Date: 10/17/14 03:36 pm Title: Epilogue
¡Joder! Amé tu historia. No soy buena redactando en inglés, en realidad soy pésima. Pero en comprensión lectora no tengo ningún problema. Realmente tienes muy buena imaginación, redacción y forma de abordar un tema.
Si pudiera elegir un bando, sería el felino.Saludos.
P.D : Dejarte el comentario en español fue malicioso de mi parte, además de que soy una floja.
Author's Response: Hola!!! Qué bueno que te gustó. Mi primer idioma es español asi que todo bien jaja. Gracias por el comentario. Mizukychan ya la está traduciendo al español en thficcion.com, a lo mejor ya sabes :) A mi me encantan los gatos, nada en contra de los perros, pero sip, prefiero los gatos. Son tan lindos!!! :3
Date: 09/22/14 04:10 pm Title: Epilogue
I love this kind of fics. I've been so busy and tired later that reading this story was a wave of energy. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review! I'm really happy that my story made it better :D
Date: 09/20/14 03:00 pm Title: Epilogue
Love this fic, really enjoyed it :)
Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 09/19/14 10:35 am Title: Epilogue
Wait, was I part of the reason you extended the epilogue? o.o or did I understand you wrong? Either way I'm so, so happy you did because I don't know what I would have done with myself if you hadn't let us know what happened, I would probably be sitting in my corner, in the dark, crying my eyes out haha :D
Once again, thank you so much for this story, I've read this epilogue like five times already. I'm so happy! And I'm so glad that you liked my reviews, I only leave those long rambling ones when I really, really love something so feel special haha! :D
Author's Response: Hi. Yes you were, actually. My beta reader can confirm, haha. But like I said, and if I'm truly honest, I rage with unhappy, vague, tragic endings myself, so why would I do that to you guys? It's like I'm contradicting my principles lol. I love your reviews, I read them many times too, just to feel better haha. I start the day, back at work, and then some coffee and Zarlina's review and the day is already better. :D Thanks for rereading. Now I can ask you some essay questions...what is the first sign we see in Billeam that tells us he might have feelings for Tomek but refuses to acknowledge it? The moment when he realizes he's in love with Tomek, and the moment when he finally lets go of his Felid pride and follow his heart? hehehehe tricky...but I'm sure you know the answers. Thanks again for making my day! :*
Date: 09/19/14 03:38 am Title: Epilogue
Haha, cute :3 awww now they get their own planet CatDog :P
Author's Response: Heheheh yeah, a whole new planet. No cat/dog intolerance allowed. :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/18/14 09:00 pm Title: Epilogue
Ok for a second I thought that they were going to have gone through some wormhole thing and come here to the normal world and it was them but in human bodies being Tokio Hotel.... idk did that make sense?
Anyway, WOHOOOOOO, I can't believe it's finished. Its over. I'm crying :'( Can it just go on forever with Billeam and Tomek fucking and maybe Giorgi and Gustaf too? LOL. God, I really loved this story so much. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed getting those emails announcing that you'd updated and then enjoying reading it even more! I have nothing but praise for you, my dear! You worked long and hard on this and it is a fucking masterpiece, at least to me :) I'm really happy it got featured at one point or I would've been really mad and contacted the admins right away to demand it to be done! And I'm really happy you didn't leave me on a cliffhanger but I guess I would've thought what I said at the beginning. And I'll say it one more time - this story had everything - action, suspense, adventure, romance, even like political views, and good writing. Most of all it had Bill/Tom. That is wear my heart is and will always be when it comes to this fandom.... Man, I don't want to stop typing because then it will really be over :( Thank you so, so, so, so much for writing this and for sharing this! I do hope to see you again sometime soon! I will be the first to squeal and jump up and down and clap my hands! Thanks again, dear :* You are wonderful :)
Author's Response: Hi!! Heheeh I did have to end with something including TH, but then the ending would seen like Demon's, so I just made a little reference to the band in Jimmy's world haha. I can't believe it's finished either, I don't know what to do now lol. Thank you so so much for all your nice comments. I really love them and appreciate that you tell me some more deep thought about what the story means to you. I like writing because it's like a hobby, it distracts me, but I also love like that it gives back with comments like this. So thank you. And thanks for getting me featured *kiss* I know you had something to do with it. I hate sad or inconclusive endings myself, so I had to give this story a happy ending too, even if at first I had the idea to leave it a mystery. But you guys changed my mind hah. I don't know if I'll write anything any time soon, but I do write when I'm bored and stuff so who knows? Maybe I'll surprise you :D Thanks again for reading and for leaving such heartwarming, inspiring comments. Love you. :*
Date: 09/18/14 10:19 am Title: Epilogue
Lol great ending. Leaves room for a whole world of stories to come. But Jimmy sure had a change in attitude. I smiled at the signing scene in the mall.
