Date: 07/14/14 12:09 am Title: Chapter 10
Amazing chapter! Only thing I'm wondering is how they are going to talk in the future if they don't speak the same language o_O
Some sort of gadget maybe? :o
Author's Response: Thanks! Oh that will be revealed in later chapters hehe ;D
Date: 07/13/14 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 10
Damn. I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 07/13/14 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh I love it! You just created instant chemistry between them! I love the conflict between them and how they bicker back and forth! I love this story more and more all the time *sighs happily* Danke for this wonderful, exciting, beautiful, amazing story:)
Author's Response: Thank you! Really happy that my story makes you happy. I had a lot of fun writing these chapters so I can't wait for you guys to read them and have some fun too :D
Date: 07/07/14 07:16 am Title: Chapter 9
Every time I see that you've updated I kind of feel like everything else in the world can wait, there's a new chapter and it has to be read, then I always end up forcing myself to calm down, make a nice cup of tea and enjoy it, because a story like this deserves to be enjoyed to the max and not read while doing something that can interrupt. Like, I usually read when I'm waiting for the bus or something similar, I rarely have the time to read during my days because I'm always so busy, so waiting for the bus and while on the bus is kind of the only times I read.
Except when it comes to this story, I don't want to read it in a rush, I want to read and enjoy every word.
I don't know how you do it, getting me this excited about a story is so close to impossible... I don't think I've ever been this excited or impatient and I check the page like twenty times a day just to see if you've updated or not. What's going on with me?
Okay, sorry, I always ramble but I feel like I can't even with words describe just how much I love this story, I reread the chapters all the time, you have no idea.
To the actual review: I loved how you described the fight between Bill and the beast, it was amazingly written and I was sitting here on the edge of my couch, praying that Bill would survive. (Yeah I know it was obvious that he would, don't judge me) and it was so beautifully written it felt like I was there, watching it.
Then Tom... Oh Tom you lucky bastard. I was wondering how he would survive. And then he went back... Do you really think you can ever kill him, Tom? Come on dude, you're better than that.
I can't wait for next chapter, I want it now, if I could I would keep reading this forever. I almost regret not waiting for it to be finished before I started reading, this is the reason I never read unfinished stories, I can't stand the wait.. but gaaah I guess it'll be worth it (okay, I KNOW it will be worth it).
Sorry for my rambling, I love this, I really do, thank you so much for the update, I will impatiently sit in my corner and wait for the next one.
Brilliant chapter!
Author's Response: Omigosh! Thanks so much for this amazing review. Look at me, I'm beaming like a peacock! lol. Seriously thanks. I'm really happy to know how much you like it. I always hope my writing can spark the reader's imagination like when I read sci-fi or fantasy; I just love to be able to see scenes in my head like in a movie. So I'm glad you're able to get that feeling with my story too :) I know how it is to wait for an update, but what I hate most is unfinished stories, specially when I'm hooked. arrgh! Anyway, I won't update on Wednesday as usual because I have to make a little work trip, so next chapter will be Sunday. -__- Sorry about the wait, but after that it will be twice a week again. :D Thanks again, I'm really grateful for your comments :D
Date: 07/07/14 02:01 am Title: Chapter 9
I just started reading today and I'm already hooked.I can't wait for the next chapter! Love this story, great job on it!
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you! I'm glad you decided to read and that you're liking it. Makes me real happy. Hope you keep enjoying the rest. :D
Date: 07/07/14 12:33 am Title: Chapter 9
I nearly shit my pants man! I cant wait for more!
Author's Response: hhehe glad you like it! :D Next chapter is next Sunday, cause I'll be away a few days. :)
Date: 07/06/14 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 9
I always have a small "wtf, who are these people" moment when I read about aunt janine and jimmy haha, your writing is so captiving that we forgot that is a story told by someone xD
Poor Bill, he lost all his lives and he used to have all of them before! That is maybe why he was so brave and scareless before? Mayyybe
Huh I wish you could upload everyday so I don't go crazy wondering what is going to happen haha
Author's Response: haha yeah the "princess bride" influence in this story is the parts where the grandpa tells the story to his grandson XD He wasn't scared of death, no, but he sure was of suffering excriciating pain. I was a little evil to him in this chapter, but it had to be :/ I won't be able to update during the week cause again I'm going away for some days. But next Sunday's timely update will be here :D
Date: 07/06/14 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh Tomek you are fooling yourself. I see how this is going! And yes I am so happy when you update! I say that every time but I am :D And man this chapter was a nail biter! So good!!! When I say nail bitter I literally mean I bit my nails through it xD I love all the excitement. Its like watching an action movie because I can picture it so well but better because of your awesome writing! And yeah I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah, things are gonna get interesting haha but I had to make wait a little, you know? lol. I'm always hoping you guys read this and imagine things like in a movie so I'm glad you said that :D More to come soon!
