Date: 03/11/16 05:25 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
Whew, what a ride this has been! I went to read this but then saw it was a sequel so I quickly read the first story (which took my breath away) and I just had so much I wanted to say about it but I figured a lot of the stuff I was speculating about would be answered by reading this story so I came straight here and read it all in one sitting lol. I am just so glad that there seems to be the beginning of some resolution for them in this latest chapter because if we were only up to the previous chapter I would have been DYING during the wait lol. A part of me is still so scared that it's a trick, that this was just another way for Bill to get back at Tom but he seemed pretty emotional, and it's heading towards the end 💗 I've really enjoyed the slow build up of wondering just what the fuck Tom was ever doing with Ria when it was so obvious he wanted to be with Bill. It was Bill he would run to every night, and Bill thought it was just sex but you know, if it was just sex Tom could have just boned his girlfriend and not bothered with Bill. I knew from the way he was with Bill right from the start that he was in love a86;a039; I love Gustav in this story, he's like the reluctant friend lol, always sticking up for Tom even when Tom does stupid shit because it's just the honourable thing to do. I really do hope inspiration strikes for this, I want to see a blissfully happy ending for these two, or even just hope for one lol.
Date: 02/07/16 01:02 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
It's been a while. I hope you'll update this story soon. I miss these boys...
Date: 01/25/16 06:30 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I love you so I'm still waiting
Date: 10/27/15 12:41 am Title: Chapter Fourteen
:) I have read this story since you first published it, but I've never written a review- I feel really bad , But I'm so bad at it lol so not helpful at all. but I decided to do it today! Since i really love the story.
I really enjoy your writing. It's very detailed and expressive. You can really visualize every scene with great detail. You don't just read about their feelings, but feel it with them :)
I feel really bad for Bill. For Tom as well, like I said your writing is fantastic so it's hard for me to not feel little bad for tom. too. but poor Bill. He really cared for Tom, loves him and what tom did wasnt right. I hope Tom does whatever he needs to, to prove to Bill what he means to him, and show him that he loves him since sadly Bill said he never felt like he did :)
This was probably not helpful at all lol
Glad you got back to writing on this :) I love the complexity of it and the characters.
Date: 10/19/15 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
Finally! Yeah!!!
I am so happy that the boys finally made up! It's way over due.
The love scene was perfect. You have nothing to worry about it.
I hope that Bill will not regret his actions. I hope the bads and hurts are
behind now. The boys need to be together to be happy.
Cannot wait for the next chapter!
Date: 10/19/15 05:25 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I just can't tell you how happy I am right now...
i've read this chapter over and over and I just LOVE it!
I'm so so happy now that I know you will end this and not leve us hangin.
I love how Bill turns to be needy. About time! I'e been starting to worry a little that he'll never gonna change and here he is standing outside of Tom's apartment and throuing himself at him.
I'm in love with this story, you don't even know how much *blushing*
(Sorry for any spelling mistakes. It's very late and i'm writing from me phone)
Date: 10/19/15 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen
I am so glad you updated ^__^ this was just what I neeeded today. the smut was great, ahhh so many feels!!! great job! :D
Date: 10/15/15 04:26 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
oh, I hope you update this soon, honey < 3
Author's Response: IT'S HAPPENING NOW, THANK YOU < 3
Date: 10/14/15 04:10 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I'm so sad. Waiting here for the next update and five months of nothin...
PPlease I beg you!!! Continue this.
Author's Response: Hii < 3 And I'm so sorry it's taking so long for an update, I assure you that it isn't intentional. I haven't abandoned this though and you will get the rest of the story really soon. I wrote some of the next chapter months ago, but since smut has a mental block effect on my writing from time to time, I stalled midway through and haven't returned to it since. I do apologise for that but since you've given me a reminder, I'll open the document again right now and see what I can do with it < 3 I'm grateful for your patience and encouragement, it really is the boost I needed < 3
Date: 09/25/15 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
It's been a while since you updated this story. I hope that the next chapter is coming soon...
