Date: 10/08/14 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Eight
okay, now that i've had a chance to reread all this since i was way too tired and spaced out when i read it at work today...tom got himself in all kinds of shit, didn't he?
Author's Response: Hiii, thank you for coming back to reread and review for me, it means a lot < 3 But I agree, Tom has been knee deep in shit since STAY THE NIGHT, but lets hope he can pull himself out of that and clean his act up for Bill. Thank you, once again, for this. It's really refreshing < 3
Date: 10/08/14 03:14 pm Title: Chapter Eight
Ooooh my god. I don't know what to say. Ria is a COMPLETE bitch. Seriously. And her father! What the fuck? Okay I know every parent wants to protect their children, but they should know, that it's impossible. Someone is gonna hurt their little baby and they can't do shit about it. And there's always two sides in every story. That just pisses me off, when people automatically assume that the one story they hear is the truth. 'Cause it's not. Argh. I hope that Tom's dad will get a new job. And he's a horrible person too. How can he blame his son? I mean seriously, he could have told Tom who Ria's dad was. Could have maybe do something so Tom wouldn't have to be in the middle of that hassle. 'Cause seriously, in relationships, someone is almost always gonna get hurt. Argh! I hope you'll update soon, 'cause I'm practically pulling my hair out right now XD This was amazing and gave so many answers! I hope to read more soon!!
Author's Response: Hiii! I had originally planned for Ria to be as much of a victim as Bill is in this, but her father ruined that image for her instantly. Because he's so involved in the downfall of Tom's family, she's obviously going to be tarnished with the same brush and that's kind of sad, but it's reality too. And her dad:- he's a control freak, he's used to holding all the power, but when Tom stepped in and fucks with his little bubble, it's almost as if he sees a challenge arising? Ultimately, he sees red and wants to prove to everybody that he's in the drivers seat and won't be fucked over like he thinks he has been. So he forces his power into play to prove that he and his family won't be fucked with, hence why Tom's family is suffering right now. Tom's father isn't a bad man, I don't think. He was more or less implying that he's raised Tom better than that, also that he shouldn't fuck around with people's lives and be so careless. He's obviously still strung up over what happened, his life was one of those greatly affected, so he has a right to blame Tom, afterall (as stated during this!) he did apparently warn Tom from fucking it up with Ria because of the potential consequences. But I agree, it's a messy situation, a really messy one. I'll be updating this soon, thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it's really refreshing to read! < 3 xxxxx
Date: 10/08/14 09:17 am Title: Chapter Eight
HOLY SHIT!! This chapter was THE chapter of all chapters! So much information, so much understanding, so much makes sense now, so much emotion and Bill FINALLY listening to Tom :D Babe this was amazing
Author's Response: Oh wow, hi gorgeous! And yes, HOLY SHIT indeed-y! THE chapter of all chapters? Christ, I'm so glad that you think so, I literally busted my ass for weeks to make this chapter work out, I'm just happy it seems to have paid off. Yeah, I didn't want to write dialogue between Tom and Bill to explain every single scene I needed to revert back to, so I thought flashbacks from STAY THE NIGHT and the beginning chapters of this would be a perfect way to indulge in what really happened and Tom's actual feelings/emotions, (since they've been hidden for so long!) Bill needs a high-five, I think. He endured all of Tom's explanation without as much as a single retort! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Kez. I love you < 3 xxxxx
Date: 10/08/14 08:33 am Title: Chapter Eight
Oh man. I'm glad we finally learned why Tom seemed like such a shit-bag. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. Hopefully they talk some more and finally get to be happy together.
Author's Response: Hiii! I'm really glad it's out now too, it's such a relief to have it off my chest and uploaded for all of you, *breathes*!! But yes, you all know why Tom was such a shit-bag for the longest time ever, I just hope his reasons are enough to justify some of his shitty actions, (that's my main worry, I guess!) It might take time for Bill to fully forgive Tom, but I'm sure Tom's willing enough to work for it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it's really refreshing to read < 3
Date: 10/08/14 03:51 am Title: Chapter Seven
Damn good chapter, raw & emotional.
