Date: 07/06/14 10:56 pm Title: A Statement
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you've enjoyed it!
Date: 07/01/14 08:51 pm Title: One Last Try
ah mi gott... ;-; well i guess i must wait now...
Author's Response: I appreciate all your reviews! Hopefully you won't have to wait too long! I've got things pretty planned out:)
Date: 07/01/14 06:41 pm Title: Stalemate
haha yes Attention, i love that song... along with countless others XDD
Author's Response: Glad you noticed when a lot of other people didn't say anything! I love that song too and it fit perfectly with the theme of the story:)
Date: 07/01/14 04:15 pm Title: One Last Try
More, please!!!! I'm addicted! :)
Author's Response: Maybe in a couple days *evil laughter* no lol I've got this thing planned out so don't over excite yourself haha updates are coming!
Date: 07/01/14 03:32 pm Title: An Ultimatum
Ooh ultimatum!!!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it! I've got more chapters coming!:)
Date: 07/01/14 03:24 pm Title: Falling Again
Tom may be an asshole... but I'm still reading it! Lol
Date: 07/01/14 02:55 am Title: One Last Try
Ugh so painful but I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying it despite the pain. But trust me, it'll all be worth it eventually! Updates coming soon!
Date: 07/01/14 12:03 am Title: One Last Try
0.0 *le gasp*
Author's Response: I know lol I don't know how I do these things to them! Somehow they're gonna make it out in one piece! Updates coming soon:)
Date: 06/30/14 11:10 pm Title: One Last Try
I loved all the way that you compared a clock ticking, to it being a timer and counting down to the end of their relationship. I love that Bill and Tom are both feeling as though nothing can ever be amended and that its almost the end of them being twins, even. Its very captiviatig and very real that Tom is too scared and too prideful to give in to what Bill wants.
As for Bill blowing Tom, to me it didnt seen like he was doing it out of lust, but more so out of that insatiable desire to have something of Tom's that no one else has. I loved over all that they both felt at the end of the chapter, that they can't be twins anymore.
Great job. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful reviews! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter so much and understand the point that I was trying to get across with each character. Yes, Tom can be mean to Bill, but he's just trying to cover up how scared he is. And Bill just wants to be with him so much, but he can only see the real version of his brother when he is asleep and defenseless:( I promise to fix it though:) updates are coming soon!
Date: 06/30/14 10:18 pm Title: One Last Try
Bill kinda shocked me what he did but Tom even more.
Author's Response: Yes, this moment will be a turning point in the story. Updates coming soon!
Date: 06/28/14 12:23 pm Title: Stalemate
This story is just AMAZING!!! It has love, lust, drama... Looking forward for the updates!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm flattered by your kind words:) I promise to update soon!
Date: 06/28/14 10:16 am Title: Stalemate
Niiice nod to Attention. I really like this fic
Author's Response: Thank you for noticing the Attention lyrics. No one else has commented about it lol thank you for reading, reviewing, and enjoying! Updates are coming soon!
Date: 06/27/14 10:55 pm Title: Stalemate
nice. i kinda hope for Tom to feel how Bill feels every time so maybe he would understand what everything means to Bill
Author's Response: I agree. Maybe if they exchanged places for a little while, they would both come to a better understanding. They're both going to have to make a big effort to get everything resolved, but I promise a happy ending! Updates are coming soon!
Date: 06/27/14 09:54 pm Title: Stalemate
I loved the way that Bill feels when he discusses being on top. It seems like he wants to do it at first as a form of revenge and humiliation, but then towards the end, he wants it to be more about being equal and having something of Tom's that no one else has had.
I also loved that Tom feels humiliated, degraded, and so emasculated by even THINKING about being on bottom for Bill. It's much more realistic for his macho personality. Great job over all.
Author's Response: Thank you! I always appreciate your reviews!:)This story is actually a rewrite, and in the original version, Bill DID take top out of revenge, but when I started reading over it, I thought it would be a much better and meaningful end to the story. And you're totally right - Tom's gonna have to get over his fear of being on bottom if he even wants to think about getting back in Bill's good graces lol Anyway, I'll be updating soon! Keep the awesome reviews coming!
Date: 06/27/14 09:26 pm Title: Stalemate
oh this is so not over!
Author's Response: You're absolutely right! Tom and Bill just THINK it is lol Got a busy next couple of days. Hopefully I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/27/14 12:59 am Title: So, This Is How We End?
Whoa...I don't think I even blinked while reading this! So anxious for more!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it that much!:) I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/25/14 04:44 pm Title: So, This Is How We End?
I really dislike Tom right now...I wonder if they will be able to fix their bond . Anyway i love this story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yep I kinda disliked myself when I wrote that lol but Tom's gonna get what's coming to him! Stay tuned for his demise>:) haha I'll be updating soon!
Date: 06/25/14 08:31 am Title: So, This Is How We End?
OhMYGOD wtf! what happens next?!! ahhhh I hope tom has a total breakdown and tells bill everything and tells him it isn't his fault :(
Author's Response: Tom deserves a breakdown doesn't he? We'll see what kind of consequences this action has triggered... Updates coming soon:)
Date: 06/25/14 12:38 am Title: So, This Is How We End?
damn, Tom really over took what Bill said. poor him
Author's Response: Yes poor Bill:( but he's not gonna stop till he gets what he wants:) updates coming soon!
Date: 06/24/14 10:41 pm Title: So, This Is How We End?
kinda hate tom right now. bill should too.
Author's Response: I kind of hates myself when I wrote this! Lol I promise I'll fix it! I have a solution for bill and tom that will be revealed next chapter:) stay tuned!