Date: 07/22/14 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 13
Nooooooo~!!!!!!!!!!!! Why the fuck did Jimmy have to interrupt?! Lol. Great chapter.
Author's Response: heheheh XD Like my niece. She always interrupts bedtime stories with questions. Thanks!! :D
Date: 07/22/14 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 13
Oh, and I forgot, I LOVE how you actually make them dog and cat-like. The details with things like Tom's peeing (lol) and the importance of Bill's nap are just brilliant, I really like that :)
Author's Response: You noticed!!! XD hehe yeah, they remain with cat and dog traits and conduct :D
Date: 07/22/14 03:57 pm Title: Chapter 13
Surviving...least of his troubles....how?...this just defies everything :O at least Bill doesn't want to kill tom anymore hehe. *_*
I seriously love Aunt Janine, I want an aunt like that xD
Author's Response: heheheh you'll see what I mean. Thanks, I'm glad you like that character too. I wish I knew someone like her, carefree, who sees life for what it is, and can explain stuff in easy terms. I don't think I know anyone like that in rl. Most of my relatives are so close-minded. -_-
Date: 07/22/14 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
Wow, you got such a great timing! I had just finished making a cup of my favourite tea (I drink a lot of tea... as you might have noticed), went to my couch to check my e-mail and then I decided to check THF as well, and here it is, a brand new chapter to keep me and my tea company. I'm such a happy little camper right now.
Tom... Oh my heart is breaking for him, it really is. He must feel so conflicted, confused and so angry with himself. Here he got a guy who is his clear enemy, who KILLED his best friend, and he didn't just fucking save his life (more than once) he's also falling for the damn thing. How is that fair? Poor guy :(
And Bill must be so confused as well, how is he supposed to understand what's going on? It must be so darn frustrating to not understand why an enemy would let him live, even after he tries to kill him...
Oh your poor confused guys, I feel so, so sorry for them both.
On a little off topic note, you want to know what sucks? Well I'll tell you anyway. I'm going to Norway on Saturday and will be gone until Friday, without Internet. Yep, a whole week without internet, AND THIS CHAPTER ENDS LIKE THIS AND I'M LIKE DYING! How am I ever going to survive? The first thing I'll do when I cross the land border (or whatever it's called in English) is read what I've missed on my phone.
Oh and yeah, the point in telling you this, I haven't stopped reading, if you wonder where me and my reviews have gone, I just won't have internet. I will read and review when I get back to Swedish ground (and internet lol) ^-^
Thank you for another amazing chapter, and I feel honoured for the mention in the chapter notes, so double thank you :')
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, I was anxious to post it. When it comes to Bill, I always put Tom in conflict. I just love it hahaha >:) Anyway, I decided to post during my lunch break instead of at night, so you could read it today and not tomorrow. :) I hope you have fun on your trip, but look at the bright side, when you come back you'll have 2 new chapters to read and of course I'll be anxious to know what you think :D
Date: 07/22/14 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 13
I am getting very into this :) more soon would be great.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you! I will update on Sunday :D
Date: 07/22/14 02:04 am Title: Chapter 3
Tomek is tom
Andraz is Andreas
Okay let me guess…,the prince cat is bill
And of course they will fall in love!
Haha:)
Author's Response: lol what else, but it ain't gonna be easy! First a little drama and a little bit of angst just cause I like my characters to suffer a little :P
Date: 07/21/14 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 12
I know Bill doesn't trust Tom at all, but it still broke my heart a tiny bit when he tried to shoot Tom xD
Author's Response: lol I shouldn't say much, except that was nothing haha, but you'll see what I mean XD
Date: 07/21/14 11:37 am Title: Chapter 12
Just had to tell you that I literally let out a squeal of happiness when you said you'll update on Tuesday instead. My day just became so much better, thank you!
Author's Response: You're welcome!! XD
Date: 07/21/14 08:15 am Title: Chapter 12
I actually put an alarm on this morning to read it, and I wrote a long review and the same second I pressed "submit" my internet decided to die. Yep, you should have heard my raging. So I went all "fuck it" and went back to bed.
Now I've read the chapter a second time and hopefully the internet will behave this time, so here we go!