Author's Response: Hey, I'm really glad you think so. I worked super hard to rake in as much as emotion as I could, so I'm happy you were able to feel that. Thank you so much < 3
Date: 10/08/14 01:11 am Title: Chapter Eight
Finally!!! I can't wait for another chapter! I want them to be happy so much!
Author's Response: Hiii! Awe, I'm so glad you seem satisfied with this right now, it's really refreshing to read that right now! Maybe they'll have their happy ever after, maybe Tom can actually salvage their friendship afterall! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, as always < 3
Date: 10/08/14 01:06 am Title: Chapter Eight
looks like Tom is in a deep shit ;/ maybe if from Ria's side everything goes bad - Bill would help him a little
Author's Response: Hiii! Yes, Tom has been in deep shit, but I guess I can argue that he put himself there. He was a shitpot about the whole situation and he didn't really give any second thoughts before he gave in and bedded Bill, so ultimately, it's his own fault he landed himself in so much shit. But I do feel for him a little, he has had a really shitty time since then, hopefully he can learn from his mistakes and make it up to Bill before it's too late though. Maybe Bill could help him out with the Ria situation, I'm not sure how and if he would ever be willing to, but maybe it could happen, (if he ever forgives him!) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, as always. It's so refreshing to see you're still with us after these vague beginning chapters! xxxxx
Date: 10/08/14 12:18 am Title: Chapter Eight
I am so glad that Tom finally explained to Bill what happened. I am also glad that I myself learned about what really happened. It was one big puzzle.
I feel bad for Tom and his family, but I still wish that Tom was not such a coward. Hopefully he'll be a better person for what happened to him. I also hope that Bil will forgive Tom. It looks like he is already doing it. The boys need each other to heal.
It is a great chapter! And a quick update! Thanks so much. I may come back later with more thoughts. Love, love, love this story and these boys!
Author's Response: Hiii! I'm really glad too, it's a total relief to get it off my chest and move on from this specific section of the story. With this entire thing written in Tom's perspective, it was really hard to write all of these Chapters and make sure the secret remained hidden, yet keep my audience attracted to this? It didn't only affect Tom, but his family too, (linking back to previous replies when I stated that doing one bad deed could potentially begin a domino affect and interfere with other prospects in his life!), but you're right - he was a total coward about it. I think now since everything is out in the open, he won't be carrying as much weight and lies upon his shoulders, so he can change into a better man, (hopefully!). Forgiveness has to be earned, my dear, but hopefully Tom can fix his mistakes and make up for them. < 3 Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, as always. I'm really glad to hear you're enjoying this as much as you are, it's refreshing! More will be coming soon xxxxx
Date: 10/01/14 12:24 am Title: Chapter Seven
I need more please! T^T it's getting to the good part
Author's Response: Hiii. So far I've written 6500+ words for the next chapter (much longer than any other chapter I've written yet for this story) and it still has a quite a lot more to go until it's complete for update. It needs editing, more detail added and spellchecked, etc, so it could be another few days before you get that, but thank you so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying this as much as you are, I just hope I don't disappoint you < 3 xxxxx
Date: 09/18/14 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Seven
Hey it's totally understandable that you took a while to update so no worries! 'Cause when you get a writers block, it takes time to get over it! This is such a good fic, so i at least will wait as long as it takes for you to update! But back to the business! This was a very exciting chapter. I'm so amazed that i don't even make any sensenow XDD but iI'm so happy that Tom told Bill that he loves him!!! Hopefully they'll make up (and make out ;))))) soooon!!! Oh my god i so feel for the both of them!! :D I'll be here waiting for the new awesome chapter!!!
