Date: 07/12/14 10:01 am Title: The Dilemma
It was brilliant, I love how scared, timid, and emasculated Tom feels just thinking about bottoming for Bill. It shows how vulnerable tom actually is, even though he has such a tough exterior.
Author's Response: Tom's tough exterior is what's hurting him. If he would just relax and stop being a control freak, the idea wouldn't be half as bad as he imagines. He will slowly come to accept it . . .Bottoming for beautiful Bill can't be all bad, right???;)
Date: 07/12/14 05:56 am Title: The Dilemma
:D The sexual tension is eating Tom alive. ..I'm sure he'll give in, and bottom for Bill, if he stopped being a control freak. They'll relieve some of the stress in the next chapter, will they? Can't wait for it! Great job, as always!
Author's Response: At this point, I think Tom MUST bottom for Bill. He can't get the idea out of his head and it's killing him >:) We'll see what next chapter holds for them, in private;)Haha thank you for reviewing! Your comments are always greatly appreciated:)
Date: 07/12/14 03:25 am Title: The Dilemma
First comment on the new chapter!!! Haha... ;-; now I have to wait damn it! But at least tom sort of talked about Wtf been bothering him XDD
Can't wait for more~ ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for enjoying it so much!:) I'm trying to move Tom in the right direction, but he can be stubborn:) lol updates are coming soon!
Date: 07/11/14 05:49 pm Title: No More Games
amazing chapter
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you enjoyed it! They are finally together:)
Date: 07/11/14 11:23 am Title: No More Games
Wonderful chapter. I'm so happy Tom finally came to the right decision. The sex was hot, and so much cuteness too. Is this the last chapter, or do we get to see Tom bottom for Bill?
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing:) I'm glad you enjoyed the sex scene. I worked pretty hard on it! I'm happy to say that it is not the last chapter! We will see the boys work through yet another problem. Tom still has a way to go with accepting bottom
Date: 07/10/14 11:29 pm Title: No More Games
ohhh jaiiiisuussss~~~!! ~.~ its about time damn it~! XDD lmfao can't wait for more ;)
oh ja und i lovez the banner ;P
Author's Response: I know! I was getting a bit tired of waiting myself lol I'm so glad they're finally together:) and I'm excited you noticed the banner! I know it's a little late in coming, but I really wanted one. And I'm lucky to have a friend who does digital art! I'm glad you love it as much as I do:)))
Date: 07/10/14 11:40 am Title: No More Games
woaaah!! *pant*
Author's Response: :D thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/09/14 09:33 pm Title: No More Games
*fans self and lights a cigarette*
Author's Response: *laughing deviously* I'm SO glad you enjoyed it! I worked so hard to make this chapter perfect:)
Date: 07/09/14 09:31 pm Title: No More Games
that was amazing. i guess they both have their lesson hehhe
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed this chapter! I worked really hard with it! The boys still have a ways to go but they are FINALLY together:)
Date: 07/09/14 08:10 pm Title: No More Games
Excellent chapter!!! Tom's internal struggle was so deep and Bill's reaction in the bathroom broke my heart. You emphasized perfectly their feelings. ...the angst, the remorse. ..i just loved it! Well, I also enjoyed the smut :) Can't wait for the updates! And again: GREAT JOB!!!!
Author's Response: thank you!!! I'm grinning! I was so excited to see what everyone thought of this chapter, and I'm so far pleased with the feedback! I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! I tried really hard to communicate Tom and Bill's feelings in this chapter, so I'm also glad you were seeing their emotions so well:))) I'm currently working on the next chapter so it should be up soon!
Date: 07/09/14 08:07 pm Title: No More Games
I loved Tom's conflicted emotions, how he wants nothing more than to stake claim on Bill, but admitting that he has no right too. I love that he wants to be aggressive, but actually has the strength to be passive and admit he's wrong.
