Date: 07/07/14 06:43 pm Title: "I want to date you."
grat story
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 07/07/14 04:38 pm Title: "You're not the same loving Tom as before."
i really hate those shoes but i love everything else
Author's Response: Lol. Sorry.
Date: 07/06/14 11:45 pm Title: "I want you to fuck me, hard."
omfg I LOVE those pants
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 07/06/14 02:16 am Title: "I want to date you."
Loved it! True love prevailed.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 07/05/14 05:42 pm Title: "I want to date you."
Geat story. ...great ending. .. I'm really gonna miss it! You're doing a great job! Looking forward to hearing from you soon with a new amazing fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you. And I already working on another fanfiction. :-)
Date: 07/05/14 02:18 pm Title: "I want to date you."
Im sorry I never really got to leave a review on the other chapters but I reallly really loved this story! It's so unique and different from the other stories being posted right now! I was scared for a second there would be no happy ending but I'm really glad Tom made the right choice and got some help for his anger and came back to Bill. I can't wait to see more stories from you!:)
Author's Response: There arent many divorce stories. :)
Date: 07/05/14 02:09 pm Title: "I want to date you."
Im sorry I never really got to leave a review on the other chapters but I reallly really loved this story! It's so unique and different from the other stories being posted right now! I was scared for a second there would be no happy ending but I'm really glad Tom made the right choice and got some help for his anger and came back to Bill. I can't wait to see more stories from you!:)
Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to highlight that yes, people may get married out of love and be happy in the moment, but that love isnt always enough of a reason to stay together. When you get married young, you dont always know what kind of a person you can because you can still be very 'green', so to speak. Tom needed help for the things he did, and I wanted an ending that wasnt expected, so intead of choosing Ria or Bill, he chose himself and got himself squared away. :-)
Date: 07/05/14 10:09 am Title: "I want to date you."
That's the endy? Ohhhh,I want more
For sure they had the hardest year but now they are together and hopefully nothing from the past would be repeated ;)
Author's Response: Tom didn't choose either one of them because he needed help. But yeah, now they can be together.
Date: 07/05/14 09:51 am Title: "I want to date you."
Omg I love it!!!!! This is exactly what I wanted! For them to become the kind of person that the other could actually love. Perfection! It was a beautiful ending after all the drama:) Bravo!:)
Author's Response: I actually loved that Tom didn't pick eith of them at first and chose to get help.
Date: 07/03/14 07:13 pm Title: "He violated me."
More, please!!! Can't wait to find out who Tom will choose!
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the ending.
Date: 07/03/14 05:51 pm Title: "He violated me."
I'm curious about who Tom will choose :) I hope it's Bill
Author's Response: We'll see. :-)
Date: 07/02/14 11:56 pm Title: "He violated me."
I'm hanging on ever word and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Why thank you. I'll post soon.
Date: 07/02/14 11:46 pm Title: "He violated me."
That was omg. Bu is such a good friend for Bill while he really needs him and also he said to Tom what he needed to hear a long time ago.
Damn, even Bill's story was so sad and now I know why their marriage finished. Can't wait for next chapter and toms decision
Author's Response: I love that Bushido is the voice of reason and doesnt really try to be on anyone's side. He clearly sees that Bill loves Tom, and that its killing him slowly. As for heir marriage, yeah, being stubborn, was Tom's fault and the reason for the end of their marriage.
Date: 07/02/14 08:41 pm Title: "He violated me."
Bushido in this story is really self sacrificing. I would not do this. I'd be like "bitch, back the fuck up. You're not touching him again"
It's almost sad how attached they are to each other that they can hurt each other like this and still come back for more. I am shaking my head. They really need to straighten up and start treating each other. Making stupid assumptions, blaming each other, hitting each other... That's not a way to have a relationship and if Tom chooses Bill(which I think he will) they need to take a second and think about what they do before they do it, and how they should really be treating each other.
And wow, I'm just shocked. I read it all without blinking or breathing pretty much. I didn't really know what to expect, but damn... I hope Tom chooses Bill and I hope that I'm as good a friend as Bushido:) Well done, Red:)
Author's Response: Tom is a hot head and never listened to Bill, so he pretty much threw away their marriage, when they could've been together. Tom was very young and impressionable and made an assumption that he shouldn't have. It's a very easy mistake to make when you get married young. It's not all sunshine and rainbows and 'happily ever after' when you say 'I do', and I wanted to highlight that. This is just an extreme case of it.
Date: 07/02/14 08:22 pm Title: "He violated me."
Duh duh duh!
Author's Response: Yep. Exactly.
Date: 07/02/14 05:19 pm Title: "Tom."
Great chapter :) Can't wait for what will happen next
Author's Response: I'll post soon.
Date: 07/02/14 12:38 am Title: "Tom."
I was wondering why there weren't super quick updates haha. Glad that it was busy work and not lost of inspiration! Anyway, great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next and if tom will be jealous xD
Author's Response: I got a 9 month old getting ready to walk, work, and other stuff going on, so I had to get my shirt straight before I could sit and write.
Date: 07/02/14 12:08 am Title: "Tom."
I can't decide I'd Bill really loves Tom... maybe he does and he doesn't realize it. Mayve they should stop thinking about sex so much and think about real intimacy. As for Bushido its good that he has someone there to make him feel better. There's nothing worse than feeling shitty in relationship and not having anyone there to help:( Maybe Tom should act more like Bushido and stop being an ass. He should dump Ria cuz he obviously doesn't love her and he's leading her on which isn't good. I still wanna know why exactly Tom raped Bill. Overall good chapter. I love how you write - better all the time:)
Author's Response: Bill is confused about that too, whether he actually loves Tom or if its physical intimacy he's craving. As for bushido, yeah he's being a reall good friend to him. :-)
Date: 06/23/14 04:28 pm Title: "How can he do this to me...?"
GAH, I'm lagging on the reviews. But dammit, why do you have to do this to me? I've been known to camp out between updates story updates, and just so you know- I hate camping. *grumbles and pitches tent* I'll just be here... waiting. o_o
Author's Response: Lol
Date: 06/17/14 08:06 pm Title: "He just reminded me of my ex."
AhhHH! The plot thickens! I'm just dying for them to actually meet. I bet that's going to be an awkward situation fraught with sexual tension :P. Awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Tom and bill have a very long and deep history together.