Date: 07/03/14 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
Seriously, I feel like I'm watching a movies, so much details :D
I first thought that Bill is the prince, but now I think it might be that super good fighter? We'll see xD
Anyways I love the story, I'm glad that the updates are weekly!
Author's Response: Hi! Oh,, I see you caught up on that hehe. I'm glad you like the story, thanks for reviewing, and yeah rest assured, updates will keep on coming quickly. :D
Date: 07/03/14 06:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Ohhhhh! Man you are an expert of cliffhangers, and here I thought I'm a cruel writer, but this is worse than what I use to do to my poor readers :D
I love it though, unlike so many other stories this keeps my excitement up and I can't wait for next chapter, I need it!
Do you realise that I updated my page like twenty times last night just to see if you had updated? I've never done that before, ever. Then I had to go to bed and today when I woke up it was here! YAY!
This is brilliant, absolutely brilliant, please give us another chapter soon, I'm dying to know what will happen!
Author's Response: Thank you!! Yeah that's why the evil laugh at the beginning in the author's notes. Poor readers hehe but it's a good way to keep them reading :D I'm really really happy to know you're excited to know what happens. I enjoyed writing these coming chapters so much, so I hope the readers enjoy it as well :D New chapter soon, of course!
Date: 07/02/14 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aww look where you stopped lol
Author's Response: lol yeah, I just couldn't wait to post this chapter hahah :D
Date: 07/02/14 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 8
Holy crap!!
Author's Response: hehehe told ya about them cliffies >:)
Date: 07/02/14 10:58 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ugh too short! And a cliffhanger!!! Admit girl you're killing me! But can I say again that I love how much time and thought you've put into this? I think this is my favorite story I'm reading on here right now:)) So much and excitement and all crafted by a wonderful author:))) Update soon please!
Author's Response: hehe thank you! I was chuckling evilly as I posted this chapter, cause of the cliffhanger haha. Thanks for telling me how much you like it, I did take some time actually, but I'm glad the effort is paying off. Just knowing people are enjoying it is really nice to hear :D I'll update soon, of course.
Date: 06/30/14 09:17 am Title: Chapter 7
Yes Tom, Bill is pretty and I bet you won't be able to kill him later on. That would be so sad, if he did *sigh*
I'm as always super excited and I so hope you'll update soon, I can't wait for them to actually meet again.
Amazing chapter! Thank you so much for this story, I love it!
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thanks so much for your comments, they put a smile on my face. Next chapter coming soon of course :D
Date: 06/29/14 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh man. Too short. I'm dying of anxiousness.
Author's Response: I feel evil, leaving you with all the cliffies, but I love that you're anxious for next chapter. heheh
Date: 06/29/14 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love this story more and more every day *sighs happily* I really like where this is going. Its gonna be like the Colassium and they're gonna have to fight each other! But something will have to happen so Tomek doesn't kill him! Lol! Ugh the wait kills me every time!!! Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see whay happens!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad it's entertaining. Sorry about the cliffies, can't help it hehe, but you know you won't have to wait too long for next update! :D
Date: 06/29/14 10:38 am Title: Chapter 6
What?! Oh my god! I haven't been this excited over a story in ages, I need more, seriously NEED it! I'm so happy this story is already done written so I don't have to worry about never knowing how it will end, which is the main reason I'm reading it even though it's not finished. But man, I need more, like soon! Pretty please?
Great chapter, actually better than great, absolutely fantastic!
Author's Response: Yay, thank you so much!! Yeah, I decided to finish writing this story before posting because my writing is so sloooow. Not much writers block but I get distracted and uninspired to write easily so I didn't want to make readers wait months for an update. Anyway, I was out for a few days so that's why I didn't post earlier. I'm about to post next chapter in some minutes. :D
Date: 06/29/14 10:29 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh no! No no no! Andraz :(
This is seriously so darn good, I haven't had the time to read this until now since I got a new job and I have my own stories to write and all, but man I love this!
At least I have one more chapter to read right away, that's a huge plus!
Author's Response: Congrats on your new job! It really makes me glad to know you like my story and that you spend time to read it. Thanks a lot! :D
Date: 06/26/14 10:27 pm Title: Prologue
lol
Author's Response: :)
Date: 06/25/14 09:56 pm Title: Prologue
the princess bride part :)
i love that movie
Author's Response: Me too! It's a great movie! I just love how the boy interrupts his grandpa's reading. lol.