I feel for Bill, I really do, even though I feel sorry for Tom as well who is just trying to be nice I still feel bad for Bill who doesn't understand what Tom actually wants and there's nowhere he can run, because Tom always finds him. "He exhaled a tired huff." made me feel so sorry for him, awe, little Bill.
I'm really curious what Tom will do when he comes down and dammit, I want them to start communicating and Bill to relax a little, just a tiny little bit.
I'm so curious what will happen, I need more, like right now. You know, I think we deserve an earlier update this week *nods*
Ok I'm just kidding.. or am I? No seriously, I can wait. Maybe. I DON'T KNOW! I'm not used to be addicted to a story, is it always this annoying to have to wait? I start to feel sorry for my own readers now when I know how it feels to wait for an update.
Wow, I'm rambling again... Take it as a sign of my love, I only leave long, rambling reviews when I really like something.
Am I allowed to know how many chapters there will be or is it a secret?
Great chapter! I'm going back to my corner to wait for the next one ^-^ *sits in corner with her cup of tea*
Author's Response: I'm so happy you notice every little detail, there are so many things in this story that I put here and there to make the readers feel the character's feelings, and also many things I put, little tiny clues, that may pass unnoticed or may not make sense that moment, because it will only make sense on later chapters, so I'm always happy when readers ask me about that, even if I won't say anything but let the story answer that itself. I love to know this story is keeping you entertained, so thanks for all your encouraging comments. I will make an earlier update, just cause you asked so nicely hehe, and because well, the chapter is done and I'm anxious because it's a very poignant chapter and let's face it, I'm also dying for you to read it. So, instead of Wednesday, I'll update on Tuesday? I will try updating during my lunchtime, then I think you'll be able to read it before you go to sleep :)
Date: 07/20/14 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 12
Oh, its not enough! This is like when you're very thirsty and you only get one sip of water to drink! You want a whole gallon! Please, please, please, make it a quick update! I do love this story so much. You probably get sick of hearing it xD But please *_* I love the characters you've created and its so exciting! I typically like to read stories with lots of smut, but with this... I don't even care. *Goes off skipping and smiling*
Author's Response: Thank you! I know what you mean, that's why I'm sorry about the short chapters and for the wait of course, this fic isn't rated NC17 for the violence, you know lol!! But I just couldn't rush things hehe. Anyway, I hope you're pleased with how things turned out >:)
Date: 07/18/14 07:15 am Title: Chapter 11
oh o_o
Author's Response: hehe, dun dun dun.... I just love to keep the suspense. XD
Date: 07/18/14 12:34 am Title: Chapter 11
Lol, with those last two sentences, it would sound better if "darted" was changed to "soared" and "glided" was changed to "slid".
And also, maybe: The cat gave him his venom look. Change "venom" to "venomous".
Hehe, going to save this all in a Word document once it's fully uploaded here ^^
Author's Response: Hi! You're right! Fixed!! Thanks :D I just checked the betaed chapter and you did change darted to soared, I have no idea why I didn't fix that but maybe I missed it since I keep renaming chapters every time I add something or delete something and so I have several copies of the same chapter so it's all a mess lol XD
Date: 07/18/14 12:03 am Title: Chapter 11
Noooooooooooooooo!
Are those few inches close enough for Bill to reach or not close enough? That is the question.
Author's Response: Hhehe you always get ahead of me! Your question will be answered in next chapter :D
Date: 07/17/14 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh man!!
Author's Response: XD hehe
Date: 07/17/14 06:54 am Title: Chapter 11
So yeah, this morning I was had this dilemma, read on the bus on my way to work or save it until I got home, first waiting won because you know, I want to enjoy it as much as I can, but now I'm on my way home and I couldn't wait any longer, so I read it anyway and now I'm trying to write a review on a very shaky bus, so eh, if any weird random words or mistakes I blame that, kai?
To the actual review:
I love the way Tom tries so hard to communicate, even though Bill might think he looks and sounds like an idiot I find it very cute, and how he could sense things that Bill couldn't by walking was brilliant, I liked that a lot.
Uh oh the end!! How am I supposed to survive until Sunday to know what will happen? Or actually, in my time zone it will probably be early Monday morning even... I might put an alarm on, if I'm not too tired. See how desperate I am? I've never been this desperate to know what will happen in a story before...
