 pm Title: So, This Is How We End?
Well damn. That was fantastic. Not just the sex, but the intense emotions that each person was feeling. The fact that they were angry tense and shameful added to the reality of it. I absolutely adored it. I also loved that Tom admitted that he doesn't hate Bill, that he hates himself.
Author's Response: Thank you! Your review is an encouragement. Everyone else is just saying they're mad at Tom! I'm glad you pointed out that tom is admitting his self hate, which I thought made his side more understandable. Of course Bill should be exteneky mad at him. Anyway thanks for dropping a review! Can't wait to see what you'll say next chapter:)
Date: 06/24/14 04:33 pm Title: An Ultimatum
Really really good, I'm definitely into it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you are enjoying it:) I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/23/14 09:32 am Title: An Ultimatum
This just keeps getting better!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it and thank you for reviewing! I'll be updating soon:)
Date: 06/23/14 12:40 am Title: An Ultimatum
I love how different their incestuous relationship is from all the others on here. I love that Tom can't seem to love Bill in a romantic way. It much more realistic that Tom is confused.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I always try to make my stories realistic and believable and unique. Thank you for stopping to review. I'll be updating soon:)
Date: 06/22/14 10:59 pm Title: An Ultimatum
his women or his brother? how can this be a difficult choice?
and yay for bill standing up for himself!
Author's Response: Yes it should be an obvious choice for Tom but I think he's scared of accepting his sexuality and desire for Bill... And Bill is about to turn into a dog with a bone. He's not letting go till he gets what he wants! Lol I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/22/14 07:43 pm Title: An Ultimatum
wow, Bill kinda shocked me but he's right. Tom should choose what he really want
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! You're totally right. Tom needs to make up his mind if he wants bill or not. I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/22/14 04:15 pm Title: An Ultimatum
Cool story! develops very nicely,
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm really happy you're enjoying it!:)
Date: 06/22/14 03:31 pm Title: An Ultimatum
I didn't just like it. I LOVED IT! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! It's reviews like these that keep me going! I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/22/14 10:00 am Title: Falling Again
More!! This is really good.
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it and stopped to review:) I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/21/14 10:58 pm Title: Falling Again
Poor Bill. He deserves better.
Author's Response: Yes he does and very soon he's going to realize that! I'll be updating soon
Date: 06/21/14 06:26 pm Title: Falling Again
tom's a dick, even if he does have a cock that swings like an incoming hammer.
*goes to hang out in the bathroom with bill*
Author's Response: As always, love your reviews! Yep Tom's a dick but bill is gonna teach him a lesson;) I'll be updating soon
Date: 06/21/14 12:15 pm Title: Falling Again
I actually love how different your story is. Normally when Tom and Bill have some secret incestuous relationship, Tom is alot sweeter to Bill in the bedroom. I love how you described them together. How they have such a loving brotherly bond in front of everyone, how Tom adores Bill in real life, but how his whole persona changes behind closed doors. I loved it, its unexpected and it's definitely gotten off to an amazing start. I ansolutely cannot wait for more.
Author's Response: Aww thank you. That makes me so relieved. I thought some people might be mad because I'm making tom such an ass lol but I'm glad you saw the uniqueness of it:) I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/21/14 10:03 am Title: Falling Again
Really nice start, I feel so sorry for Bill. Update soon :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it and that you feel Bill's pain. But soon he's gonna realize he needs to stand up for himself:) I promise speedy updates
Date: 06/21/14 03:19 am Title: Falling Again
Great start!!!! Can't wait for the updates!
Author's Response: Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it! I promise speedy updates! :)
Date: 06/20/14 11:21 pm Title: Falling Again
Oh yeah...Tom's an ass! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: lol I guess that means you don't hate me:))) i'll be updating soonrn