Author's Response: I'm so sorry and yes, new chapter within minutes < 3
Date: 07/30/15 03:03 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Love this story!!! Please continue it soon!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much and I will < 3
Date: 06/02/15 11:03 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Ooooh! Yay! Amazing! Wohoo! Perhaps they'll figure everything out and make up and be happy! XD 'Cause it would be a very, very sad if they'd stop being friends, since they've been so close back in the day. Super awesomeeeeee!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Ah, I hope so! And thank you so much < 3
Date: 05/25/15 11:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
I am back with more comments. :)
I like it how Tom is trying not to be a coward anymore. He has held his ground with Bill. He has held his ground with his mother! In the past Tom tried to appear a person his mother wanted to see him, but now he behaves like a person he internally is and wants to be even if it goes against his mother's expectations. Good for him!
I also like how Tom decided that he is not going to hurt Bill anymore and he sticks to his plan even at the risk of hurting himself.
In short, it looks that Tom learned his lesson. Not without Gustav's help and pushes (kind and angry) from different people. But the key is that Tom was smart enough to rethink his approach to life and love and worked toward becoming a better person.
I am so happy that despite the obvious risk Tom's plan worked and Bill came back to him. At least it seems that way. I hope from now on the boys are on the road to repair their relationships.
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Hi, and THANKS
Yes, Tom's definitely manned up, but it had been a long time coming. He's always wanted to show his mother that he's her perfect child, he never wanted to ever disappoint her and tried his hardest to live up to her expectations, but her expectations aren't who he is nor who he wants to be anymore. Tom loves Bill, has loved him longer than Bill loved him, even. So he now knows that putting Bill first is what he should be doing and is willing to do from hereon in. And Gustav has been a saint within this, in my opinion. Without him, I don't think Tom would've come this far with Bill.
Thank you so much and I hope you enjoy the new chapter I'm about to post! < 3
Date: 05/23/15 10:23 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Wow! I love your story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the rest of it < 3
Date: 05/22/15 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Ahaha I love it can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: I hope you enjoy the next chapter, I'm about to post it < 3
Date: 05/22/15 06:25 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! < 3
Date: 05/22/15 05:45 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
So I saw that this was updated but I did the 'right' thing and got ready for school (and the English lit exam which I am certain I have failed by lack of sleep ahaha...) And then I was going to read it but I went to the library even tho they hate me but yolo and then finally its like 10:30 and I've had a chance to read it 😁😁😁
I hope Tom can win Bill back. They seem to like each other and they need to be together tbh. When Tom was like oh I'm meeting a woman and Bill thought it was a girlfriend that made me laugh 💜. That was quite funny!!! I'm like in my room crying with laughter idek why. I found it way to funny. And that Natalie don't kill Tom!!! Please don't!!! Or hurt him, your brother is an ass who deserved it 😒😒😒
4AM to be up for eight? How can you bare to do that??? I had like five hours and I was chewing this piece of gum during my English exam like Catherine stay awake concentrate on comparison. It was funny!!! Anyway no exams (till the first and then I have 8 in a week 😭😭😭) which means no school (not that I've beem going. We have a McDonald that we all go to between exams instead of sitting in the library it has WiFi 💜) enough of my rambling my history won't learn itself *sighs*
Author's Response: I hope Tom can win him back, too. It would be a terrible ending if he couldn't, wouldn't it? However, it would open up possibilities for future sequels, lmao (but no, I don't think I'm going to torture myself or anyone else with more of these stories. Maybe a one/twoshot in the future but that's about it.) Thank you so much for reviewing like this, it has made me smile a whole bunch! And I hope you enjoy the rest of the story when it comes! < 3
Date: 05/22/15 06:00 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Bill is so confusing.
Author's Response: I know. His head is all over the place. He's been hoping that Tom will chase him after everything he's done, he almost expects it because Tom was in the wrong and Tom should be the person to start the chase, but that turned sour all too fast. But yes, Bill is confusing but I think it's quite understandable given the circumstances < 3
Date: 05/22/15 02:30 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
It looks hopeful finally! I hope that now will be everything good because they both suffered before...
Author's Response: Yes, it all looks hopeful from hereon in. They've both suffered even amounts right now so lets pray for the best, yes? < 3
Date: 05/22/15 02:16 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I hope they do stop hurting each other before its to late 😢😢😢
Author's Response: It's sad but it happens when friendships turn as complicated as this < / 3