Date: 09/16/14 05:22 am Title: Chapter 13
Poor Tom :( He is in love with the murderer of his best friend ... I can imagine, that it isnt easy for him. I hope bill will be nice to him soon :(
Date: 09/16/14 04:30 am Title: Chapter 11
Somehow I like Bills charakter xD And Tom ... I like him too. He is sweet. I think he already fall in love with Bill. Atleast ah bit.
I like, that I can see, that you have thought much about the story. I mean, the logic is really good. I'm just not sure about a few things. So ...
- where did Tom got the blaster? Did I overread it? If he had it all the time, why didn't he shot the others in the stadium?
-Bill did fight and died a 8 times. So is he naked or did they give him new clothing, because his own would be damaged really bad.
-The felids only can revive 8 times, because their body is too exhaust after that. The serum works like the felids reviveability. So why did the serum works on Bills Body, when his body already revived 8 times?
Author's Response: :D Glad you liked the characters..okay..now on with the answers... How did Tom get the blaster? You mean in the arena? He didn't have one, he snatched it from one of the dead Saurians that operated the Mech robot. Bill has his uniform on, torn and ripped but he's not naked. That's the thing about clothes hehe, they're so resistant. I mean, even Hulk's pants never rip at the crotch...I always wondered why haha. Bill's body could not revive back on its own another time, so the serum helped him. Tom actually didn't know if it would work either. It was a hit or miss, he knew it, but he would still try it. :)
Date: 09/16/14 03:07 am Title: Chapter 9
Sweet that Tom is trying to help Bill. But really sad, that Bill lost 8 of his lifes in this ridiculous game. I'm glad, that the saur(whatever) are dead. Hope, there wont be more of them.
Date: 09/15/14 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hmpf, I have to eat somehting and then I have to go to bad, so I cant read more today. But I will tomorrow!
I liked the last two chapters very much. I'm sad, that Andraz is dead, but I'm curious what will happens next.
Author's Response: heheh I'm glad you like it. It's a good thing that you don't have to wait for the next chapter. I'll post the epilogue on Wednesday, so maybe you haven't finished the story yet :D
Date: 09/15/14 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 27
That moment when you realise/remember that this whole story was simply to take out the homophobic out of Jimmy xD it is quite clear that he is a changed boy now.
I really don't understand what happened there in the end, BUT the scene where Bill and Tom kissed as if it was the last time was soooooo cute '_' I was smiling like an idiot. Oh and jealous Giorgio is also adorable, I love that he's like "I tried, how did that mutt get Bill?" Hope he finds someone eventually....if they survive...
I'm so sad this is coming to an end seriously :( my wednesdays and sundays won't be the same.
Your sci-fi fics are the best! I hope there is more fom you one day :')
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed this story. I appreciate your comments, I really do. :) I'm not writing anything at the moment, but who knows, I have some plot ideas so maybe if inspiration strikes. Anyway, I hope you like the epilogue :D
Date: 09/15/14 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
Argh, the last chapters were really hard to read for me, because of the scifi things, that I barely can understand. But it was interesting and I'm glad I can just read the next chapter ^^ and the next and the next and the next ...
Date: 09/15/14 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Poor Andraz. Hope he will made it.
But why they are fighting against the candids? And why do the candids fight the felids?
Author's Response: Hey! I saw you just finished reading the story. Thanks for reviewing so many chapters hehe. I'll start answering your questions, you make pretty good ones, ok let's see if I can give you satisfying answers....Felids and Canids have always been at war, in the beginning it is said the motive is power and dominion, a competition between the species to see which is the dominant one.
Date: 09/15/14 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Katze - good idea to give the planet that name :)
I'm honestly not a fan of scifi, but I like the story. There are just a few scifi th-fanfictions, so I'ts kind of new.
Date: 09/15/14 01:58 pm Title: Prologue
Hey.
I just follow your story a long time now.
Since you said, there will just the epiloge follow, I decided to read it now. I think I'll not write a comment to every chapter, but I will try to give you as much feedback, as I can. (And hope, you'll post the epiloge sooner ;) )
So here we go ... I dont know what I could say too the prologe, just, that it's right: You shouldnt blame something oder someone for not to be "normal". And really ... who are we to say, that something isnt normal? What is normal?
Ah, and sorry, I'm from germany, so my english could be better, but I hope you'll understand my comments ^^
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for giving this story a chance, even if sci-fi is not what you usually read. I hope you enjoy the story. Your english is pretty good, don't worry :D
Date: 09/14/14 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 27
I wanna slap you! Why end it there?! Lol. Great story. Very captivating.
Author's Response: Lol thanks. I should have said no tomatoes or slaps. lol Next post is the epilogue. :)
Date: 09/14/14 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 27
I really do not want the epilogue to be the last chapter :( I really so much enjoyed this story! It has everything - action, love, a theme, a meaning, and good writing!