As for Bill, I love that sick, dirty, low, feeling of being ashamed for sleeping with someone else. I loved that he feels sick and guilty and that he was trying to prove his point, and succeeded, but can't bring himself to enjoy it because he still bas deep feelings for Tom and still takes into consideration what Tom feels.
The make up sex was very sweet and loving, but I'm not gonna lie...if I were Tom, I would still love Bill very much...but after him sleeping with Mehdi...I would probably be holding a grudge, although I know that wouldn't be fair since we all know that Tom was very inconsiderate with Bill and how he felt, from the very beginning.
Goodjob overall. Although I still think Tom would've been disgusted, angry, or too pissed off to talk to him. Just an opinion.
Lots of love to you. :-*
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review! I had a bit of trouble deciding how this chapter would go. At first, I wanted to make Tom come crashing in and beat up Mehdi, but then I realized that would only cause more problems and I really want them to be together lol I also thought about making him mad at Bill for sleeping with Mehdi, but again had the same problem. Idk, maybe that is too unrealistic, but I wanted Tom to be completed defeated by this point, just too tired of fighting himself and Bill. I just want them to be together lol anyway thanks for the long review! I always enjoy them
Date: 07/09/14 09:13 am Title: A Statement
YES! Awesome! Don't chicken out Bill!! Make Tom cry for being so horrible and cruel.
This is other character is very well written too, he seems cool.
Author's Response: Haha I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! Tom is certainly getting what he deserves:) I'm excited to see what everyone thinks of next chapter! rnrnIf you would like to see the real life Mehdi, go to YouTube and search Yanis Marshall and his men in heels! And buckle your seatbelt for some of the best dancing you've ever seen!:)
Date: 07/08/14 02:52 pm Title: A Statement
I keep checking for updates every 5 minutes. ..can't wait to see if Tom storms in and stops everything :)
Author's Response: I always enjoy your reviews:) I'm also excited for the next chapter! I'll be updating soon
Date: 07/08/14 01:36 am Title: A Statement
ohh jaisus~!!!
Author's Response: I know lol be patient! The reward is coming:)
Date: 07/07/14 03:38 pm Title: Falling Again
lol ok
to me, want it to either be "we are just brothers" or "brothers and lovers" i dont like the idea of using one another just cause you cant get a girl
Date: 07/07/14 03:15 pm Title: Falling Again
ok
i just want them to love each other, not just have sex just to be having sex
Author's Response: Aww I know but be patient! I promise its coming! I think you'll be pleased with the next chapter! I have a habit of milking the pain and agony before handing out the reward of love and happy happy twincest lol you don't have much longer to wait *hugs*
Date: 07/07/14 03:12 am Title: A Statement
Great chapter! Can't wait for the updates!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying:) I'll hopefully be updating soon
Date: 07/07/14 12:25 am Title: A Statement
Nice nod to Yanis and his BFF's. I love that Tom wasn't in this chapter. We got to see all of Bill's internal conflict. He clearly still loves Tom very much, and it cuts deep. He seems to want to be with Mehdi not so much out of revenge, but to prove to himself that he is capable of moving on without Tom.
Author's Response: haha I didn't think anyone else would recognize Yanis, much less Mehdi:) I felt like I needed to step back for a second and explain Bill's feelings, because I did so much with Tom's conflicted emotions the last few chapters. I'm glad it worked:) We'll see if Bill's little plan worked . . .
Date: 07/07/14 12:17 am Title: A Statement
ok
weird
Author's Response: You're weird:P lolrnrnNo really, i thought the only way to get Tom to make up his mind would be to force him, by making Bill go to someone else, thereby making Tom jealous, and cause him to be a typical guy and start being territorial . . . You'll see
Date: 07/06/14 11:14 pm Title: A Statement
aaaaaannnnnnnd...cue the angry twin storming into the room at a most inconvenient time
Author's Response: Hmm, we'll see. This is a turning point for the twins . . .