Date: 06/15/14 12:00 am Title: “And silently within, with hands touching skin, shock breaks my disease, and I can breathe."
This was incredible. Great job.
Date: 06/13/14 11:48 pm Title: “Seen you hanging ‘round this darkness where I’m bound and this black hole I’ve dug for me.”
Beautiful. Haunting. This story will be on my mind for a long time.
Date: 06/08/14 08:26 pm Title: “Seen you hanging ‘round this darkness where I’m bound and this black hole I’ve dug for me.”
I started out laughing at Gustav drunkenly sweet-talking a blanket then got really, really sad for this Bill. Well done at making me feel all the emotions!
Date: 06/08/14 05:08 pm Title: “And silently within, with hands touching skin, shock breaks my disease, and I can breathe."
That was absolutely brilliant. Damn, heart is breaking for Bill. And for Gustav to! Not so sure how I feel for Tom there, since it seems as if Bill ain't totally willing. Not a twincester, so maybe I see things differently, I don't know. But to me it reads as if Bill has had to get used to this since Tom just won't stop. It's very interesting. Very very interesting. And I have to wonder if Gustav can help Bill keep his door closed at night? One can hope. A very sad story. Very beautiful to. I loved it. And I will pimp it on TokioHotelSlash on LiveJournal. :-) Thank you for a lovely read.
Date: 06/08/14 03:56 pm Title: “And silently within, with hands touching skin, shock breaks my disease, and I can breathe."
I love this so much - it was very bittersweet, full of angst and Gustav being caught in the middle. You could really feel his worry for Bill, and Bill's heartache. Well done :)
Date: 06/07/14 09:26 pm Title: “And silently within, with hands touching skin, shock breaks my disease, and I can breathe."
loved the whole drunken blanket sex "dream," but then...whoa. now gustav his this "thing" weighing on his brain, and i don't like the thought of bill and tom together this way. i like them being together out of love and it just feeling right for them, but bill seems torn. he wants it, but he doesn't.
this was rather sad.
Date: 06/07/14 05:05 pm Title: “Seen you hanging ‘round this darkness where I’m bound and this black hole I’ve dug for me.”
Really loved this. Started off being really hilarious with the whole talking blanket thing, but ended up so sad.
Date: 06/07/14 04:38 pm Title: “Seen you hanging ‘round this darkness where I’m bound and this black hole I’ve dug for me.”
Oh damn. This was so different from the other stories using the same prompt. Heartbreaking as it was, I very much enjoyed the story and the way you wrote it. Thank you so much for submitting this!
Date: 06/07/14 04:30 pm Title: “And all of your weight, all you dream, falls on me."
Ouch. That's a hell of a shield Bill's got there. I think he's fooling himself; it's not that he's so "strong" but that he's just got really good armor.
Date: 06/07/14 04:23 pm Title: “And silently within, with hands touching skin, shock breaks my disease, and I can breathe."
Oh wow. This chapter was riveting. Just Gustav being drunk/dreamy enough to believe he was making out with and then fucking the blanket made me pay very close attention. The atmosphere was great, perfect for how Gustav was feeling.
Date: 06/07/14 03:23 pm Title: “Seen you hanging ‘round this darkness where I’m bound and this black hole I’ve dug for me.”
Very interesting story. I cannot quite figure out Bill's feelings here. He told Gustav that he is not happy about the situation with Tom. At the same time Bill wants Tom to come to his room at night. I guess Bill knows that what they do is wrong, that he deserves better, but cannot get out of the situation, because he always gives Tom what Tom asks for.
Poor Gustav found himself in the impossible situation.
Cool story!
Date: 06/07/14 03:09 pm Title: “And silently within, with hands touching skin, shock breaks my disease, and I can breathe."
Gustav thinking that Bill was blanket was really funny. The rest is serious of course - must be a shock for Gustav.