This is so good though, I will most likely read this chapter a bunch of times while waiting for the next one. Did you know that I read the last one seven times in total? No? Well I did. So darn good! I'm in love!
Okay I'm gonna leave you alone now, I could go on forever though, I can never tell you enough how much I love this.
Brilliant chapter! I'll impatiently wait in my corner for next one *sits in corner*
Author's Response: XD Thanks! As usual I'm smiling from ear to ear as I read your review. I have some very special chapters coming up that I can't wait for you to read lol. I have a feeling you'll enjoy those too :D I'll dedicate them to you, cause I just love your enthusiasm for my story :D
Date: 07/17/14 12:55 am Title: Chapter 11
AGGGHHH!!!! WHY??? Fuckin' cliffhanger! Ahem, anyways, just had a little fit, but I do that every time you update anyways xD And, oh, I am loving the chemistry between them. Even as they are at odds, I can feel the connection, even if its just lustful right now. Hahaha, Bill's triggering Tom's mating instincts all right xD And you know yours truly will be anxiously awaiting the next update :)
Author's Response: hehehe >:) Thank you!! Yeah poor Tom. I always make him suffer in my stories. These next chapters are gonna be tough for him muahaha.
Date: 07/14/14 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
zarlina got me curios with her tweets about this fic and i must say im happy she made me read it, its really good :) will be waiting for an update :)
Author's Response: aww really? heheh gosh. I'm so happy. :) Glad you became curious then, hope you enjoy as well :D
Date: 07/14/14 07:21 am Title: Chapter 10
Just realised how much I ramble in my reviews, and how many times I use the word "amazing"... well, guess that shows how much I love this story, right?
Author's Response: No, it's great! I love reviews like this. They make my whole day, honestly :D I'm really happy that you tell me that you love my story and I can never get enough of it. XD
Date: 07/14/14 06:37 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh oh oh! I woke up this morning, saw this and got so excited I was literally shaking. But I was also starving so I had to choose between reading immediately or make food, then I realised I wouldn't be able to enjoy it fully while being hungry so I made some nice tea and a sandwich and sat down to enjoy the chapter together with my breakfast. Could I've started my day in a better way? I don't think so.
To the chapter!
I loved how Tom used his last shot on Bill, that was so... I don't know, sweet doesn't feel like the right word, more like brave because he couldn't know what would happen, and now he's in real trouble if something happens.
The way Bill reacted was great, I was worried you would be one of those writers who made it all happy and cute because omg the dog saved my life he must be a nice person and blah blah, but nope, I'm pleasantly surprised and oh so happy that you're still keeping it realistic, thank you!
How you write other languages in italic is brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I love it, and I loved how Tom kept talking even though Bill didn't understand him, and Also I love the names you've given them. Even though I'm too lazy to type Tomek and Billeam I really like how you've made the names suit the universe, it's amazing.
And we finally got to see some from Bill's pov! It was amazing as well, to see how he's thinking, and that he's planning to be good to gain Tom's trust, that was just brilliant.
I don't know what to say, I feel like I can't tell you enough how much I love this, no words are good enough. I just want you to know that when I see an update I literally start shaking of excitement, this is so good, the best story I've ever read on this page and I will impatiently wait for the next update. Once again, thank you so much for this, and brilliant chapter!
(I wrote this on my phone so if any weird mistakes I blame autocorrect)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! You know, I usually post and hope people read, I'm content just to see the number of reads increase and with imagining readers enjoying it and how they react to each scene, but now I'm posting and anxiously waiting to know what you think haha. I really love your comments on my story. Thanks so much! :D
Date: 07/14/14 12:15 am Title: Chapter 10
hehe, reading this in its entirety now. I love it! (Again!)
Author's Response: Hi!! Yay!!! Glad to see you here :D I still can't thank you enough for your wonderful help betaing. If you see something different in the story it's cause as usual I edited stuff before I post. It's like every time I read my own stuff again I edit something, so I never stop editing. It's a bad habit and I gotta stop lol, but I'm taking full blame for any mistakes left, though. hehehe :D