Date: 06/13/14 05:00 am Title: Been Around the World, Don't Speak the Language
Oh, no problem. Sure I can help. Just tell me your facebook name oder the link to your facebook :)
Its ... difficult when Bill is that feminin, but it depent on the story, and in yours, its okay, that he is a crossdresser :)
Author's Response: well, alright. my Facebook name is Alexis Kaulitz Sigerud. You message me through that! Vielen dank!
Date: 06/13/14 02:54 am Title: Chest To Chest, Tongue On Neck
Nice Story. I dont like it, when Bill is too feminin, almost like a girl, but I think he had to be, so Tom would like him ;) Tom as a rapper is a cool idea. Nice :)
Just the most of the german parts are not correct. If you want, I can help you with that. I'm from germany (thats why my english is not the best, so sorry :))
Author's Response: Ugh, I only know some German, but trying to use it in a different form is hard. I would love some help on it because I knew it was used incorrectly. I actually made Bill feminine because like what you said, he had to be because well...he's a cross dresser!
Date: 06/13/14 01:45 am Title: Chest To Chest, Tongue On Neck
Whooooooo .........!!!!! Damn that was hot I think Tom wanted to do the whole kamasutra on Bill and he wants to see him again JESUS Christ this wad a good chapter ...update soon I like this story
Date: 06/13/14 01:43 am Title: Chest To Chest, Tongue On Neck
Hot hot and did I say HOT?!
Looking forward to next update.
Date: 06/13/14 12:35 am Title: Chest To Chest, Tongue On Neck
short and so much sex - damn...Tom went so lucky and Bill too cos Tom want to meet with him again. they can have really nice adventure if not more :)
Date: 06/11/14 11:12 pm Title: Our Conversation Ain't Long, But You Know What Is
omg, that was SO HOT!!!!!!
i guess they had their own language to communicate :)
Date: 06/11/14 10:13 pm Title: Our Conversation Ain't Long, But You Know What Is
Well damn
Date: 06/11/14 10:03 pm Title: Our Conversation Ain't Long, But You Know What Is
*Q*
Date: 06/10/14 11:48 pm Title: Sold Out Arenas, You Can Suck My Penis
Lol XD I loved this chapter ^-^
Date: 06/10/14 10:48 pm Title: Sold Out Arenas, You Can Suck My Penis
I laughed until my chest hurt when the boob fell to the floor lol
Date: 06/10/14 10:37 pm Title: Sold Out Arenas, You Can Suck My Penis
nice :) i like that Tom didn't make a scene of what happened so maybe at the end it won't be that bad
Date: 06/10/14 10:09 pm Title: Sold Out Arenas, You Can Suck My Penis
oh snap!!!!!!!!!!!! im gonna love this story .....cant wait for more !!!!!!!!!!!!!! yay
Date: 06/10/14 09:25 pm Title: Sold Out Arenas, You Can Suck My Penis
Oh holy crap. I guess Tom got more than he expected with his mystery girl.
Date: 06/10/14 04:47 pm Title: Been Around the World, Don't Speak the Language
This seem interesting...I'm hooked!! Can't wait for you post more :)
Date: 06/10/14 01:58 pm Title: Been Around the World, Don't Speak the Language
Ooo, this seems promising! Now I'm interested! I'll be waiting for more! :D
Date: 06/10/14 01:24 am Title: Been Around the World, Don't Speak the Language
Wow...it start really nice ;) let's "see" what adventure Tom will have hahaha
Date: 06/10/14 01:19 am Title: Been Around the World, Don't Speak the Language
Oh man. Loved it, and I can't wait to see what Tom does next. Lol