Author's Response: Hiii, and thank you for understanding, it's so hard these days to find a muse and I really REALLY don't want to force anything out because it will ruin the flow of this story. Jesus, this is some serious praise, I'm so flattered! Tom needed to get it out, his feelings have been so obscure up until his scene with Gordon when he admitted how he felt. But the saddest thing is, he's loved Bill since high school and he's constantly had to bottle his feelings up because Bill didn't feel the same way until JUST recently, (STAY THE NIGHT when he first realised he was jealous of Ria and felt a little something more for Tom?) Awe, poor BABY! < / 3 They may or may not make up (and make out!), but you'll be getting a little something special in the coming chapters! Thank you so much < 3 xxxx
Date: 09/18/14 10:15 am Title: Chapter Seven
Yay :D So good! Bill needs to quite the bitch and Tom needed to man up! Im so glad he did and hopefully after that confession Bill will stop and listen :)
Loved it and Love you xx
Author's Response: Baby:P Bill does need to quit being a bitch, I agree, his shit is beginning to get tiring, hence why I'm ending his drama now before I bore people too much. I also agree that Tom has to man up too, his wounded puppy act is beginning to grate on my last nerve, 'oh pity me, im hurt, blah' (and he also needs to stop with the lying, it will never do him any good!) Hopefully Bill will be willing to listen now that Tom's dropped the L bomb on him! Thank you so much, I love you < 3 xxxxx
Date: 09/18/14 01:08 am Title: Chapter Seven
Amazing! I literally can't wait for a next chapter! Please I want Bill listen to him. I want them happy!
Author's Response: Hii, and awe, thank you so much! Bill won't have an option, Tom is going to make him listen, once and for all, (it's about time too!) They may or may not have a happy ending, the journey is far from done! < 3 xxxxx
Date: 09/18/14 12:51 am Title: Chapter Seven
Finally! Tom confessed!
This was a very intense chapter. I need to go to bed now, but will provide a more detailed review tomorrow.
Author's Response: YES! Tom eventually grew some balls and admitted his feelings for Bill, it's been long overdue and it may or may not be the cure to their problems and current conflict!:P Thank you so much and I'll be waiting for that! < 3 xxxxx
Date: 09/18/14 12:36 am Title: Chapter Seven
wow....they really went into the fight - especially Bill who wouldn't wan to listen to Tom...well, now i guess after what he heard, he will
Author's Response: Bill is still hurt by Tom, so the fight was bound to happen sooner or later. He's still defensive and feels the need to shove Tom away as a protection mechanism for himself. He really doesn't want to be hurt anymore, especially by someone who he loves so much. I'll tell you a secret since I adore the time you take to constantly give me reviews, so here it goes: SPOILER ALERT!!! (Bill WILL be hurt, confused, dumbstruck and speechless, however; he will also be VERY angry. The next chapter will be an entire flurry of conflicted emotions for Bill, but he will, however, listen to Tom too.) xxxxx
Date: 09/18/14 12:23 am Title: Chapter Seven
Finally Tom, geez! He finally said it. I just hope Bill believes him. I think you did a great job with this chapter. It all flowed just right. I just really hope they sort things out because honestly, Bill is just making me slightly annoyed. I mean really, at least listen to what he has to say. Even if the explanation is shitty, everyone has the right to get a word in and apologize. Can't wait for the next chapter! <3
Author's Response: He did, he finally grew some balls! Lets just hope Bill believes him! And thank you so much, that means a lot! Bill is annoying us all, I think, so you're not the only one. Bill didn't want to listen because he gave Tom the chance before to explain, but Tom didn't. Tom only apologized and walked away from him, so he doesn't think Tom deserves his time anymore, (sad!) The explanation. I don't know what to say other than I didn't think it through properly when I decided to start writing this, so I've had to rewrite it loads of times so it will work out without having some people questioning certain things I won't have answers for? So hopefully I've fixed up something! < 3 Thank you xxxxx
Date: 09/17/14 09:31 pm Title: Chapter Seven
O.O
*nervously gnaws fingernails*
Author's Response: Hang in there, answers will be coming in the next few days! Thank you for your review and patience, I really appreciate it! xxxxx
Date: 09/17/14 09:19 pm Title: Chapter Seven
GODDAMMIT BILL LISTEN TO TOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: HE'S GONNA!!! < 3
Date: 09/17/14 09:11 pm Title: Prologue
You're welcome!
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Date: 08/28/14 07:17 pm Title: Chapter Six
Update soon please. It's been a while. I hope all is well with you.
Author's Response: Hiii, I'm sorry for not updating this lately. I've been super busy with my mom and finding time to write has been quite difficult, however; an update should be here in the next few days. Thank you for your patience and encouragement though, and I really hope you like the next update. < 3 xxxxx
Date: 08/09/14 10:06 am Title: Chapter Six
I can't wait for next chapter!!!
Author's Response: It's up, I'm sorry it took a while though :-( xxxxx