This chapter was by far the best although there were so many good ones, its hard to say. But what touched me was the moment when Billeam said, "its too strong, I can't fight it." And then he said, "I don't want to." My God, so powerful! I don't know if you meant for it to be an analogy of this, but I am lesbian, coming from a Christian family, and that just hit me right in the chest. I am in love with someone, a girl, and I feel the very same way. They would never want us to be together, but I don't care. Its too strong, I can't fight it, and I don't want to. And that's why I loved the chapter so much. You just make me love you all over again!!!! I think I'll cry at the next chapter if I wasn't already a bit teary eyed over that passionate kiss in what could be their last moments. Kisses and love to you, dear!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for this awesome review. I did intend to write this story with a message, so reading this comment has made me so happy and proud at the same time. I'm really moved to know this chapter touched you. I think nobody should have to fight their feelings, specially to please someone else. Everyone is entitled to be happy and love whom they want to love. :) I'm also sad that this story has come to the end. I'll post the epilogue on Wednesday and hope you like it. Lots of love and kisses to you too :*
Date: 09/11/14 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 26
Ooooohh
Billeam hugging Tomek that was so cute! And Bill's smileeee!
Author's Response: hehehe thanks!! Tom and Bill can be so cute when they're together. In rl too lol
Date: 09/11/14 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 26
Ugh its always too short no matter how long it is!
Poor Billeam, so confused about who really loves him and who he should really love himself. I do hope there is a peaceful ending between him and his father.
Again.... urgh...update soon, please. A million kisses, you beautiful writer! :*
Author's Response: Hi! Aww thanks! It's always nice to know that each chapter brings some entertainment :) I do hope you are pleased with the last chapters ^__^ I'll update this weekend :D
Date: 09/11/14 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 26
Awhhhh
Author's Response: hehe :3
Date: 09/11/14 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 26
Billeam is really the prince sheeesh that got me confused there for a bit! and yayyyy the weapon is destroyed! :3 awesome chapter! ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 09/11/14 11:04 am Title: Chapter 26
Oh man!! I can't wait to see how everything pans out. This story is amazing, you have on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Thanks!! I hope you like how things turn out! :D Thanks for the review.
Date: 09/11/14 10:29 am Title: Chapter 26
I knew it! I was so confused when we got to read that Bill wasn't the prince because it just didn't make sense to me, and when the king got so upset I was like, nope he must be too important, he is the prince, yep. And I had the feeling that it was Bill who made this attack happen, it made sense, somehow.
I'm not home so I'm writing on my phone,in case I make stupid mistakes that makes no sense.
Anyway, I love how Gustaf trusts Tom, but is still a bit sceptical to the whole thing while Andraz is.. Well almost excited? They're both such great friends and Andraz' reaction was gold really! And poor Bill who could just stand there not knowing what they said.
Hmm, I'm really curious about what's going to happen now, I wonder if they'll actually get away.. It seems a bit too easy, somehow, but I'm really glad Tom's friends will help him. (or you'll put in a twist where they'll betray him, but then I'll be sad haha!)
Typing on my phone is a pain, so I'll stop now, but I love this, as you know, it's so good and a new chapter always makes my day so much better. I know this will be one of those stories that I will reread over and over when it's finished, I've already read the chapters that are already posted so many times and I'm not even close to get tired of them.
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!
Author's Response: Hi! I knew you would :) I tried to keep a little confusion and mystery there, and many clues as to his identity were exposed mainly by the King's reactions and interactions with Bill. The King was never too good at keeping it a secret, hehe. Yes, Bill's intense passion to kill dogs was one of the ways he believed to make the King proud of him. Andraz didn't kill Bill in the beginning because he recognized him, and the prince's death would no doubt cause the cats to release the weapon. He was little too happy to see him again haha. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Again, thanks so much for the review. You type really well on the phone, btw, I see no typos at all lol I hope you like the last chapters too :)
Date: 09/09/14 08:54 am Title: Chapter 25
I can't imagine what could be more entertaining than torturting little jimmy xD
Oh and I'm lost, what the fuck just happen??
The king said in the beginning that anyone who wouldn't listen to orders would die with the Canid but now he just stopped everything for Bill?? ;_;
Whaaaat!
Author's Response: lol yeah. poor Jimmy, Aunt Janine is having fun with him, but kinda testing him too. You'll have to wait for next chapter is all I can say for now hehehe :D
Date: 09/08/14 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 25
:O .---.
OH MAN!
Billeam is Bill, the prince!!!! wfignaeŽban[eribnáejbn[aiwraéibfaŽr moooooooooreeee
Author's Response: More coming of course :D
Date: 09/08/14 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 25
Aww, only like one chapter left, if I recall?
Also, couple of errors: in the uncharted planet should be on* the uncharted planet. And the semicolon at the end should be a comma instead, since it's not a complete sentence.
Author's Response: Hi!! Thanks. Fixed :D Maybe a little more cause I cut some chapters in two hehe :)