Date: 07/18/14 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 4: Origin
Love it please continue
Date: 07/15/14 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 4: Origin
Ugh, Bill is such a bitch. But now someone knows his secret... bad thing is: Tom could get more affected :/ let's see how this deal develops. Thanks for the chapter! :)
Date: 07/14/14 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 4: Origin
B is for Bitchy Bill lol.
Date: 07/14/14 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 4: Origin
Well damn. I am speechless.
Date: 06/26/14 12:40 am Title: Chapter 1: Lost
bill is the youngest twin by 10-15 minutes
Date: 06/17/14 09:26 am Title: Chapter 3: Regret
Tense. It hurts cause I know what this is like. I never tried to kill myself, and i think that is a pathetic thing to do, but this is very relatable and it's very real.
Date: 06/16/14 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 3: Regret
poor Bill but he kinda got what he deserved after what he did to other people. well, he has Tom by his side so hopefully he'll be ok
Date: 06/11/14 11:15 am Title: Chapter 2: Popular
*gasp* Bill! Don't be so cruel! Bill just needs to understand that words hurt and making someone laugh by making fun of someone else isn't worth it...I guess he is about to learn that though within the next two months. He doesn't deserve whatever happened, but if he survives it hopefully he'll be a better and more sympathetic person.
Date: 06/11/14 12:33 am Title: Chapter 1: Lost
the first chapter was so powerful I was almost in tears!!!!
Date: 06/10/14 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Popular
Okay may I say, Bill is an uber jerk!
How can one go about and insult someone? I feel so bad for the girl.
It's nice to see Bill not being the angel with like a broken past and that's why he's a douche. He's just an asshole.
Love that Tom is like, trying to tell his brother to quit it. He is right about that though. That poor girl was so humiliated. Plus if he hates her or how she looks, why follow her on Instagram?!
-_- Asshole.
I can't wait for more.
Date: 06/10/14 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 2: Popular
This Bill is really mean. He is a bully. I wonder what happened to him that led to the events in the previous chapter.
Can you explain more about Tom and his education? Tom seems like a nice guy.
Date: 06/10/14 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Lost
The poor thing. At least he seems to have a great brother! Help him, Tom!
Date: 06/08/14 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1: Lost
Hooked! I did not want to stop reading. Very excited & anxious for next chapter!
Date: 06/07/14 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Lost
Awh so sad :( You're writing this so good
Date: 06/07/14 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Lost
I remember a time like this in my life. Nobody liked me I was called hurtful names. I even started to believe things people said about me. Then I realised only my opinion mattered. Lol I don't have high self esteem now but haters can jump off of a cliff as far as I am concerned. There is always life after highschool.
Date: 06/07/14 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Lost
nice beginning :) kinda sad tho