Author's Response: :D Thanks. Yeah, everything after that it's all an analogy for twincest. Jimmy at the mall, and then Giorgi and Gustaf commenting about it haha. :D It's a TH fic so I had to put it there :)
Date: 09/18/14 09:15 am Title: Epilogue
It already ended :'( anyway great story...one of my most fav btw,I know I'll read it many times again....atleast my fav parts anyway ;) Will you be writing another fic soon?? I really hope you do cuz i really like your fics...I've also read NEXUS and Demon and absolutely loved them! ^_^
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much! I'm really happy that you liked it. I don't know if I'll write something soon, it all depends on my mood, I guess. I do have some plot ideas, though, but I still need to develop them hehe I'm glad you enjoyed the other stories too :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/18/14 02:02 am Title: Epilogue
(reply) Hehe, yes it is!
Ooh, and one more little thing. And this isn't an error; it's just a suggestion for tone. When the principal's talking about the kid with Neurofibromatosis, maybe change "kid" to "child". It just sounds more professional that way.
(edit: Ah, oops, and you still have it saying "went next to them" instead of "went over to them", but now I'm kind of just nit-picking. *blush*)
Author's Response: Oops I missed that! Fixed. And of course you're right, child sounds more professional :) Thanks!! Anything to make the story even better :D
Date: 09/18/14 12:56 am Title: Epilogue
Cute story! Fun too!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Date: 09/18/14 12:13 am Title: Epilogue
Okay, here we go =P
"behave so good" should be "behave so well"
"went next to them with a happy face" would be better phrased as "went over to them with a pleased expression"
"that you don’t really have him hostage" would probably be clearer adding the word "dogs" between "you" and "don't"
"After the first time when they almost got caught," should be rephrased as "After the first time they had almost gotten caught," to make it more obvious that it's in the past.
Aaaaaand, last but not least, "a control" should just be "control".
The end! It's always fabulous to read your stories :D
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks!! Fixed. Whew I'm glad I saw this before I went to sleep. My English still kinda sucks -__- but hey, att least my grammar is better, yes?? :D
Date: 09/17/14 10:34 pm Title: Epilogue
I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU FOR THIS ENDING! THANK YOU!
*takes a deep breath*
I can honestly say that I was seriously upset when I read last chapter, which is why I never left a review on it, I tried so many times but I couldn't come up with anything to say because I was so worried what would happen.
I loved it though, it was great and I loved that Bill got a friend with him and Giorgi's jealousy was cute really.
Okay, I'm gonna ramble a lot now, just bare with me and let's hope you'll understand something.
FIRST! Thank you for mentioning me in the chapter notes! I WAS SMILING LIKE A MORON! (I still am, actually)
This story have been so special to me, the first few chapters I wasn't sure what I thought of it, because there were so many words I didn't understand and it was all very confusing, but for some reason I will never be able to explain I kept reading, which is so rare because if a story don't catch my full interest from first chapter I just don't keep reading, but I somehow liked the feeling I got when reading, so I decided to keep reading. Then when they got into that arena thingy, then I was hooked. Then you had me, and after that I've been walking around waiting impatiently for every single chapter, always wanting more than you gave me because it was just so damn good.
And it just got better and better and you know how excited I've been, waiting for this has been even more difficult than waiting for THTV, new songs, you name it, because THIS IS JUST SOMETHING I COULDN'T PREDICT! What would happen next? Would they finally get along? Would Billeam ever love Tomek back? Would they leave the planet? Would the cats kill all the dogs and would they never see each other again? Would they die together? Would they escape?
Always new questions, and THAT is how you keep me interested. Most stories are SO PREDICTABLE, like you KNOW you will get that happy ending sooner or later, but with this.. I never stopped worrying, and I was praying for a happy ending because I fell in love with your characters.
I hope you're not bored yet, because I'm not quite done.
Then we got the last chapter, and I was like... NO!! She can't DO THIS TO ME, and when I started reading... Okay, one thing at time. YAY JIMMY! This is after all a story about him learning to accept others, even though I often forgot about that part, but I'm proud over him.
Then you said no one knew what happened to them and I was like... "will she really leave us like this? REALLY?! Nooooo" BUT NO YOU DIDN'T AND NOW WE'RE BACK TO THAT I LOVE YOU FOR GIVING ME THIS BEAUTIFUL ENDING! I'M SOBBING!
Sorry, I'm super tired, it's 4:30 in the morning here and I'm high on caffeine and sugar.
