Date: 07/24/14 03:17 pm Title: Change The Ending
cant wait for more
please update soon
Author's Response: Glad you're finally enjoying it more now that they're not at each other's throats;) I hope you enjoy next chapter as well. . . It's almost over :"(
Date: 07/24/14 09:07 am Title: Change The Ending
Lovely!!! So emotional and touching! At first, i was angry with Tom. ..he seemed so stubborn and distant. But now I know he was right. Even though what he did to Bill,raping him, was far worse than his struggle, i still feel sorry for him. Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so behind on answering reviews, but better late than never, right? lol So, so, so glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was so rough, trying to decide which way I wanted it to go. I'm glad I finally got to portray the scared, vulnerable side of Tom, since he has been, like you said, so stubborn and distant. They're going to work through it together:)
Date: 07/24/14 12:28 am Title: Change The Ending
Awe~ i have nothing smart to say...they're so sweet.
Author's Response: Aww! That's all I was really looking for! We can celebrate now that they are making up . . . Are you ready for some botTom???
Date: 07/23/14 11:16 pm Title: Change The Ending
*hands bill tissues...and keeps one for herself*
Author's Response: Thanks:) the emotional trauma is almost over . . .are you ready for botTom???
Date: 07/20/14 10:24 am Title: New House, New Problems
>~< oh mai jaisus... XC SO MUCH SHIT JUST HAPPENED~!
Sorry I took so long to read it~ Im at my sisters so I didn't have time to read when it came first...
Author's Response: Yes I know, things just seem to keep getting worse and worse:( I promise I'll fix it! lol . . . . Don't worry about taking a long time to read; I am the worst about keeping up with stories I'm reading lol And this next chapter is being difficult, so hopefully I'll be updating soon . . .
Date: 07/19/14 01:39 pm Title: New House, New Problems
Noooo!!!! Tom, move and stop Bill!!! I loved the action of this chapter, how constructive Bill is in planning the move out and making the renovations. I don't get why Tom isn't excited about this, but I kind of understand his frustration. Please, update soon! I'm dying to know what happens next, if he makes a move. Amazing job!!!!
Author's Response: Tom is fraid that once he and Bill move in alone together that they won't have their parents or anything else in the way of Bill demanding that he bottom. He feels like he lost his security blanket of secrecy; Bill can ask and demand what he wants in their own house . . .Of course, he shouldn't have worried about talking to Bill from the beginning; Bill would have understood:( anyway, I'll hopefully be updating soon! I'm just as excited as everyone else to see them finally be happy:))
Date: 07/19/14 08:45 am Title: New House, New Problems
OHMygod! Need next chapter!! Wahhhhh, Noooo! This story is so good it keeps leaving me unable to form sentences *flails*
Author's Response: Ahhh thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this crazy chapter:) I will hopefully be updating soon! I'll have the twins communicating right soon:)
Date: 07/19/14 12:31 am Title: New House, New Problems
I loved that even though Tom obviously wants to move forward with their life, that a part of him was obviously stalling when it came to actually being alone and being a couple.
I know talking about how you feel can be difficult to do. But it seems to me that for Tom, talkin about emotions and actually being Bill's boyfriend, is perceived to him as being vulnerable and weak.
Communication is hard, but oh how i wish Tom would have just talked and let things happen for them. Loved it.
Author's Response: Yes, it's amazing what could have happened if Tom had simply trusted Bill enough to talk with him about his fears from the very beginning. Unfortunately, he's convinced Bill wouldn't understand. However, next chapter, he may be forced to let go of these damaging emotions and put them in Bill's gentle care:)
Date: 07/18/14 10:14 pm Title: New House, New Problems
FUCKING DO SOMETHING, TOM!!!
Author's Response: Lol Tom needs you to jump in there and give him a shove in the right direction! haha We'll where this argument takes them next chapter . . .
Date: 07/18/14 09:26 pm Title: New House, New Problems
It can never be over. Ever!!! I forbid it.
Author's Response: thank you for reviewing haha someday, it will be over, but in a good way. The twins just have to learn to love each other the right way:)
Date: 07/15/14 09:24 pm Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
I loved how Tom and Bill at the beginning, were all about letting themselves feel in love and almost equal to each other when they were having sex, it wasn't just, 'lets fuck'.
As for the ending, I love that Tom finally expressed his fear and vulnerability to Bill. It wasn't just 'No, i wont do it.' He actually told him how it bothered him and why, which is somethi they both needed, communication.
Can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm glad to be past the point where Tom is being an asshole and just using Bill lol and poor Bill is just taking it . . . They are together, and they want to be happy, but this idea is holding them back. Communication is so important to a relationship, and even though they are twins, they are having trouble feeling each other's thoughts and emotions. The whole thing is going to come to a head very soon. Hopefully you'll be seeing botTom in the next couple of chapters:)
Date: 07/15/14 05:10 pm Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
This was a truly great chapter with incredibly realistic descriptions of the old asylum and some steaming hot sex. But, oh Tom, you do continue beating yourself up over your own desires. It's so sad that he can't even be honest with his twin. But then I suppose he's only just come to terms with wanting Bill that way, and with the whole twincest thing, and wanting gay sex at all is new to him. I suppose he's afraid to admit he's so turned on by the idea of being on the receiving end. At least Bill knows now that its not that Tom doesn't want it, but that he's afraid of the depth of his desire. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your compliments are flattering me to no end:) Thank you for mentioning the setting of the asylum. No one else did:( You are exactly right about Tom's feelings; he has himself very convinced that there is something big and scary to be afraid of, but soon he will realize he had can trust Bill completely, even in this troubling decision! I will be back soon with next chapter!:)
Date: 07/15/14 01:50 pm Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
Absolutely amazing!!!! I wish I lived this kind of wild passion... Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think we all wish we could live this way:) I try really hard lol
Date: 07/15/14 11:02 am Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
Ahhhhhhhhhh!
Author's Response: :D thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 07/15/14 02:03 am Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
hahahahahahaz..... this only makes me even more excited for the time to come~! soon i hope? (oh but not too soon~! XDD)
Author's Response: The time is coming when Tom will take it from Bill:) your patience will be rewarded lol thank you for reviewing
Date: 07/15/14 01:43 am Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
I want to punch myself in the throat for not reading this sooner than I did. OH MY GAWDDDDDDDUH, your sexy chapters are almost too sexy. *fans self* Please. Continue.
Author's Response: Don't do that! Lol I am just happy you are reading it now! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far and thank you for stopping to review! I will be updating soon:)
Date: 07/14/14 11:19 pm Title: Raw Need, Tender Emotion
*lights an entire pack of cigarettes*
Author's Response: >:) just the reaction I was searching for . . . lol thanks for reviewing! I'll be back with real storyline next chapter!
Date: 07/12/14 10:42 pm Title: Falling Again
Such a delicious story! I look forward to reading more
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! It's a compliment to hear my story is "delicious":D I should be updating soon!
Date: 07/12/14 01:02 pm Title: The Dilemma
BACKSEAT SEX!
sorry. i have twincest-induced tourette's.
Author's Response: LOL I think I have that same disorder haha next chapter will mostly be a freebie just because everyone has been so patient waiting for them to get together! I'll be posting it soon:)
Date: 07/12/14 10:48 am Title: The Dilemma
Awh, u had to end it there?! awh, i wanna know what theyre gonna do in private ;) yumyum
Author's Response: Yes, i know mini cliff hanger:) at least it's not life and death lol Good for you though, because I already have next chapter finished and ready to go. I'll be updating soon!:)