Anyways, they're together! Oh my god woman, THANK YOU! They're together and sure they might not be 100% safe but I know they will work it out because they're all smart and they can take care of themselves.
Jeez, I'm just... oh my, so many feelings.
The bickering between Giorgi and Gustaf is very cute, I bet they'll be good friends when they've gotten used to the idea, and I smiled so big at the last few lines. Seriously, I don't know if I should cry or laugh or just hug something because this is so perfect.
THANK YOU for this amazing story, thank you so, so much. I love it, it's honestly one of the best ones I've ever read and I know I will read it so many times. I'm actually crying a little, that's how happy I am over this ending, it's just perfect. I'm really sad it's over though. What am I supposed to look forward to now?
I loved this so much, I can't even find enough words to describe it.
THANK YOU for the amazing characters, the amazing chapters, the amazing story... thank you so much!
*forces herself to go back to her corner and stop rambling because she probably sound completely insane*
Author's Response: Aww thanks so much. :') *sniff* You have no idea how good all your reviews made me feel about my writing, specially because I'm always so self-conscious about it. This review is the longest I've had and I just LOVE it :) I am never bored, not at all. I am so glad I could keep you guessing and entertained at the same time. You have to know, that all your enthusiasm about the story made me feel bad that I was going to leave it hanging like that, really evil, I know, but I felt like I couldn't let you down, so I had to write a an extension to the epilogue, and I like it much better now to be honest :) I couldn't say anything before because I didn't want to spoil it, and many times I almost did :) Anyway, I hope all your questions got answered. Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me what you think of this story, for all the awesome, inspiring, encouraging comments. You made me feel addicted to your reviews hehe. Sending you lots of love, hugs, and kisses to you :*
Date: 09/17/14 10:30 pm Title: Epilogue
Lol, ohhhh, you changed the ending to that, hehe. Well, I *did* sort of prefer the "damn dog/sourpuss" ending to be y'know... said by the characters it was in the original, but if you're happier with this.. ^^
Just wanted to get that quick observance in before going over it with my beta comb, lol.
Author's Response: Yeah, hehe, I had to end it happy, I'm a sucker for happy endings too XD. I felt the original sounded odd with the new ending, but...the damn dog/sourpuss had to stay though. :)
Date: 09/17/14 08:28 am Title: Chapter 27
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!
Author's Response: XD I'll post the epilogue tonight :)
Date: 09/16/14 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 27
Yeah ... The story kind of reminds me of romeo and juliet. I just hope it wont end like that story ...
I hope you have a happy end for us (and it would make the most sense because of jimmy and his lecture about beeing not nice to different people) - maybe even with the felids und canids befriended? Or at least not that much of enemies anymore.
I'm happy when I can read the epiloge ^^
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story and I hope you like the epilogue :D
Date: 09/16/14 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 26
Its a good idea to just pretend giorgi is the prince.
Just there is one fault - you showed Bills sight, when he got from the first (or second?) fight back to the ship. There was the king and the "prince". Also when Bill was imprisoned, giorgi was the "prince" and the king his "dad". So there is a fault, that make this a bit ..., yeah, I dont know. But the Idea was really great!
Author's Response: Bill is going along with Giorgi's, or the fake Felid prince's facade. Even if he knows he is the real prince, nobody else knows, because it's the Kings wishes. Only a few selected characters like his father, the king, his mother, and Giorgi himself know Bill's identity.
Date: 09/16/14 11:46 am Title: Chapter 21
Yeay, I'm glad that Andraz is alive. Maybe Bill new, what he is doing, and that he didnt kill andraz ...
I'm just a bit confused. I mean, the canids that found tom - they saw bill and they were hit by tom, so what did they say to that? and how could they come back, since just one ship was left (and it seems like just one person can go in this ships)
Hmm ... I would've liked it, if you had wrote more about there.
And now ... I wish Tom good luck T,T
Author's Response: Tom's ship was there too and it was functional, it just needed fuel, so there are two ways he could get out of there. The other Canid ship transferred some fuel to Tomek's ship, and since they already located Tomek, one ship could go back and call for backup. :) I guess some things I don't explain because I think perhaps it's something that the reader can infer about what happened, but maybe I should write a little more, yeah.
Date: 09/16/14 11:01 am Title: Chapter 20
That chapter makes me really sad :( Toms body is badly wounded and he had to let go of bill. and still he didnt got his kiss :((((
Date: 09/16/14 10:37 am Title: Chapter 19
Awww, now they had sex and still bill didnt kiss tom. Poor guy, hope he will get his kiss soon.
Date: 09/16/14 06:30 am Title: Chapter 15
Poor poor Tom ... I think Bill wont be happy about these words, I hope it wont be to worse for Tom :(